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Hope is lost. (chapter 1)
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 Created on 5-5-08
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When you give up hope then obviously nothing good comes out of it. Everything keeps getting worse and worse, until there is nothing left. I've come a long way from the old me and accomplished things i never thought i could accomplish. I feel like i failed not only me, but everyone around me. I spent countless hours on prepping myself to suceed and outlast all problems for nothing? Am i really that pathetic and powerless? I wish i could just leave and never face it, maybe i will do that. No, i can't! Or maybe i should just stay and fight my problems. I guess it wouldn't hurt, I have nothing else to loose if i do perish. I already lost the one i loved, my old life and almost my powers. My life is an emotional train reck, waiting for a change, for something. I should have just listened to Addison, not to go alone. But i promised everybody that this situation wouldn't be a problem. I thought that if i waited any longer all would be lost. Then the inevitable would happen and i don't think anybody would want that. This the biggest battle i have ever fought and it's not even half way over.
What to do? What to do? In that moment Aiden (my enemy) slashed me with his blade, right in the stomach. I wasn't expecting that or something so life threatning so sudden. I felt the air leaving my body, the blood rushing down me, and the warmth of it in my fingers. No! This can't be the end i have to fight back, for me, for Addy!
The adrenaline was pumping through my veins while thinking about Addy and what was at stake. I raised my arm, not thinking on what i wanted to do with it. I shot a massive wave of fire like i never did before. I had so much power! I shifted into the shadows of the rock formation and concentrated on the weather change i was creating and the endless fire wave coming out my left hand. I stopped the fire and a lightning bolt shot out of the sky right at Aiden.
Now you would think that would kill him, but he is like this powerful mad man that never dies. The bolt hit him and he flenched, as if that would provide any protection.
The adrenaline was dissolving quikly and i didn't have much power or energy left in me. I felt as if the power was seeping out of my body, just like the blood was. I had enough in me for one more attack. The grand finale was about to begin, only one problem what to do?
I decided to trust my instincts rather than think things through. I closed my eyes and let my body control my mind. I didn't know what was going on, but i was winning. I opened my eyes and saw this giant 3 layer tornado. The top was water with bits of ice in it, the middle was just air but twirling faster that the other parts and the bottom was my personal favorite fire. I collapsed watching the show, barley having enough strength to keep my eyes open. However i could think at least.
I thought how could i produce something this big and powerful, but i guess i could. I knew for sure that Aiden was finally defeated and i could return home. Suddenly a huge, excruciating bright light flashed and the thing i created was gone. I saw Aiden standing there. He looked pretty banged up, but it wasn't over.
Uh-oh. What now i have nothing left. No power, adrenaline, everything that could keep me alive was gone. Addy was at his wedding and i knew he thought i was there. No savior today or any day because this is truly and utterly over. So there i was lieing pretty mush lifeless on the damp ground, i had nothing left in me to do anything that offered the slighest bit of protection. He walked towards me laughing at my pain, knowing that he caused it and seeing the fear in my eyes. THat was his favorite thing to look at, his victimns eyes right before he killed them. Seeing the fear, but the burden finally gone. I think it brought his heart warmth, or whatever heart he had.
"Well, well, well. Who do we have here?" He said laughing his supposdly evil laugh.
I felt so weak and i tryed to talk, but i was more like a whisper. " Who does it look like?" I remarked faintly. Being sassy to a guy that is about to kill you isn't really a smart idea. This is added to my list of future advice.
" You always were disrespectful, i hope someday you will learn your lesson. But wait i don't think there will be a next day for you. I am really sorry it had to come to this, but enemies have to kill each other and your such a pest."
Without getting to say any of my smart alek comments he took his blade and sliced me again, but this time i blacked out and saw a light coming towards me. I was dead for real this time.
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"Do you Addison Cross take this lovely lady to be your wife?"
"I do."
"And do you Rosemary Rain take this handsome man to be your husband?"
"I do.
"I now pronnounce you husband and wife. You may kiss the bride."
I kissed my new wife and couldn't believe that i am married to my true love. I wonder where Tadum is? She's probably in the back drinking. Haha. She can be really funny sometimes. I think somethimes she is in love with me, but i don't know i am not an expert. There is so much t worry about right now and i don't know if she can handle this much stress. The one thing we need to really worry about is this Aiden situation, it's getting pretty bad. We need to do something fast or else he wil take over and then there really will be no peace.
To be continued.........
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On June 23rd 2008 CharTheKnight Said : | |
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I love this! :D Keep up the great work (I NEED THE FIRST PART!) XD :D |
| On May 6th 2008 xXkenzieXz Said : | |
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this is the second part of the story there is a first part but im not finished yet. |
| On May 6th 2008 wowjessiie Said : | |
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you should keep writing. |
| On May 5th 2008 tibbskidoo Said : | |
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haha im really tired so this kinda confused me, but its really creative so i like it. plus the title is different, im so sick of all those ppl writing love stories titled "blank love" lol. so yay! finally something different! if u decide to keep it up definatly keep me posted! |
