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Summer Love~~CHARACTERS~~ |
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How can I run away from this thing call "life"?--Chapter 7-- |
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Summer Love[[chapter 7]]
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That night I couldn’t sleep, mostly because of the guys’ snoring. I blame Mark for this, not the snoring but the reason why Seth is now my boyfriend. Damn! How bout I hate that word.. Why does Mark have to play with my feelings. First he ignores me than he kiss me than he ignores me again. Why does he have to have the worst attitude? I finally came to a conclusion…
Boys are idiot...
“Elizabeth!”I heard a hush voice.
“Mark?” I whispered acting like I was waking up.
“Go outside.” I took a glance at Seth to make sure he was sleeping. I slowly got out of my bed making sure I don’t make a sound. I walk outside with Mark, I could immediately feel the fresh cool air. We just stood there for a minute or two, He didn't bother to look me in the eye .
“You couldn’t sleep either?” I finally said breaking the awkward silence.
“Yeah, I thought about it and I’m going to tell you why I was being such an ass.” he said with a small laugh. My eyes lit up with excitement.
“Really?” I smiled.
“Yeah, but you just have to promise me one thing.”
“Sure anything.” I said impatiently.
“No pity from now on.”
“Okay! Okay! Tell me!” he laughed in amusement, but it was fairly weak. He took a deep breath and began to speak.
“ It’s just going to be short, but i really don't want to patheic. im not sure if i should tell yooh .”
“Please?” I beg taking his hand in mine and held on to it tight. I could see a small smile on his gorgeous face.
“There was this girl. First time I actually cared about.” by the way he spoke I could tell he never ever said the word “care” before and actually I’m not surprise.
“Oh..” I slurred wanting to hear the story more and more by the second.
“Yeah, so anyway, she changed. From a harmless girl to a slut. Her attitude changed, she started swearing like crazy, she started dressing like the damn slut I wish I knew she was.” He paused and took a deep breath.
“I’m sorry.” I held on to his hand tighter.
“I am too, the day I finally crack was when I saw her with another guy. Making out. There was a big ass fight with me and him. I beat the shit out of him!” He laughed and I smiled. “She totally snap and of course I was pissed off, so I punched her pretty hard and cussed her out.” I thought about yelling at him, I mean how can he hit a girl? But knew I would wake Seth and David up. Plus I want to hear more of the story.
“Continue.” I held onto his hand tighter.
“That’s how I got here, this is my punishment, if you ask me, I rather go to Juvy. So, anyway I swore to myself I would never get into this mess again.”
“That was some story.” that was all I can say, the crazy thing was that I completely trust him. My mom taught me to never trust boys, after my dad left.
“I bet I sound pretty sappy.”
“Not really.” I smiled letting go of his hand and than leaning in to him to give him a kiss. I could see the lights from our cabin lighten up so I quickly paid my attention to the door. Out came a sleepy David.
“See! You woke up David!” I punch Mark on the arm. I didn’t need to do anything he quickly play along.
“Who fucking cares! It was your damn yelling that did it anyway!” his acting was really good.
“Oh my gosh.. Stop fighting for once..” David slurred his words and rubbed his eyes.
“Sorry David.” I smiled, he looks so restless and dead right now. “I’m going to sleep, good night.”
“I’ll go to sleep too.” Mark and me walk back to our cabin making sure not to wake up Seth.
“See you in the mourning.” I whisper to Mark before I laid myself on my bed.
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im thinkin about rewriting this one?
i don't want Mark to sound too patheic
yeh so sorry for the long wait, I-hate-School
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| On July 28th 2008 anbo123 Said : | |
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morning is early mourning is grief. you not yooh |
| On June 21st 2008 yeaitzJess Said : | |
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OMG i wanther to be with mark like i said in the WAY beginning and not with seth even though i think hes a good guy. but i like MARK better |
| On May 31st 2008 flutytute Said : | |
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I'm glad that you didn't rewrite it! |
| On May 6th 2008 PsychoPyro1 Said : | |
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NO WAY!!! Do not rewrite it!!! Mark is so sweet!! Except the part about punching a girl in the face. Totally kmp!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
| On May 5th 2008 1LittleMissEmo Said : | |
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yeah yeah yeah
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| On May 5th 2008 Slackee Said : | |
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Love it! Kmp! |
| On May 5th 2008 PunkRockNerdxX Said : | |
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I like it how it is! Please keep me posted!!!!
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| On May 4th 2008 justthegirlxox Said : | |
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this stories addicting, i swear. i want mark and elizabeth to get together! haha, kmp please. |
| On May 4th 2008 lonely244444 Said : | |
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KMP plaese! |
| On May 4th 2008 vegxjen Said : | |
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keep me posted! |
| On May 4th 2008 xxXrareloveXx Said : | |
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sounds good kmp. |
| On May 4th 2008 cheerleader725 Said : | |
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I love it just the way it is!!! KMPP!!! |
| On May 4th 2008 monkey892 Said : | |
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I like it. I like Mark better though. He is sweet. |
| On May 4th 2008 upyours911 Said : | |
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I really like it! Plz kmp! |
| On May 4th 2008 mirandapanda72 Said : | |
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please kmp :) |
| On May 4th 2008 PopChile Said : | |
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no no no do NOT re-write it i like it! kmp!!! |
| On May 4th 2008 ilybaby06 Said : | |
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I love it! KMP |
| On May 4th 2008 stephjane Said : | |
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kmpp!! |
| On May 4th 2008 Patriciaxox Said : | |
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I LOVES ITT BUT YEAH i thought the thing bout seth went a lil to fast and the mark thing does sound pathetic anddd I LOVE THIS STORRRYYYY. you know what you should do? you should get pictures then post them so we can see what each guy looks like (: just a suggestion (: |
| On May 4th 2008 jennaferz Said : | |
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love it(: |
| On May 4th 2008 Crazycutie7 Said : | |
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Kmp, I want more of this story now!!!Right now it's my favorite, out of all the things that I'm reading. |


