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How can I run away from this thing call "life"?--Chapter 7--

How can I run away from this thing call "life"?--Chapter 2--

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      I got so bored so fast. Than I thought of something.
    “Let’s go for a swim.” I said.  I ran closer to the water  I took off my t-shirt and dove into the water.  I went back up for air and saw Jacob coming toward me with no shirt. He tackle me into the water. I try opening my eyes underwater, but it was too blurry. I soon ran out of air and started kicking Jacob. He still wouldn’t let me go. He soon ran out of air too and brought us both up. He laughed and I frowned.   I wrap my legs around his waist.  Than I try pulling him down to the water with me. He wrap his arms around me and move his face closer to mind. He went in to kiss me but I went back up for air before he could.
    “Try to get me!” I said childish. I went underwater and swam to the deeper side. When he finally caught up with me he landed on top of me. Wrapping his arms all around me so I couldn’t move. He brought us both up. He was still holding me. I stare deeply in to his big brown eyes. I smile as I saw how adorable he looks right now.
    “Has anybody ever told you that you look incredibly adorable when you’re wet?” I said still smiling.    
    “Yeah when we take a shower together.” he laughed. My smile faded away. I was being serious and he was just joking around.  I lay my head on his chest. He hold me closer to him. I heard his heartbeat. I could just fall asleep right there. “Do you want to stay here? Or go home?” he said ruining the moment.
    “Stay here.” I said softly as I close my eyes.  
    “Okay.” he said with a shaky voice.
    ‘What‘s wrong?” I asked pulling away.
    “Nothing, why?”
    “Never mind.”
    “Um ok.. but do you want to go back to the beach? The water is freezing.” I shook my head and swam back to the beach. I lay myself on the sand. It was so soft and comfy.
    “What happen to your stomach?” his eyes staring at the bruises on my stomach that was made by Tyler.
    “I fell down the stairs.” I said thinking of something quick.
    “Clumsy.” he snickered. I gave him a playful punch.
    “Whatever loser !” I said looking away from him.
    “ Hey, can I come over to your house?” he said laying next to me.
    “Why?” I asked.
    “So we can do this.” he said kissing me passionately.  He pull away.
    “Why can’t we do it here?” I said looking into his eyes.
    “Just in case we get too far.”  he said looking away from my eyes.
    “Who cares.” I  kiss him softly. He reply by kissing roughly. It felt so good to be kissing someone who isn’t trying to rape you.  He than went down to my neck.  I giggled and I felt him smirk.
    The sun was no longer in sight and it got really dark so I push  Jacob  off.
    “Shit, I’m going to be in trouble.”
    “Why?”
    “It’s getting late.”
    “Ummm.. Yeah you’re right. Let’s go.” he got up and pull me up. I put on my shirt and so did he. We walk back home talking nonstop. We got to know each other so well.. When we got on my porch he kiss me good-bye and left. I was going to faint when he kiss me. That was until I realize that Tyler was inside. I open the door slowly. I try to sneak in. In the living room was Tyler and his friends.
    “Bitch, where the hell were you!?” Tyler yelled and I jump. I turn around to face Tyler. Tyler was coming closer to me.
    “I was out.” I said backing up.
    “Where?! Damn it Jennifer!”
    “The beach.” I said scared to make eye contact with him.
    “Why?”  he said getting furious with me.
    “Um.. I just… um.. Wanted to see the sunset?” I lied.
    “You need a life.” he said  going back to his friends. I ran up the stairs.

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Sorry this chapter isn't exciting too

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im trying to improve my writing so please

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