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On September 18th 2007 cassnorton Said :

poems check 'em please
On September 15th 2007 XtranquillityX Said :

Thanx for rating and commenting on my jokes. I left ya a lil response to your comment on the Koala and the Hooker :D
On September 14th 2007 skslilmama Said :

well u greatly deserve that comment, i hope u get more
On September 13th 2007 scampbell1884 Said :

I will send you a friend request. Maybe that will help. :)
On September 13th 2007 scampbell1884 Said :

Hey, just thought I would drop by and say thanks for commenting on my prose. I appreciate the honest feedback. Check me on myspace sometime http://www.myspace.com/zephystarflower
On September 12th 2007 Dax79 Said :

I read some of your poems and rated them. It's nice to read something outside of teenage angst, not that some of the poems about just that aren't any good, but yours are something different and I like that.
On August 28th 2007 NisaNicole Said :

the other comment got cut off. but anyways yeah I commented/rated some of your things. [=
On August 28th 2007 NisaNicole Said :

Thanks! I
On December 16th 2006 hotpants21 Said :

thanks for all your comments. when you said i'd be good at lyrics, i actually have 3 of them posted. i gave song writing a whirl, it didn't last long. but i have 3 that were decent. wish i could, new life, and banging on the walls are the ones that are lyrics. i don't know which ones you've already read.
On December 16th 2006 hotpants21 Said :

thanks for the feedback on my poem. i really appreciate it :)
On December 16th 2006 additional001 Said :

I'll address this since you decided to blast me. You post on MY profile, "go take a look please... and tell me what you think.... thx... laterZ" I didn't attack you personally in my comments I just simply stated what I thought and not in a rude way either. It's not like I was just leaving negative comments either. I gave credit where I felt credit was due and tried to offer you real world constructive criticism if you want others to take your work more serious. I'm not worried about your childish threats or your complete lack of respect for you elders by using profanity. Everyone else who sees this from now own will know what you and your work is about. Best of luck to you on dealing with that rage, anger, and ill temperance.
On December 15th 2006 williamobrien Said :

ok ass hole... thx for the critisizm and all.... butim not changing my poems for anyone.... i wrote tem the way they are for a reason..... and instead of jumping to conculsions about MY ART WORK... you should try asking questions instead of concling that you know what i mean in once again,,, MY ART WORK!!!!!!! so whay dont you just fuck off and kiss my white ASS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! dont bother me any more.... or this 16 year old is gonna........ you kow what.... no... your not worth my time... nor my hatred..... and yes it is a bad thing to harbor..... thats why i write these poems tha i write ... to let them all out...... and if you dont like them....... then DONT READ THEM!!! its that simple.... oh and i didnt appreciate alot of the things you said!!! so once more.... FUCK OFF!!!!!
On December 14th 2006 williamobrien Said :

hey i posted yet another poem...... go take a look please... and tell me what you think.... thx... laterZ
On December 9th 2006 williamobrien Said :

hey ... i put up a new poem!! go take a look!!!
On December 5th 2006 williamobrien Said :

thx..... ill read a few of yours... but theres to many.. i may eventually get to read them all but im in a hurry now... so ill TTYL...