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well this is just an idea. ive never written a story before so if u have any ideas for what should happen or anything i would appreciate the advice. [hey im Amanda. I have dark brown hair with light brown eyes. Im five foot three, and its summer time baby! Im going to be in 9th grade next year. and yes, i am very nevous. I have an older sister named becky, she is 15 and im 14. Becky has dark brown, almost black hair and grey eyes with a tint of blue. We both live in Orlando, Florida in a mansion. The thing is though is that we don't go bragging about our money because we never expected to have so much. But sometimes we are judged on it. Our father, Richard, still has the dream of becoming a rockstar one day. He used to play us songs with his acoustic. and now he is always having rehearsals with people trying to start up a band. Our mother is the one that makes the money though. She owns a nair and hair Salon, and somehow we became really wealthy with all the people in florida, especailly the torists that stop by from Disney Land. So anyway heres how my day starts out. "wake up Amanda before i drag you out of bed!" came the annoyed voice of Becky. "mhmmm" i grumble dragging my feet one in front of the other going down stairs, to say good-bye to our mother that was leaving for work at 6 in the morning. "bye mom" i said. And Becky and i both gave our mom a hug goodbye. Right when i thought she was finally about to leave she added "by the way Danny is coming over and he is not allowed out of the house so sorry girls you guys will just have to make new plans for today". "why can't we leave the house?" i asked. Our mother hesitantly told us that Danny had just been diagnosed with skin cancer and that his mom was going to california to go to school and learn more about it and she would be gone for a couple of months, and it just so happened the day we wanted to do something was the day that we had to babysit him. Danny is our 4 year old little cousin, he had sandy blonde hair and bright blue eyes. Well after Becky heard the news and had cried for a while we had gotten decided to get dressed and wait for our uncle to drop off Danny so that we could look after him for the day until tomorrow morning. I was wearing a light pink shirt with the word "love" written across it and a jean skirt, with rainbow colored flip-flops. I let my hair down and it curled a little past my shoulders. Becky was wearing navy blue flip-flops, shorts, and a navy blue shirt that read "hollister". Becky's hair was in a tight ponytail. "Hey Danny!" i said as Pete (our uncle) and Danny walked through the door. "hey little man!" becky said bending down to pick up Danny and place him on her hip. "So what do you want to do today buddy?" We spent almost the whole day playing gold fish and watching Thomas The Train, and let's not forget playing tag inside our house, trying to get Danny to cooperate with us, he would just run away. Finally Danny took a nap at 2 and the whole house was quiet. Then the phone rang. "UGH!" i said the annoyance obviously in my voice. "hello?" Becky said "....""Oh, hey john""...."no we cant leave the house right now were babysitting""...."you can come but no one else""...." after becky was done giggling she said "yeah i know, but noone else". "what did he say?" i asked curiously. "He asked if he could come stop bye to see me for a little bit." "anything else?" "oh yeah and Cody is over there too. i said that only him and Cody could come over though because he has like 10 friends over there and i dont need Danny waking up again. He tuckered me out!" "OMG Codys coming!" a smile spread across my face. I have had the biggest crush on Cody for a while now and now my sister has been dating his older brother and i get to see him more often then i used too. :D. Cody had light brown hair that curls at the end just past his and and the most gorgeous brown eyes. And he has AMAZING abs. But i only knew that because all four of us went to a pool party last summer. "yeah i know how much you like him, go look in the mirror you look like a beet just thinking about him, how are you going to talk to him, especailly if i leave you two alone together. Becky said with a grin on her face. "You wouldn't!" i dared her. "oh i would and i will" and sure enough once they got there she managed to do it. Becky and John went upstairs to check up on Danny and left me there with Cody. "so...." Cody started. "i was wondering if you were doing anything saturday?" "no, actually im not" i managed to choke out. "well would you want to come to a beach party with me? im sure Becky will probably go with John, and kids from school will be there and other people and there will be food and drinks and music...." "And sand and water" i joked. He blushed a little. "yeah, of course ill go" i said smiling. That night i couldnt sleep at all i was so excited for Saturday! [well if anyone has ideas or thoughts please leave a comment]

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