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Lasting Love [Rewritten 1]

Romance Created on 7-28-08 Views(124) Story Rating PG

LASTING LOVE

Beginning of the Chapter: That Day She Met Him

 

The long, straightened brunette girl bumped onto the handsome, blond hair boy by an accident. Her books flied out of her arms. She was saying without looking at him, "I am so sorry!" She dropped her knees down on the floor and picked up her books.

Her heart raced quickly and she didn’t know what to do, but she had no time to look at the boy that she hadn’t seen yet. She just collected her books in her opened arms. Her chock-full thoughts weighted her mind down too heavily about the simple memory, so she erased it hurriedly off her head. She still kneed on the floor, and still picked up few more books.

The panicky boy lent a hand her to pick her books, and started to look at her. Oh my god! She is so beautiful! It was his thought deep inside his head as much as a silence. His heart rushed as far as it reached his mind from the heart and realized that he fell in love. A sunshine smiled at a girl’s a long, straightened russet hair and deep-lighten tone of the skin. The girl began to hold the books in her arms and looked at the beautiful, dirty blonde haired boy. "Thank you for helping", she beamed beautifully as she still kneed on the dirty, white naked floor. "I am sorry for bumping on you. It was accident." Her heart spread over her body that made her edgy.

"That’s alright!" He flashed his beautiful, shiny smile. "By the way, my name is Tyler."

"Oh, my name is Elizabeth," she tittered, as she threw her hair far away from her face. "But everyone calls me Lizzie or Liz. Anyways, I gotta go to my class. I am late!" She straightened her legs up, and started to run straight to the classroom in the hall.

Tyler watched Elizabeth to fade in the hallway and his heart finally skipped every beat, and went to the office to get a schedule.

The English teacher stood there right near the door and saw Elizabeth run toward the classroom. "You are late, Ms. Elizabeth Taylor," she yelled angrily in every roared word. She crossed her arms against her chest above the small breasts, pointed her index finger to the classroom and said, "Get in there! If there is one more tardy from you, I will give you a deletion slip in a second! Do you understand?"

"Yes, Ms. Brunson," Elizabeth nodded sadly as she walked into the classroom and sat in her desk. She was sitting in silence and paid attention to Ms. Brunson. "Alright, kids!" Ms. Brunson said deafeningly enough for her students to hear her. "You are going to write a poem about yourself or just make up about something!" All of the students groaned expect Elizabeth was all quietly excited about writing.

Elizabeth loved to write many poems as much as she could express her feelings out. She was not like other scores of girls in school but she loved spreading her money to buy many attractive clothes from Hollister Store. She didn’t pretend to be other girl because she was preferred to be herself. That was worthy for her to be. She didn’t care what people think of her or her way in an action.

Suddenly, someone behind the door finally knocked every moment in time. Who is at the door, I wonder. Elizabeth thought inquisitively, as she waited for Ms. Brunson to get a door open.


Ms. Brunson moved herself to the door and opened it. She talked in a quiet voice, so no one could hear her in a classroom. Elizabeth kept going on to wonder who was at the door. No one could see him or her because a new student was little farther behind the door away from the room.

Chapter Two: Embarrassment Moment

 

Elizabeth unusually looked at him or her but she couldn’t see him. He was still standing a bit faraway behind the door, and the teacher still discussed with him about his schedule.

Elizabeth sat there in a time lag and wanted to see his face and she slid left on the chair. Few seconds later, she fell off it. Everybody suddenly fixed their eyes on her and started to laugh with a sound of roaring at full volume. Her heart was ripped off her chest and broke it.

Ms. Brunson turned her head right to see what was going on. She saw Elizabeth laying on the floor and wondered what happened and speedily walked headed for her.

A new student heard a thunderous boom and then a loud, cruel laughers of a crowd. He rushed into the classroom with his heart beat every time anxiously. He met his eyes on Elizabeth laying right on the floor and catch sight of her reddish pink cheeks on her deep lighten tone of her beautiful skin.

Ms. Brunson stood in front of Elizabeth and threw her right hand in an air to her. She asked worryingly, "Are you okay?" Elizabeth nodded her head with her reddish pink cheeks on her face and said politely, "Yes, thank you." As she threw her hand to grab Ms. Brunson’s hand, and she pulled Elizabeth to get up. She brushed dirt away from her jeans behind her back in the bottom with her right hand. She cleaned her hands against her palms each other in an atmosphere.

Elizabeth met the new boy’s gorgeous, pure hazel eyes, and gasped mutedly. It was Tyler that she bumped onto him in an accident before she arrived her class late.

Tyler waved at her with a timid smile and whispered, "Hi Liz!" Elizabeth turned red and smilingly said hi back to him. She slowly went to sit on the chair, and started to grin slowly.

Ms. Brunson began to announce stridently once again, "Attention, attention, students! This is a new student named Tyler Simpson who transferred here from James West High School." Tyler was standing alongside her and she said to him, "Welcome to Charlestown High School! Go to sit behind Elizabeth in thi—"

Tyler stopped her words out of her mouth and remind, "I already met her, Ms. Brunsin." Tyler laid on Elizabeth‘s beautiful eyes with filled of a light brown color with a tinge of green or gold, and heard what the words said from a teacher. "It’s Ms. Brunson, actually," she chuckled soothingly.

"Oh, sorry. It‘s my mistake," he said as walked and passed Elizabeth. He smiled and sat in his empty seat behind Elizabeth with a completed smile on his face.

Oh my gosh! He is so gorgeous! 

Elizabeth smilingly thought as she started to dream while Ms. Brunson started to teach the class about how to write poems. Elizabeth wondered how to wish that she could have a boyfriend to herself but she didn’t think that her parents wouldn’t let her have him in a long silence without hearing a teacher’s voice deep inside her ears.

All of a sudden, the bell growlingly ranged a few times that actually made everyone jumped out of their seats to the hallways and other classrooms in a second period in the morning.

Elizabeth still took the weight off her feet in her chair and dreamed about Tyler as her boyfriend.


Someone tapped gently on her shoulder on the right side next to her while she was not paying an attention.


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On August 11th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
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On July 30th 2008 gusty13 Said :
gusty13 kmpp
On July 30th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Yeah, I know. I notice that I made mistakes.
On July 30th 2008 CSLimeWriter Said :
CSLimeWriter It's cool but still confusing. The ways you use your verbs/verb tenses are hard to understand; and it could use a little more interesting adjectives; but the story line is cute.
On July 29th 2008 FruitcakeCaz Said :
FruitcakeCaz kmpp!
On July 29th 2008 mathstar Said :
mathstar very gooooood kmp I like it and it get better.
On July 28th 2008 justjetjustis Said :
justjetjustis oh wow kewl
On July 28th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem Oh my name is "Elizabeth!" Everyone does call me Liz or Lizzy! Wrong last name though! I have brown hair to. She likes to write poems to? :) I don't buy expensive clothes. My Bf has blonde hair also. His name isn't "Tyler." His eyes is not hazel colored. Have you been following me? lol Cute story continue on it! :)
On July 28th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Hey everyone ignore itale bottom i dont know why but just ignore through, thanks.