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Romance Created on 4-13-07 Views(234) Story Rating G

Jane is my best friend. We've known each other since we were 9. I have always thought of Jane as just a friend, someone who I can go to to talk about all kinds of stuff home, my problems, school and girl problems. Ever since we both have entered high school I've had these thoughts of her and she always seems to be on my mind and I cant control these thoughts of her. I know Im falling for her but I dont want to and if she doesn't like me back it'll screw everything up. It'll be weird between us and I just one it to be normal between us.

Jane isn't what a lot of girls considered to be "hot", but I dont care those big fat glasses, that stringy brown hair, her height, her weight I just dont care. She may not be beautiful but shes the one that I want.

We were walking in the park silent. The wind was blowing, the cold air hitting our face, we started talking,

"Jane do you know what to do if you like someone but your scared?"

"Scared of what?"

"Their feelings back"

"Well you'll never know unless you try."

I knew at that moment she knew I was talking about her and I was worried, worried if she actually might like me back and all my wants would be fulfilled.

"But this person shows no feelings to me except buddies"

"She probably feels the same way you do and wants you to make the first move, she wants to be more than just friends."

"Are you sure"

"Positive"

Now I was sure she loved me and nothing and no one would ever stop me from loving her and most important of all I wasn't going to stop me from loving her. It was the happiest moment of my life she loved me too it was so exciting. With my blood rushing and my heart pounding I told her,

"Jane I love You"

"Its about time, I love you too"

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On December 8th 2007 xxlittlekeyxx Said :
xxlittlekeyxx thats a good story!
On December 8th 2007 xxlittlekeyxx Said :
xxlittlekeyxx thats a good story!
On December 8th 2007 xxlittlekeyxx Said :
xxlittlekeyxx thats a good story!
On November 23rd 2007 surewynot Said :
surewynot same here, its cute def. but you need to fix the grammar. another thing, and please don't think im just criticizing, but it needs more time between the beginning and the end. as a reader, i think the end seems just a little rushed.
On May 14th 2007 BillysGirl2005 Said :
BillysGirl2005 Aww, very nice. I wish it was longer tho. hehe
On May 12th 2007 Mimiraffie Said :
Mimiraffie Very funny lol i was expecting her to say "well i dont love you" lol thanks for commenting on my story by the way :D xxxx
On April 14th 2007 cocopuff2005 Said :
cocopuff2005 i like it!
On April 13th 2007 prettyJennie1 Said :
prettyJennie1 haha, that was good. I saw many punctuation problems, but good job!
On April 13th 2007 Mrbrightside2 Said :
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Good story chas i like it