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Wrong Internet Love Pt. 2 &1
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Part One If no one has read it :D
She had just heard of it dating online seemed pretty cool. She didnt think she was pretty and was tired of rejection and when her friend trold her about this website she felt it was the answer tro everything. She could find the perfect dude and he would like her back it all just seemed to good to be true. As she turned on her computer she proceeded to think what kind of guy she would be interested in. Basdically a normal dude who had the same bizarre interests as her. She type n the website and began to create a account. Hopergirl12 was her display name. SHe then began to type in her ideal guy and within a matter of minutes she had several matches. Only one though stood out when she saw them rightguy34 and the name fit him perfectly she loved him she thought this guy was the rightguy. She couldnt believe how quick it took to set up two people who had no idea who each other was but was picked to be together by destiny. How could she have already liked a guy she had never met so quickly and felt he was the one. After only awhile they had already began talking to each other. He told her he was from new york as well and they should meet up somewhere. She didnt even think twice she said yes before she can even think about who she might even be going out with she felt she already knew everything about him. His whole life story everything just everything was perfect she wished she could have done this sooner. they had arranged a date at a bar just down the street from her house. And they had soon met up for the first time. He looked just like his picture and she knew this guy at least wasnt a prervert or somethin. The date was perfect they laughed they giggled they had so much fun. He asked her after the date if she wanted to go to the park and walk around. Of course she said yes she was going to get as much time in with him as possible. When they arrived at the park no one was around he turned and looked at her and leaned over and kissed her. She kissed him back but he4 began to get very aggresive and soon started going up her shirt she pushed his hand down and tryed to push him off he was stronger then her. She begn to yell at him telling him to get off but he wasnt about to. She just couldnt fight back hard enough cuz whatever she did to him didnt even make a mark she was getting raped. Tears just kept streaming down her cheeks as she tryed to push his hand off her mouth she tryed to scream help as loud as she could but it would not go past his sweaty palm. And before she knew it she was left in the parking lot of the park astonished and alone she had just been raped and there was nothing she could do about it rightguy34 was certainly not the right guy and hopergirl12 was definetly out of hope.
Part Two :D
She couldnt move laying there in awe, not being able to realize what had just happened to her. Tears leaded down her cheeks and blook trickled from the wound she retrieved when being pushed out of the car.
"How could he do this" she said aloud.
She finally managed to push herself up. Only to fall back down to her knees. Her hands attempting to hold back the tears but failing she did not want to cry. She pulled her cellphone out of her pocket and dialed her roommate Dana. A sleepy half-awoken voice came over,
"He...hello?"
"Dana I need help"
"Wait Lori? where the hell are you its 2 in the morning?!?"
This in a way shocked Lori she had no clue it was that late it was suprising and made her wonder how long she had been crying on the ground.
"Just come get and I'll explain everything"
"Oh...shit...I'll be there...wait where?"
"The park"
"What in the hell..."
"JUST COME GET ME" she began to get agitated.
The phone clicks. Lori wondered whether or not she would want to tell Dana what happened to her or not. She was still in shock at what had happened. Dana's car pulled up and when the door opened Dana began showering her with questions
"What the hell are you doing here at 2?!?"
"I...I was on a...Walk?" she sounded uncertain.
"A walk... you expect me to believe that shit!"..."You woke me up to comer get your dumbass because you were on a walk! tell the truth Lori this isnt fun and games." Dana was getting pissed.
Lori started to feel the pressure of what was happening. Dana was on a mission to find out what happened to her and sooner or later she was going to have to speak.
She hesitated when she spoke "I... I met this guy" she paused "...On the...Internet...we went out and had fun, a date you could say"
"Wait a minute"Dana interrupted "You went out with a guy you never met from the internet Big red flag!"
"CAN YOU LET ME FINISH!" lori wanted to tell her story
"ok ok go ahead" Dana's voice was soft
"We had fun then came here things started getting hott and heavy to quick and I tried to stop him..." Lori could no longer hold it in she began to loudly weep not being able to stop the tears as they dripped down her cheeks off her chin sprinkling her pants leaving wet spots behind. Dana looked into her deep sad eyes and saw something in them fear.
"Lori..." Dana spoke "Did he... rape you?" Lori stopped crying looked up with a serious face and nodded.
Dana was flabberghasted it took her a gew minutes but she grabbed Lori and stared at her eyes and gave her a much needed hug. They just sat there in silence not letting ago. Lori spoke,
"keep it a secret? promise?"
"Lori we habe to tell..."
"PROMISE!" Lori pulled off of Dana and glared at her
"Ok but this...this isnt right"
"I will when the times right but not now Im not ready."
Dana turned the car on and sped home. Lori fell asleep only a mile away from th epark. The next morning Lori woke to yelling
"That son of a bitch is going to pay!!" she recognized her brother Darrel's voice. She peeped around the corner to listen better, she heard Dana
"Please be quiet I promised I wouldnt tell" dana pleaded, at this Lori freaked
She stormed around the corner and started screaming
"YOU FUCKING BITCH HOW DARE YOU!"
She slapped Dana across the face
"I trusted you and you couldnt even keep it a secret not even for one day!!" she began to pound Dana's chest crying while Dana took it she continued to do it until Darrel grabbed her
"and you your not going to do a damn thing" Lori told her brother
"Lori" he spoke softly " we cant just let him go!"
"He already has there is nothing we can do!" at that moment Lori sprinted out of her house jumped in her car and sped off she wasnt sure where she was going to go but all she knew is she needed some space for the time being to think about what she was going to do.
Comments
| On June 24th 2008 sweetastic18 Said : | |
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yep...im def feeling a part 3 =) |
| On March 29th 2008 SunkistLover21 Said : | |
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ooo im starting to like this! kmp please! |
| On February 2nd 2008 FirePrncsssKai Said : | |
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dude, ur not cool...u used my name!...oh well, haha...I would've gotten the same reaction if that actually happened to me, except I would've told my older brother first off...haha, nice story!...honestly dont know why I'm laUGHING...must be the tea *shoots tea bottle* |
| On January 22nd 2008 degrassinerd Said : | |
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whoa poor girl you need a part 3 |
| On January 19th 2008 Godslildancer Said : | |
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definately needs a part 3 |
| On November 21st 2007 PunkRockNerdxX Said : | |
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It's good. Can you plese keep me posted? |
| On November 21st 2007 yorkiedude27 Said : | |
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plz plz tell me what you thnk and if i should put pt 3 up plz and tank you:D ==============chas |


