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How can I run away from this thing call "life"?--Chapter 7--

Summer Love Chapter 15

Creative Created on 6-8-08 Views(282) Story Rating G

I think some of yooh forgot to read chapter 14, either that or it was really boring and people didn't want to comment or rate 

http://www.testriffic.com/story/xxixlovexyouxx/36613

for chapter 14 (: 

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    I rummage through my stuff, and I was surprise that I actually pack a swim suit. It was a two piece, white on the bottom, and blue and white stripes on the top. I change in the bathroom, and I put a sweatshirt over it.
    “Hurry up Elizabeth..!” The guys whined. I laughed to myself. When I open the door and David was leaning against the door, so he fell on the ground.
    “You didn’t fall on me this time.” I laughed, I jumped over him and went over to where everybody else was. I notice Mark was actually checking me out, he bit his lips and he looked really innocent. I blushed a little, I finally got that feeling when somebody can’t “keep their eyes off you”.
    “Let’s go.” I grabbed onto Seth’s arm. He looked down at me and smile. I slip on my flip-flops. Seth’s took my hand and we started to walk together as a couple. It felt so wrong holding his hand, like it wasn’t meant to be there. When we finally got to the lake, the water is, unlike other’s, it wasn’t green. It was the color of the ocean. I stood there, staring at the water while all of the guys jumped into the water, screaming like little kids.
    “Jump in loser! The water is great !” Nick screamed out at me. I looked at the water, scared. It must had been like had been like freezing!
    “That’s okay, I’m going to stay here.” before I knew it, I was pulled into the water by Seth. I fell backward into the water. I screamed because it was so unexpected of him.
    “What the f*ck!?” I yelled trying to get the water out of my throat. I gasp for air ,
    “Wasn’t that fun?” he laughed at me, I was shivering now, the water was so cold !
    “You’re so mean.” I gave him the puppy pout.
    “That isn’t going to work, you know how many time I been through that?”
    “Damn.” I grunted. He laughed at me, I stuck my tongue out and swam over the where Jerry was. I teased him a little so he would try to chase me. i wrap my legs around his waist trying to push him down into the water, but it was useless, he was too strong.
    “Stop it.” he whined, but I still knew he was having fun.
    “Look at that Seth, Elizabeth left you for Jerry.” Nick said to Seth. Jerry blushed from embarassment and Seth gave both of us a furious look. I giggled a little, he got me mad, so I’m going to make him mad too.
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   Super Short and i'm super sorry but i just wanted to get it out, and super sorry for any errors :(

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On July 13th 2008 CSLuvr Said :
my picture
uh-oh what's she gonna do?
On June 10th 2008 flutytute Said :
flutytute KMP! =) =) Hopefully next time it'll be longer! lol
On June 9th 2008 tutorgirl22 Said :
tutorgirl22 kmp
On June 9th 2008 cheerleader725 Said :
cheerleader725 cute!!!! KMPP!!!!
On June 9th 2008 vegxjen Said :
vegxjen keep me posted =]
On June 9th 2008 upyours911 Said :
upyours911 I like it, plz kmp!
On June 9th 2008 ilybaby06 Said :
ilybaby06 Short but really good! KMP please =]
On June 9th 2008 musiclover2050 Said :
musiclover2050 kmp
On June 9th 2008 justthegirlxox Said :
justthegirlxox short, but great. i don't like seth. he seems like the guy who is nice at first, but then is a total ass underneath it all. either her or mark/jerry need to just get together. i like mark, i always like the bad guys. =\ kmp please. =]
On June 8th 2008 MissCheerCap Said :
MissCheerCap amazing and funny. kmp still, don't stop ever lol
On June 8th 2008 Slackee Said :
Slackee KMP!!
On June 8th 2008 CraziiChick208 Said :
CraziiChick208 JUS KMPP!!
L0VE iT!
On June 8th 2008 TheScarletVeil Said :
TheScarletVeil kmp
On June 8th 2008 Crazycutie7 Said :
Crazycutie7 kmp
On June 8th 2008 jennaferz Said :
jennaferz hah, i love.
yeh, short. yeh, good :DDDD
she neeeeeeds to be with mark. i think. or maybe jerry.
but seth is just kinda....bland.
On June 8th 2008 xxixlovexyouxx Said :
xxixlovexyouxx yeah, again sorry for it being short, it's just im not going to be posting probably for a while,
On June 8th 2008 monkey892 Said :
monkey892 kmpppp Even though it was short I really liked it. I do hope that it works out between Mark and Elizabeth. I like Mark better than anyone else.
On June 8th 2008 Prqt2nv Said :
Prqt2nv IM very angry w/ u. u didnt kmp me posted for chpt 14 hence i couldn't read it! lol kmp
On June 8th 2008 Ashlev2008 Said :
Ashlev2008 its short but still good i am hoping it works out between her and Mark though Keep Me Posted please!!
On June 8th 2008 lonely244444 Said :
lonely244444 I wanna kno how she is going to get him mad! kmp please!
On June 8th 2008 jirrith2007 Said :
jirrith2007 it is super short. but ohs wells... I really hope she ends up w/ Jerry tho :D
On June 8th 2008 alison2468 Said :
alison2468 i like it, it was short but good, kmp