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Summer Love~~CHARACTERS~~ |
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How can I run away from this thing call "life"?--Chapter 7-- |
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Summer Love Chapter 18
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I ended being sick for a few days, my throat was dry and made my voice cracky. My head hurts, it feels like it's going to explode. I had the sniffles, and i used up a bunch of tissue boxes.Each of the guys checked up on me from time to time at this "sick" room where you go when you're feeling ill. When i met each of the guy, i also meant Seth, he pretended like i was still his girlfriend. I'm not sure if I still am. I refuse to speak to him, mostly because every moment i spend with him hurts me inside even more. How can he just use me like that? Like he doesn't even care about what i feel...Why does he even want to make Mark mad anyway? What had Mark ever done to him? and more importantly why do I even care?
"Hey boo, how you feeling?" I smile as i heard a familuar voice break my deep thoughts. I open my eyes and saw Mark staring down and me flashing his beautiful smile.
"Hi Mark!" i said in a cheerful tone, even though when i talk like that my throat start stinging.
"Do you feel any better?" he asked reaching out for my hand.
"Kind of, what's new?" i said holding his hand tighter.
"Not much, but there is this new girl." my smile disappear and my heart stopped. Where was he going with this?
"You don't like her do you?" my eyes beginning to waterup.
"Yeah, wait NO! Not like that, she's cool and all but i don't like her like that." he laughed. I felt alittle more relief.
"Oh, so what about her?" i curiously asked.
"She's new and everything and well, Jerry,Seth, Nick, David, and me are her only friends, so she'll probably be hanging around with us alot."
"I see, so that means I'll be seeing her alot when I'm out of this place right?" I asked wondering what she be like.
"Yeah." he replied. I attempted a small smile at him, and keep on predicting on what this girl would be like. Is she going to be one of those whores, nerd? tomboy? what if she's bi? EW. What if she's just a shy girl who i'm worrying too much about...
"Can't wait to meet her." i gave him a fake smile. He smile back and kiss my forehead.
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As more days passed by, i got better and better. When i could finally speak and think clearly I rush at my chance to get back to the guys. The fresh air outside was something i miss greatly. It felt so clean and nice, another feeling i discover ever since i came to this camp. I finally reached the steps of my cabin, I search for my keys, when i finally found them, I open the door and a huge B.O smell attacked me.
"Gross, I think i'm going to be sick again !" i screamed, covering my nose.
"ELIZABETH !" the guys tackle me with a hug and I giggled a little. When they were done giving me my welcome back hug, I open up all the windows. and sprayed the place with my most expensive perfume. Most guys don't like perfume, but this one wasn't too strong, and fake-like, it smelled really nice. So the guys won't complain about the girly smell.
"How can you guys be so messy?" i laughed, exaiming the room with disbelief.
"We're guys, DUH!" David said while making his way to his bed, if he can find it.
"Don't expect me to clean up ALL of this crap!" i nagged while trying to clean up this dump. Thee was junk food everywhere. I picked up all of the leftover food and thew it in the garbage. The guys looked and me amaze that i'm actually cleaning after their mess.
"You're actually going to clean up?" Mark asked.
"Not by myself, you guys better pick up your clothes or you won't have nothing to wear."
The rest of the morning all we did was clean. They whined and I nagged. Boys these days, everyday i'm with them I think twice about having kids.Jerry and Nick just laughed, they're just lucky i'm not in their cabin. It's kind of weird, i never clean up anything in my life before, i have people for that. I don't know, it's just that the guys make me feel like i'm needed. I heard a knock on the door and all of the guys continue what they were doing like they didn't hear it. The knocking continue. I made my way over to the door and struggle to open it, and it suddenly burst open
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eh, sorry if im not going to be updating in awhile, my laptop is jacked up and im using
parent's computer, so yeah (:
sorry if im not keeping yooh posted, if im not please comment me on
my profile and cuss me out, im kidding(:
i read all of yhur comments, yooh guys are so sweett and funny [;
Comments
| On June 30th 2008 monkey892 Said : | |
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I definately love this story, it is sweet and not liek gushy or anything. I love it. Well if you would keep Me Posted!!!!!! :]]]]]]] |
| On June 29th 2008 lonely244444 Said : | |
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KMP please! |
| On June 28th 2008 Prqt2nv Said : | |
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ayyyy. lol kmp |
| On June 28th 2008 Carey2010 Said : | |
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I defanitely love your story, and the way you write.. No spelling errors this time :) And it was nicely written :) Please keep me posted when you have the chance! Thank you! |
| On June 28th 2008 Slackee Said : | |
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KMPP! |
| On June 28th 2008 musiclover2050 Said : | |
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kmpp |
| On June 28th 2008 justthegirlxox Said : | |
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oh yay! a new person. this should be extremely fun. sarcastically speaking, of course. =D great update. kmp please. |
| On June 28th 2008 yeaitzJess Said : | |
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aww man idk how long i can wait til i go crazy from not knowing lol. i think seth mite have been the one mark beat up. and i think the new girls at the door. please keep me posted!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| On June 28th 2008 CRISSY10012 Said : | |
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please kmp!!!! |
| On June 28th 2008 CraziiChick208 Said : | |
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better not be her bitchass ex or watever he is cos he hurts her he wont have ne kids i will kill him..
kmpp! =]] |
| On June 27th 2008 MissCheerCap Said : | |
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i bet it is a girl she knew from school or something that she doesn't get along with! I can't wait to find out cause this story is like amazing!! Triple |
| On June 27th 2008 jirrith2007 Said : | |
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haha... everyone has basically said it... I wonder who this mysterious new girl is... hmm, we'll just have to wait and see :D |
| On June 27th 2008 Atlangel5 Said : | |
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omg new girl!!!!!! Who is it?!?!?!? KMP plz!!!!! I loves the story!!!!!!!! |
| On June 27th 2008 bluecat62892 Said : | |
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kmpp |
| On June 27th 2008 vegxjen Said : | |
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keep me posted =]
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| On June 27th 2008 cheerleader725 Said : | |
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nice nice!!! KMPP!!! |
| On June 27th 2008 PunkRockNerdxX Said : | |
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PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE KEEP ME POSTED LOVE YOUR STORY!!!!!!!!!! |
| On June 27th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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ohhh yeahhh i like that idea from Crazycutie7 |
| On June 27th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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please kmp but take your time. Dont worry i understand. i had problem but now i am glad it works. =] |
| On June 27th 2008 Crazycutie7 Said : | |
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please post the next chapter today! |
| On June 27th 2008 upyours911 Said : | |
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Plz kmp! |
| On June 27th 2008 Crazycutie7 Said : | |
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kmp! |


