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LokiSeto

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About Me
  I'm pretty creative in everything I do and I have some of the most far out ideas. Now I'm mostly the odd guy at a party or the ninja that says nothing and just floats about from crowd to crowd. Get to know me and you might find one of that last few romantics of this world. Go ahead and comment about anything even if you disagree. I love hard critics but not too hard you know. I also hate with alot of passion paragraphs of words that people call "stories"... When in reality it is utter crap. A story has a beginning, middle, and end. It isn't one paragraph, has somewhat correct spelling (should be near perfect with a spell checker), proper grammer, and every sentence doesn't begin with "I", "He", "They", or "She". ****EDIT!**** BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH BLAH!****EDIT!**** I'M BACK! And I got some new stories and continuing to write. There isn't going to big influx of stories but please enjoy them!******EDIT!***** I am willing to teach and help people along in their writing. Just message me and I'll try and get back to you.
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  Nanaimo, BC, Canada
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I got bored... Enjoy!


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On August 11th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :

Do you mind if you could check out my latest story "Teardrops on My Guitar?" I need some feedback. Honest feedback, cuz I'm trying to improve. If not, it's cool, I don't mind. Appreciate it! Thanx in advance though.
On July 21st 2008 wannahug13 Said :

Sequerrian Pt. 7 is out if you would like to check it out!! ;)
On July 19th 2008 Calypso32 Said :

oh, my mistake, I rated Isolation by choice and I liked the interesting, yet morbid twist in "the rose Kimono".
On July 18th 2008 Calypso32 Said :

I've read a selection of your Stories, and I must say, they are succinct yet their distinct flavor that you endow them with is quite refreshing. Thank you for ardently endeavoring to use good grammer/spelling, so few can really keep a grasp that there exists a state of english above substandard. Bravo and keep it up!~L
On June 12th 2008 ThisIsTheDay Said :

*pounces ya* RAWR =]
On June 8th 2008 Sunloverz Said :

oki
On June 8th 2008 Sabrigail Said :

cause i'm tired and wasn't thinking. I honostly don't know.
On June 6th 2008 Sunloverz Said :

Your welcome :) are you a author?
On June 6th 2008 Sunloverz Said :

and also knowing a heart :D
On June 6th 2008 Sunloverz Said :

your poems :) esp the fallen angel one :P
On June 6th 2008 Sunloverz Said :

your amazing :)
On June 4th 2008 avder Said :

Thank you for the constructive critisism on my story and I will try to apply it!
On June 4th 2008 Atlangel5 Said :

wow 4-5 times geez I just write and read it out loud so I can hear it. Thanks a million for the advise. I'll be sure to use it. Question how to you put your story on a link and comment it to somebody.
On June 3rd 2008 Atlangel5 Said :

okay I have taken your advise to heart and will think about the story being deep. Truth is this is kinda my life story. Not my dad being a drunk part but almost every thing else is including the love part I'm going to add later.
On June 3rd 2008 geli01 Said :

heyy can you write more of the Sara story now that your back ? I LOVED it ! :D -- thnxx