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Promise of Love (Chapter 3)
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Promise of Love
Chapter 3: One of His Secrets
Jake seemed to act like he was heck nervous that made me anxious. I had no absolutely idea why he acted just like that. I noticed his hands shake his wet light brown hair, and then he putted himself on the lips. The way he was nervous when he started to bite his nails. How disguise! I continued to walk with him to the house. Before we arrived there, I begun to shout at him, "Stop biting your nails. It is bad habit for you, Jake Ethan Charles!" God, it was so annoying me when he did that to himself! He looked at me, smiled, and teased, "I am sorry, Lynn Rose Clarkson." Ha, he was always trying to tease me back whenever I joked, pranked, or teased him. I was such a good prankster. He chuckled, as he continued to walk toward his room upstairs. I followed him right to the left his room, and suddenly, my heart drummed shrilly. It continued to drum on all the way to him chamber. I didn't ever understand at all. I paused myself right next to his bathroom, and walked in there, nervously shook my heads. Looking in the mirror at my face, I noticed myself in my pure hazel eyes. I gazed at my eyes for few minutes until I realized that Jake was waiting for me in his bedroom. I came out of the bathroom, and then walked straight to the left to his room.
Jake laid on the bed, staring at the ceiling. I guess he was thinking how to tell me or just show me something. I was exhaling in a deep breath, as I uttered, trying to calm myself down, "Hey, what thing do you really want to show me, dude?" Did I say dude to him? Oh why me? Dude was only the way I could say whenever I was anxious. Oh crap, I didn't want him to know I was nervous. Jake shook, slowly, his head, and chucked, saying, "Yeah, there are something I want to show you but I am starting to notice you that you are obviously nervous. Are you okay? Yes, it is one of my secrets you never knew. Come here, Lynn." Wow, I couldn't wait to hear one of his secrets I never knew. I was shockingly walking to him bit by bit, sitting on his bed, and opening my mouth, but then it closed. Yes, I wanted to say something but I preferred to let him speak first. Uh oh, I realized that I totally forgot I was completely wet from swimming in the ocean, however I ignored myself in a wet bikini. I soaked my butt on the bed, crossed my legs, and putted my hands on my laps; completely pinned my ears back to the voice of Jake.
Jake started to say that something occurred to me. "Look, Lynn, I hate telling or showing you something that I love. Eh, know what? I love you."
What the heck was that? What did he mean? He loved me. I knew that simple words very well, but what did he really mean these words after saying to me. I answered him back in confusion, "I love you too but what--" He pulled my head toward his head, and started to let his lips meet my lips. What was he doing?! He never had done to me just like that! It was not the way he used to act like a best friend. More than just best friend. I didn’t understand at all. It just made my head spin around inside, my knees almost crashed but I strongly lifted up myself. My hands threw to grab his neck toward me, and started to press his lips against me. What the heck was I doing? I loved him as a best friend but now I realized I accidentally fell in love too far. I soothingly shoved off him, asking him, "What was that? Was it something you want from me?"
Author Note: Chapter 4 is coming out after I posted this. =]
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Please Login to post comments| On August 11th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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| On June 10th 2008 CSLimeWriter Said : | |
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I agree with rosebrugh; it was very confusing to understand everything. Don't be afraid to make it a little longer by starting new paragraphs when you change the subject/when a new person starts speaking. |
| On June 9th 2008 mathstar Said : | |
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KMPPP> I am hooked to it. GOOD JOB |
| On June 9th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Responded to Rosebrugh: Sorry for a confusion, but you can always help me to edit or grammar. Thanks for your honesty. |
| On June 9th 2008 rosebrugh Said : | |
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confusing andwatch out for the letters |
