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Creative Created on 4-21-07 Views(105) Story Rating G

It was the first night at sea. The cloudless sky was pitch black and a gentle breeze was wafting on the boat. It was a full moon tonight and the stars hung in the sky like crystals.

Everyone was excited at dinner-time and Maria was so excited she fell off her chair! It was a good laugh, seriously! The meal was a 3 courser. The starter was ox soup(yuck) , the main course was lobster( even bigger yuck!) and the dessert was chocolate gateau. No-one ate much for they were saving room for the midnight feast at our cabin at midnight. Everyone was coming to our party, yes everyone! Apart from the techers and the boys who nothing about it and a good job too!

At midnight, we waited til the teachers went to bed and then sent text messages round to everyone telling them it was ok to come around. In fours people got out of their cabins and stole something from the kitchens (as part of the deal, because I really couldn't be bothered nicking all that stuff!) Everyone came dressed up! They had their hair styled and everything and I looked like a scruff! I forgot to bring my GHD straightners and so my hair looked horrible so I had to tie up my hair in a bun! I was wearing a brown frayed denim mini skirt with a brown top and brown flip-flops with sequins all over them.

Once the party had got started, it was going fine until Louise plugged in the microphone to the karaoke and started shouting rude things down it causing the whole ship to wake up, including the teachers. Mr Crisp wasn't at all pleasesd with being woken up and he charged like a bull down the corridor in his pink pJ's and pink fluffy bunny slippers.

"It's Mr.Crisp! Hide!" I shouted. Immediately the music stopped and everyone hid under the beds taking the food with them apart from Louise who carried on singing down the microphone .

" WE ALL LIVE IN A YELLOW SU,BMARINE

WE DIDN'T LIKE THE COLOUR SO WE PAINTED IT GREEN......."

Mr. Crisp was nearing the cabin now but Louise carried on singing not taking any notice.

" WE DIDN'T LIKE THE COLOUR SO WE CHANGED IT TO RED

THE RED WASN'T WATERPROOF SO NOW WER ALL DEAD!

NOW WE'RE ALL DEAD SO WE PAINTED IT BLUE WE DIDN'T

LIKE THE COLOUR COZ IT SMELT LIKE POO..."

Suddenly mr.Crisp charged an entry into our cabin.

"LOUISE WHAT ARE YOU DOING IN HERE?????" shouted Mr.Crisp.

"LET ME FINISH ME SONG FIRST SIR!" she replied.

"Louise! I'm not playing games!just go to your own cabin, and don't wake me up again!"

Mr.Crisp left the room and the sound of his footsteps went further and further away.

"Now where was I?" said Louise. "O yeah, I remember!"

" SO WE CHANGED THE COLOUR SO WE PAINTED IT GREEN

AND NOW WE ALL LIVE IN A YELLOW SUBMARINE!"

Once Louise had finished , I ran over to the karaoke and unplugged the microphone straight away before she started another song.

" Louise , that's enough!" said Abbie." We'd all rather listen Greenday! Talking about music, shall we put some music on?"

" Yeah go on then," I said.

" What shall I put on?" abbie asked me.

" surprise me." I replied.

She put Sugarbabes on. Everyone was dancing.

"PUSH THE BUTTON!" everyone was singing when it got to that bit.

After we got a bit fed up and hyperactive on the Lucozade we started to prank people. Abbie crept off to the kitchens and got alive lobsters, she was breaking into people's cabins and put the lobsters in the bottom of their beds. The boys had gone to a party in Alex's cabin so all the cabins were empty. So I crept into them and put a bucket of water on top of the doors so the next person who opened it will get a bucket of water on their head.

When Mr.Crisp returned to his corridor where the boys where they were questioning them.

" Sir what was all the noise? " asked Richard.

" The girls," he muttered,"they're having a party in Portia's cabin!"

"Cool! That's party crash!" said Alex excitedly.

After about 30 mins, we were having a singing comp for the best one who can imitate Amy Lee from Evanescence, when we heard whispers coming from outside our door.

" shhhhhhhhhh!" I said."There's people outside our door! Listen!"

Everyone listened and turned down the music.

" We need to be quiet now, Dexter, Sam you nick the food! Jonathan you take the karaoke!"

"Oh no it's the boys!" sighed Clare, "They've came to party crash, what shall we do?"

" Lobsters!" April said.

"Good Idea April! any more suggestions?" I asked.

"Shake a can of coke and open it!" said maria laughing.

Everyone laughed. Then we got in our positions getting ready.

Suddenly the door burst open and they came in .

" NOW!" I shouted.

Everyone opened the cans of coke and it sprayed right in their faces and the lobsters pinched them. As soon as Alex saw the lobsters, he ran out of the room screaming like a girl and ran for Mr.Crisp. It was seriously like world war 3.

"MR .CRISP! SIR! THE GIRLS ARE TRYING TO ATTACK US WITH LOBSTERS!" he was yelling. Not only that he woke up Mr. Crisp, he woke up all the other teachers. All the teachers came stampeading into our cabin and screamed at us for trying to attack them with lobsters and for waking us up, but the boys didn't get told off for party crashing. No fair! We all were told to get to our own rooms apart from me because I got sent to the naughty room for the night because I was in charge of the lobster party and other people complained about me waking them up.

At dawn I was sent back to my room sulking. It was a very hot and sunny day and was perfect for sunbathing. After breakfast, Emma, Clare,Maria,Abbie and I arranged to go sunbathing out on the decks, but the problem was Mrs.Riley had already sat in the sunny spots.

" What shall we do?" said Clare.

"Leave it to me." I replied slyly.

" You're not going to tell Miss to move are you?" asked Abbie.

"You can't do that! She's a teacher!" cried Emma.

" I wasn't going to anyway.

" So what you going to do then?" asked Maria.

"something even better, just don't wake her up!."

We went up to the kitchens first and asked for a cup of water which the chefs very kindly gave us one each. We then went to the deck above Mrs. Riley and poured it all over her.

"AAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRRRRRGGGGGGGGGHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!" she screamed.

"WHO DID THIS? MY HAIR'S GOING CURLY!"

She jumped off her deck chair and ran off to get dry and we ran down and got her space. It was Hilarious! We were all killing ourselves laughing.

By midday we got a lovely tan, it was lunchtime. We had burger and chips. After lunch we had our first lesson. It was Geography. No-one was listening we were sending notes to each other in the lesson. In the end Mr.Watkins got all narked up that no-one was paying any attention but I said:

" calm down dear, It's a commercial! " imitating the advert from esure.com. After that he stopped shouting and stopped teaching us all these boring things and let us play games and listen to ipods. It was fun after that.

We had one of our organised activities in the late afternoon just before dinner.

We were fishing on the decks. I managed to catch 2 jelly fish and a baby dolphin but I let them go because I felt sorry for them. Poor Abbie caught nothing. Mr. Brooks gave a prize to the best fisher and guess who that was? yes ME!!

That night we sat in our cabin watching cheaper by the dozen 2, and drinking hot chocolate with marsh mallows in it. We got to the funniest bit when the boat started swaying. The wind was bashing against the portholes and the force of the wind had nearly pushed over the ship. Terrified, we all curled up in our beds, shivering, not daring to look out the window. The storm became worse and worse . and the driver had fainted in shock.

" What shall we do?" cried Clare in a frightened voice. Everyone had gone white from shock.

" Two words," I said," don't-panick!"

Suddenly everyone screamed as the ship nearly turned over, it was going to end like the titanic we just knew it.

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On April 23rd 2007 BitchyWitchyX Said :
BitchyWitchyX hahaaaaaaaaa an dats jus how louise wud act innit tho (omg i snd like catherine tate!!!!)lmao bye xxxx
On April 23rd 2007 BitchyWitchyX Said :
BitchyWitchyX omg!!!! u shud get dis published!!!! its ilerious!!!! omg da party sounded boss wiv da lobsters i luv all nit e raves (even tho i aven bn 2 non like )me mum wont let me!!!! wer doing shipwrecked now i just started chapter 6!!!! aw dis is ded fab !!!! xxxx