Why, hello there :]. Welcome to mah little page thing, if you rate my poems and stuff please leave some critique or tell me what you think of it. :]
A little about myself:
I like to write and I can be kind of violent. I'm a pretty complicated person and I like confusong people. I see myself as unique and I love that people love my style. In my mind, I'm unique. No; I don't like cliques. No; I don't judge from first looks or impressions. Yes; I get pissed off easily. Yes; I seem bipolar at times.
So what it do?
I dunno anymore..
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On April 1st 2008 Jermie6363 Said :
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To all my fans and my friends that love to read my story poems. these two new story poems may be my last im going to go back to writing love poems and about life. i said (maybe) dont be sad.Thanks to all that show love to my poetry. A Fathers Justice and A Suicide and to all my new friends if you have not read A Box Full Of Secrets you will love it like the rest of my friends and fans.Thanks and mutch love to all*Jermie*
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On February 21st 2008 tyiqoqibfiobao Said :
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new poem ode to keri http://www.testriffic.com/poem/tyiqoqibfiobao/135414 would love feed back on it its a gift for my friend and i want to make sure its good for i give it to her thanks
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On February 20th 2008 pjjustin Said :
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hey thanks alot for all the support and for the pic comment lol !
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On February 19th 2008 pjjustin Said :
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hey whats up just wanted to let you know that i've got several new ones up if you'd like to check them out thanks!
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On February 11th 2008 NeverDeath Said :
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Hi thx for the rate on the joke i appreciate it
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On January 18th 2008 pjjustin Said :
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yeah i know what you mean i pretty much hate it what its all about i miss angry funny rap like old eminem but not this gangsta i'ma kill a nigga shit that's just crazy that people like that, i'm all about true music human made sound with feeling that grips you and holds you in thought something that hits you in the heart and uplifts you, and i think thats what i try to do with my poetry something someone can feel!
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On January 18th 2008 numbbbb0z Said :
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It's kinda hard not to, dear ;) Though I generally agree. Urrrgg. Lack of originality in all mediums is dissappointing. Continue away!
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On January 18th 2008 pjjustin Said :
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oh hellz yes i like you you know what your talking about! this new shit just about makes my ears bleed when i hear people listen to it, the grunge needs to make a come back!
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On January 18th 2008 pjjustin Said :
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oh hell yeah personally though i'm a Pearl Jam fanatic but other than that i just over all love the 90's rock i'll take some grunge before any of this new stuff
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On January 18th 2008 numbbbb0z Said :
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Oh? Hm, lemme show you something: http://www.testriffic.com/poem/numbbbb0z/130168 / http://www.testriffic.com/poem/numbbbb0z/87834 / http://www.testriffic.com/poem/numbbbb0z/115000 / It's impossible for either of ya to say "No one does this" when you haven't met the arts of everyone in the world. But hmm.
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On January 18th 2008 pjjustin Said :
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very very very well spoken and i would have to agree i think that i'll definitly continue my "quest" of breathing new life into poetry, and ya know the grunge was my absolute favorite period!
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On January 18th 2008 pjjustin Said :
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well thanks again, and i think thats great that you jump around the way you do that's almost the only way you can start poetry just jumping in with both feet until you find what works, i'd like to see myself as the grunge movement of poetry what i means is i retain some conventional ways but at the same time i set myself apart from everything else, i just wanted to change the way people feel about writing poetry
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On January 18th 2008 numbbbb0z Said :
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"well i think its just that every style now days has been done" - How wrong you are, good sir! Everyone today just rather copy everyone else's because it's easier to do, lazyasses. :)
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On January 18th 2008 pjjustin Said :
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well i think its just that every style now days has been done, so just took a risk at creating my own and i think it works for me all you have to do is just find a style you can create and make it for yourself when you have nothing to lose then really you've got it all to take
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On January 18th 2008 pjjustin Said :
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basically everything i'd have to say the overall arrangement and the words the poems you write flow really well, and thanks i'm all about out of the ordinary writing i try not to fall in the trap of repeating my style which kinda makes my style lol i feel if i leave a reader guessing sometimes then i can surprise them the next time
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