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| On February 14th 2008 emochick1516 Said : | |
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oh no! whats wrong? |
| On January 5th 2008 Lemonkiss7 Said : | |
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sad I like it keep me posted. |
| On January 4th 2008 eric101106 Said : | |
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i am so mad she meets a nicer guy and now he isnt so nice hmmmm |
| On January 4th 2008 babydoll6789 Said : | |
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really good.. |
| On January 4th 2008 DemonzR4eva Said : | |
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i thought i already posted a comment but i guess not... I believe that Luke killed Zach ever since he saw the picture in the beggining...post me if not already |
| On January 3rd 2008 heathsgurl94 Said : | |
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goood. |
| On January 3rd 2008 Equasha Said : | |
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i agree with the person under me (hey that rhymes ;))keep me posted |
| On January 3rd 2008 PunkRockNerdxX Said : | |
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Luke probably killed Zach, and now feels guilty. Great story! Please keep me posted. |
| On January 3rd 2008 abbyz11w Said : | |
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i bet luke killed zach because he was jealous and so luke now feels guilety, thats why luke felt so weird around those guys at there date in the last part
i think i figured it out!
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| On January 3rd 2008 jessimerri369 Said : | |
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omfg i love it did luke kill zack omg i cant wait for more this is sooo good plz keep me posted |
| On January 3rd 2008 jirrith2007 Said : | |
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keep it up :D |
| On January 3rd 2008 Anoudeth Said : | |
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You made it sound so real that I cried. Keep me posted! |
| On January 3rd 2008 taraluvsbama06 Said : | |
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uh oh |
| On January 3rd 2008 Sk8ncutie001 Said : | |
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Omg u made cry. That was very good kmp! |
| On January 3rd 2008 Harumi13 Said : | |
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woot!!!! i like it^^ |


