PROMISE OF LOVE
Chapter Six: A Promise
(Redo)
After long hours, we spent together on the boat under the black, cloudless sky within the blameless stars. We talked all night along with lots of passionate kisses until something happened mercifully.
As we slowly sat back little away from each other on the little, blue boat that Jake’s parents bought it for him to enjoy on the boat for himself. Our smiles were slowly moving to strengthen themselves so far and wide. Jake was hiding something really hard that I wouldn’t able to notice him at all. He was just acting that nothing really happened at all. It wasn’t right. I could see that.
Jake putted something in his pocket quickly before Lynn caught a glimpse of him placing. He smiled once again on his face but he was heck nervously chuckling. He shook his head with a beautiful chuckle in a deep tone, as his eyes were focusing on his hands with my hands. I was having some butterflies in my belly that made me realizing I was heck nervous. I didn’t understand why he did that. He slowly stood up on the little boat, making sure that he wouldn’t fall off it. He didn’t want to ruin the moment with me, I could see that. I was confused as heck as I was looking at him up. Seeing the beautiful, dimness up in the sky within the stars, I was whispering very quietly, “What are you doing, Jake?” He never replied me back. Maybe, he couldn’t hear what I said in low voice.
Jake kneed down on the boat as his face was so peaceful that I never had seen it before just like that. He was pulling something out of his pocket to show in front of my astonishing face. As he opened the gift to me. A white gold promise ring. “Will you stay with me forever?” He asked as he moved a ring on his palm toward me. My jaws dropped gently as far and wide as I unhurriedly hugged him tightly. Gosh, he really loved me. He just wanted to stay with me forever as long as we could. He closed his hand to hold the ring as fast as he could not let it fall off the boat as he permitted himself hugging her back around her waist. “I can take that yes, right?” He landed his chin on her shoulder closer to my ear to whisper in a musical tone. As he still hugged her in a long, silence minute. It seemed a minute into an hour. I was happy woman in alive as he gave me a fill of happiness once again.
After a minute, we were done. As Jake slowly backed himself little backward, so he could slide the ring in my ring finger. He leaned himself closer to my face and mouthed his words, ‘I love you.’ His kisses gave million, million butterflies to my stomach on the inside, as I leisurely cast my arms around his neck closer to my face deeply. “I love you too,” I breathed through three simple words in low. We met our lips against each other until something on the sand made a screaming outside. We suddenly backed off and hid themselves on the boat, so nobody could see us well. We let their sounds of laughter out of our mouths. I didn’t know why the trouble was coming back to us. The flashlights were exploring around on the sand but they seemed they couldn’t find us. I peeked out to see if they were gone. We knew it were my parents worrying as heck as they never gave up until they got tired. They went back to their houses.
Jake asked me if I wanted to stay here on the boat for more or leave to go home, but I refused to go home. I only wanted to stay with him any longer.
We hanged about long hours once more until the sunset woke up on the boat. We slept peacefully as I was laying with Jake. My head was resting on his arms around my shoulders. I was letting my hand on his chest with my eyes closed, so I could feel that I woke him up. I could hear his grunt softly. He lifted my head up to let his arm go free and then he putted me down on the boat gently. I felt affection for his gentle. When I felt something moving the boat. I knew I was awake but my eyes were so weary. We stayed long time last night.
I opened her eyes at a snail’s pace and pulled myself to get up as I groaned lightly. I wondered what Jake was doing. I became aware of Jake watching me to come around. Jake said as he threw his hand to reach me hand, “Let’s go home. I know we are in trouble but we need to face them. Ha.” I was looking around the sand. We landed on the sand.
“Yeah, of course.” I chuckled far and wide on my face, as I reached Jake’s hand to get up on the boat.” I experienced the feelings of the joy. He got off the boat to jump on the sand once more, so did I. He pulled his boat off the sea back to the sand to his storage house. Someone cleared his throat in a deep voice behind us in the storage. “Here is the trouble,” whispered Jake that made me laughing softly in low.