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eh...
Im a regular boring chick
that likes to read write
and mess around on the computer
hostility is the best indicator!
So be skeptical when you start to read.
And Honest...
and everyone should give me kudos
so I can have a million Points
and rule the whole Testriffic site HAHAHAHAHA!!!!
do it. :D

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On April 15th 2008 JusthisM0nster Said :

Thanks for all the support and feedback, new posts ;).
On March 1st 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :

Hey~ so I know you like giving negative feedback. I do wonder If there are any poems that you would like just as an expression. Your poems aren't horrible. I certainly wouldn't call them "lame" I know some people get too carried away, and not everyone has talent. Still I'd rather encourage their writing, rather then discourage them by calling they're poems "lame" Like my Lines poem. I'm not exactly the sappy let's be happy type either. It does affect me when all you say is "it's kinda lame" I would much rather you go further. Like this is so fucking lame because.... and name a thousand reasons if you wish. It's not very constructive without all the reasons.
On March 1st 2008 goodgurl8504 Said :

And one other thing, I completely agree with the "criticizing" of the poetry... I prefer calling it balanced feedback, but yeah haha... But if you do ever happen to comment on my work again, I prefer relevant criticism... Too long, not really relevant, not really criticism either, but yeah, whatever... Just thought I'd add something a bit more on the serious side, because I'm not a serious person until it comes to my poetry... And left what feedback I could think of on your poems... Hope it helps!
On February 29th 2008 goodgurl8504 Said :

3 lines eh? That beats the 2 lines I figured people would read as far as... Maybe next someone will read 4 lines, that would be too crazy though, I don't know that I could handle that... hahaha!
On February 29th 2008 adammckiel2000 Said :

good enough reason lol
On February 29th 2008 adammckiel2000 Said :

yea no worries i still dont get the girlfriend comment though
On February 29th 2008 adammckiel2000 Said :

read them...and left a bit of feedback
On February 28th 2008 sixtiesdoll Said :

thanks for the lovely comment~ :)
On February 28th 2008 numbbbb0z Said :

Used, abused, confused, construed, misused, un-appreciated, emotion-filled, heartfelt, and basically a human journal of the arts :)