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Promise of Love (Chapter 4)

Romance Created on 6-9-08 Views(91) Story Rating G

Promise of Love

Chapter 4: More Than Just Friends

"How come you never told me the whole truth I never knew since?" I asked confusingly, as I backed off few inches away from Jake. How came I never knew? I dated every guy I fell in love with but they were such the jerks. I didn’t really understand, however then, Jake explained everything he wanted to express in front of me. I wished I knew his eyes said to me. "Every time I fall in love with you but the three words are strong enough to show you. Oh yes, I love you all the times in the entire universe since I met you. Are you sure do you love me more than just a friend? I want to make sure because I don’t want you to rush." Gosh, he was so serious this time. Suddenly, I walked toward him and met his lips passionately. I felt comfortable kissing him, said as I breathed through a kiss, "I love you, too."


I told him that I really wanted to do something really different than a friendship. I loved to keep a friendship with him but I would try to be his girlfriend because I really wanted to and I loved him though. Well then, Jake finally requested me as his girlfriend, I was well shocking in a surprise, and I said yes, yes. He hugged me tight because his dream came true.
Few months later, I asked him to go to the place I wanted to spend a time with him at the late night. I called him on the phone around 9 p.m. and spoke through the phone, "Hey Jakeboo, wanna go out to the place I want to show you with me?" My heart pulsed loudly and easily as I waited and sat on the soft, big-sized bed. He finally answered me back, "I am sorry for making you wait. It was just a mom standing in front of me. I hate it! I will explain later. Okay, what time do you really want to meet you, Lyboo?"


Aw, I loved every time he called me a cute nickname but he always called me that nickname since we became best friends. We were now sweethearts during that time. My favorite nickname.

"Okay, midnight, is that okay with you?" I replied him back, as I walked toward the closet, "Hmm?" I checked the clothes to see which one I wanted to wear the clothes for tonight while I was holding my black cell phone. Alright, my favorite color was black but I was not Emo or Goth. "Yeah, yeah, sure." Jake weakly responded, "I will meet you, but where do you want me to meet you, baby?" Oh gosh, I forgot to tell him where I wanted to meet him. I was thinking unhurriedly and finally let my thought pop up in my head, answering him back, "Um, meet me in the beach near the pier."

"Okay, I will have to go. My mom is coming. I will sneak out soon! Bye, Lyboo."
The phone died.

 

Author Note: I will post next chapter when I have time. That's all I am posting this chapter! Enjoy! =] Comment and rate please!

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On August 11th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx


On June 11th 2008 gusty13 Said :
gusty13 kmp
On June 11th 2008 monkey892 Said :
monkey892 Just watch out on like your wording and don't be afraid to make a chapter longer. Please. THis is a good story dont ruin it. Keep Me Posted.
On June 10th 2008 thatchickunew Said :
thatchickunew kmp but i also agree with CslimeWriter
On June 10th 2008 CSLimeWriter Said :
CSLimeWriter Once again; you can flesh it out a lil bit more by slowing down and separating the correct paragraphs. Also, the way you keep bringing up how she's not goth or emo or anything you make it sound almost like a diary page or something. If that's the prose you're going for then that's fine, but if it's not then I'd suggest changing. Hopefully this is helpful to you :)
On June 9th 2008 mathstar Said :
mathstar kmppppppppppppppppppppppp. wowww goood poem. Roserugdh have good point. I think same thing. but I dont know.. KMPP Please
On June 9th 2008 RJbork09 Said :
RJbork09 kmpp.
On June 9th 2008 FruitcakeCaz Said :
FruitcakeCaz kmpp
On June 9th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Responded to Rosebrugdh: Well, you will find out the next chapter. =]
On June 9th 2008 rosebrugh Said :
rosebrugh i dont think that his mom was there at all....it was another girl and she should try to surprise him by going to his house and sneaking in, only to find him with another girl...kmp