I am a little bit of lonliness mixed with confusion .. in a land of desire looking for the one that can spark a midnight burning fire
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On August 22nd 2007 stics917 Said :
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can you please read my poems shattered and despite all you see and tell me what you think of them thanks
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On April 7th 2007 Lookin4TruLuv Said :
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I like that you give a very honest opinion. I would love for you to check out my poems and let me know what you think. :)
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On March 25th 2007 imagitu95 Said :
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2 new poems...youll notice them...check'em out...
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On January 19th 2007 lhamoface Said :
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thnx for the comment..whens ur b-day??
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On January 18th 2007 quaizzi Said :
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Thanks for all the comments on my poems, not too many people will actually take the time to read them, they just see that there are 50 poems read and thumbs up the first one and move on
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On January 18th 2007 hackerlord Said :
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thanx for the thumbs up and yes i created every bit of that for a program.. and plus everything was made in Photoshop CS2
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On January 18th 2007 Ilovepeaches Said :
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you can mess with that poem all you want, I like the constructive critism. When I click to post is messes up my spacing! It's so annoying.
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On January 17th 2007 imagitu95 Said :
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that new one isnt really bout anything....its just emotions coming out, and i just found a typo in it...damnit!...can you go back and rethumb it for me please......its in the second to last line, its supposed to be "Fall" not "fell"
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On January 17th 2007 quaizzi Said :
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Awesome poems
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On January 17th 2007 Ilovepeaches Said :
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I made a new.ish one, The spacing still doesn't work. I changed the poem a little too, you should check it out.
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On January 17th 2007 Ilovepeaches Said :
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Hey thanks for the comments. On that one poem I tried to space between lines but when I would click to post it it didn't work :( I appreciate it though, I actually wrote that a while back and I've been doing a lot better lately.
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On January 17th 2007 Ekahnicole Said :
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thank you for the compliment and critique :]] hope ur having a good night
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On January 16th 2007 NisaNicole Said :
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lol thanks. everyone asks me how long have I been writing, and i started like two weeks ago, and they r like =0 lol but thank you i like ur stuff too
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On January 16th 2007 juliehas4kids Said :
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Thanx for your opinion :)
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