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Promise of Love (Intro)
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Promise of Love
Intro
What have I done? Why am I laying down on the bed? I see every white wall in this room? Wait a minute, why are my parents here with their tears fall out of their eyes? I don't understand why. I can't believe my true love, and my best friend died. It is all my fault! Why me?! I shouldn't let him sneak out of his house with me. I should not! My dear sweet love, Jake. Stupid me!
Author note: this is my third story. If you don't like my story, then, too bad, I am still going to write this story. Even though if you are interesting in this story, then let me know so I can keep posting you. Thanks! Even though I am not going to post next chapter after chapter one because I know testriffic is going to shut down on May 18th. So, add me to myspace or mibba.com. Myspace username: www.myspace.com/fan_page_of_kathy or mibba username: xpunkxloverx08. I will add this story there. I have other stories if u r interesting are called: Lasting Love and Can't Your Eyes See?. Thanks for reading. Sorry for long note!
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| On August 29th 2008 PuffDaddyPuff Said : | |
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mmmm, doesn't hit a note with me then again i don't particulary find these genres of stories interesting, they bore me very quick because they are all the same and get really repetative. Theres no much inventive ideas. Well written though. |
| On August 22nd 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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It is not true story but it is a fiction story yep. |
| On August 17th 2008 Shannonism374l Said : | |
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woww sad..is that true story? |
| On August 11th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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| On June 10th 2008 CSLimeWriter Said : | |
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Hey; it sounds interesting. But you just need to work on keeping the tenses the same. BTW Testriffic isn't shutting down til NEXT year on May 19 :) |
| On June 8th 2008 shitzmay Said : | |
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i like it, kmpp |
| On April 21st 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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promise of love (chapter 1) is posted! Enjoy! |
| On April 20th 2008 Slackee Said : | |
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WOW! kmp! |
| On April 20th 2008 justthegirlxox Said : | |
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i can't find your mibba account. mines jamiexxlou. idk, try n find me. lol. kmpp. |
| On April 20th 2008 mathstar Said : | |
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Kmp seriouslyyy. U should become author |
| On April 20th 2008 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said : | |
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Mmm..KMP! |



