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Lasting Love (Chapter Sixteen)

Romance Created on 5-15-08 Views(87) Story Rating G

Elizabeth and Tyler were walking toward to the hidden place; it was Elizabeth’s most favorite place that no one knew where it was. A fountain. Tyler surprised in a shocking feelings but he thought to himself, it is the most beautiful place that she showed me for the first time! Wow! The water fell out of inside the fountain to the bottom, splashing. Elizabeth sighed softly, walked toward the fountain, sat on the bench, saying, “This is the secret place where I usually come here whenever I need. My favorite thing is fountain because it always calms me down.” As she walked headed for Tyler, and started to crack smiling into a wide. She threw her arms around his neck, and said, “I am glad I met you today! You are my inspiration for the first time, sweetie.”


“I am glad too,” said Tyler, as he pulled Elizabeth’s waist toward him, and started to kiss her roughly but passionately. Tyler’s hands reached Elizabeth’s long, straight brown hair. Out of the blue, she tenderly pushed him off and breathed lightly, “I love you ever since I met you. If three words are not ready for you to speak out of your heart, take your time. I don’t really mind waiting for your words.” Tyler bolted from the blue, stammering, “I-I don’t know what to say but deep inside, I do really love you, Elizabeth. I really do. I saw the moment.”

“Really? You really love me?” Elizabeth surprisingly said, as she sat down the bench, “Wow, I never have someone else outside of my family to love me.” Tyler shushed her and said, “The things are changing, darling.”

They talked hour by hour in their secret place where they couldn’t be found.

After hours, they started to go back home, and they arrived home but Elizabeth refused to go back to face their parents. So Tyler decided to introduce Elizabeth to his parents.

Author note: I am terribly sorry for not posting this story since long time but none of you guys rate 10 votes and above. I was waiting and waiting but oh well!

Plus I have new story called Promise of Love. Sadly, no one vote for it so that means I won’t put it until 10 votes and above. Thanks!

 

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