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How can I run away from this thing call "life"?--Chapter 7--

Summer Love((chapter 9))

Creative Created on 5-11-08 Views(333) Story Rating G


     "This is so f*cking boring, when are we going to ditch." I whined kicking a small rock that just happen to be nearby.
    "Now." Nick hushed and pull my arm roughly to the side. All three of us started to walk through the trees instead of the pathways.
    “Can we stop for a minute?” I begged, I had scratches on my legs and they started to sting.
    “You are so weak.” Nick laughed.
    “Please.”
    “We’re almost there so don’t worry.” Jerry said trying to persuade me to keep on walking.
    “Where are we going anyway?”
    “You’ll see.” he smiled. I soon forgot all my pain and smile greatly when I saw ..the... most... beautiful.. waterfall. The sight was just indescribable.
    “Wow, this is so pretty, how did you guys ever find it?” I was dazzle by the sight.

~~~~~Jerry’s Position~~~
    Watching Elizabeth trying to walk through the forest was pretty funny. She is just so plain adorable, sometimes I wonder if I may like her more than a friend. By the way Mark looks at her, I know she would pick him over me any day. She wouldn’t be the first.
    “Can we stop for a minute?” I heard Elizabeth beg. I smile a little she was just so cute.
    “You are so weak.” Nick laughed.
    “Please.” I could tell by her voice that she was already tired.
    “We’re almost there so don’t worry.” I persuaded.
    “Where are we going anyway?”
    “You’ll see.” I smile but I try to pull it back. I heard the water falling and the smell of the fresh water and I knew I was there. I pull some branches out of the way and what was behind there was probably the most beautiful sight any girl would die to see. I could see Elizabeth was stunned by the sight, and her eyes had that special twinkle that nobody else had.
    “Wow, this is so pretty, how did you guys ever find it?” I could hear excitement in her voice.
    “You’re such a girl.” Me and Elizabeth both looked back and saw Nick laying down on the ground trying to entertain himself.
    “Maybe because I am a girl?” Elizabeth laughed and she went back to watching the waterfall. I wonder what goes on in a girl mind when they see this kind of stuff.
    “What do you guys want to do?” I finally asked, avoiding any awkward silent.
    “Let’s stay here for awhile, it’s so refreshing here.”
    “If we‘re going to stay here, let us at least talk.”
    “What do you want to talk about?”
    “You ask me about my life back home, tell me about your life back home.”
    “Nothing interesting, I’m not in a gang, just so you know. My community is a pretty high class place. No homeless people, no gangsters, and no violent. It’s just a clean place.” I could imagine her living in a big ass mansion with her stuck-up friends. One of the “popular” girls. It must be pretty hard for her to survive here.
    “Sounds perfect, than why are you here?”
    “My stupid mom and her stupid business trip.”
“Oh, I see.” I mumbled watching her carefully as she watches the waterfall. Her eyes were watching the water come down and the fishes swimming around. I walk closer to her and place my arm around her. She took her eyes away for a second and smiled at me. One thing I love about her is that she always smells like vanilla. As time pass, Elizabeth fell asleep on my lap while we were talking. Not purposely of course, she just doze off and I didn’t want to wake her up.
“Is she asleep?” Nick whispered to me.

 

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I wonder what Nick wants?

 just so yooh knoe, Jerry, is base on a true person

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On May 31st 2008 flutytute Said :
flutytute hmm.. nick is kind of suspicious lol I don't know why to me he just is
On May 13th 2008 PunkRockNerdxX Said :
PunkRockNerdxX I love this! Please keep me posted!
On May 12th 2008 jennaferz Said :
jennaferz i dont think i like nick..
but this is awesome. kmp(:
On May 12th 2008 1LittleMissEmo Said :
1LittleMissEmo KMP
On May 11th 2008 mirandapanda72 Said :
mirandapanda72 please kmp :)
On May 11th 2008 musiclover2050 Said :
musiclover2050 kmpp
On May 11th 2008 lonely244444 Said :
lonely244444 KMP please!
On May 11th 2008 xxXrareloveXx Said :
xxXrareloveXx This is SOOO AWESOME, I Love your Writing and stories!!!! KMP!
On May 11th 2008 justthegirlxox Said :
justthegirlxox haha, we are pretty sweet. :) but okay, i want her and mark together. final. lol, they just seem so, prefectly unperfect. heh, kmp. :D
On May 11th 2008 omfgusuck12345 Said :
omfgusuck12345 ooo! kmp plzz!!??
On May 11th 2008 upyours911 Said :
upyours911 I love it, plz kmp!
On May 11th 2008 monkey892 Said :
monkey892 Jerry seems soooooooo sweet. I love it! Kmppp okay
On May 11th 2008 Crazycutie7 Said :
Crazycutie7 Awwwwww Jerry, but I still like Mark more, idk y.KMP!
On May 11th 2008 vegxjen Said :
vegxjen keep me posted =]
On May 11th 2008 Slackee Said :
Slackee Awww! It's so adorable! kmp!
On May 11th 2008 cheerleader725 Said :
cheerleader725 lol KMPP!!!
On May 11th 2008 lovesweeney4ev Said :
lovesweeney4ev kmp plz this is sooo sweet :P
On May 11th 2008 PunkRockNerdxX Said :
PunkRockNerdxX Aww how sweet please keep me posted!
On May 11th 2008 CraziiChick208 Said :
CraziiChick208 Jerry seems really sweet;i didnt knoe you had a myspace well chyea one of the best writers is goin on my page :D Kmpp?
On May 11th 2008 jirrith2007 Said :
jirrith2007 Awww... Jeery sounds so sweet!! I would give anything for a guy like him!! keep it up! :D