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Can't Your Eyes See? [7]

Creative Created on 6-25-08 Views(96) Story Rating G

CAN’T YOUR EYES SEE?

CHAPTER SEVEN: RUSHIN’ OUT OF MOTEL

Emma was still sleeping in the bed, but suddenly, her cell phone sang by Ashlee Simpson.

I walk alone inside these walls and it's not easy being me
It seems like every time I escape there's another following
Being prone and, yeah they're coming
I can feel them shooting me, without asking
Lights are flashing but I guess that

It's what I've become, let me live as who I am
Never wanted nothing, but you don't let me breathe as who I am
I've just begun, I've just begun, I've just begun to find my way
I've just begun, I've just begun…

She flipped her mobile open, and spoke the phone in sleepy, “What?!”

“You need to get out of Motel right now!? Do you understand? Get out of here before your dad get here!!!” Emma got up on the bed, sealed her cell phone, and then woke her Chelsea, hissing, “Mom! Mom! Wake up! We have to go, now!!” Chelsea woke up quickly, saying, “What?! Your dad is coming??! Oh my god, we have to go but we have nothing in here. Let’s go! I will pick up Greg! You get a van! Now, go!” Emma rushed out of the motel, got the van, and checked in the van, so she made sure nobody was in the van. She locked all the locks in the van, pulling the van right near the motet, and waiting for Chelsea and Greg. Suddenly, Emma heard a screaming in the Motel, and she finally decided to call a cops, waiting for the emergency to come. She came to a decision to go to Motel with something weapon, hollering, “DAD! BACK OFF MY MOTHER!!! Get Greg, Mom!” As she stared sharply at Dad’s eyes with her anger outside of her but inside, she felt that she still loved his dad. She was shocking inside because now she lastly noticed Jonathan that he had changed. It was unbelievable. Jonathan finally let Chelsea go and get Greg. She carried Greg, so she won’t able to wake up Greg and put him in the van.

“YOU, DAD!” I yelled angrily out of her heart, “What is happening to you, Dad? You’ve been changed! IT’S ALL YOUR FAULT! You! You!” As Jonathan’s eyes finally let the tears rolling down the cheeks, and tried to walk toward Emma. “Stop! Don’t touch me ever again! DO YOU UNDERSTAND?!?” She screamed furiously, as she still held a shovel. She didn’t want to hurt her own dear dad, but she tried to scare Jonathan away. “You changed! You changed! Not the same dad, I used to have.” She choked while she was letting the tears out of her heartbreaking eyes. “What the heck? What the heck is happening to you? You hurt my dear mother, you! You hurt our family enough! Never again will I see you once! Never!” Jonathan gradually sat on the bed and finally blurted out crying in a deep voice. Emma saw the tears but she couldn’t take them anymore to watch him. She still stood near the door in the Motel.

Someone ran behind Emma, and asked breathlessly, “Are you okay, Emma?”

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yeaitzJess who is it? ryan? who called to warn her about their dad coming hmmmm i cant wait to read the next one please keep me posted!!!!!!!!!!!!
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