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Promise of Love (Intro)

Tragedy Created on 4-20-08 Views(185) Story Rating G


Promise of Love

Intro


What have I done? Why am I laying down on the bed? I see every white wall in this room? Wait a minute, why are my parents here with their tears fall out of their eyes? I don't understand why. I can't believe my true love, and my best friend died. It is all my fault! Why me?! I shouldn't let him sneak out of his house with me. I should not! My dear sweet love, Jake. Stupid me!



Author note: this is my third story. If you don't like my story, then, too bad, I am still going to write this story. Even though if you are interesting in this story, then let me know so I can keep posting you. Thanks! Even though I am not going to post next chapter after chapter one because I know testriffic is going to shut down on May 18th. So, add me to myspace or mibba.com. Myspace username: www.myspace.com/fan_page_of_kathy or mibba username: xpunkxloverx08. I will add this story there. I have other stories if u r interesting are called: Lasting Love and Can't Your Eyes See?. Thanks for reading. Sorry for long note!

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On August 29th 2008 PuffDaddyPuff Said :
PuffDaddyPuff mmmm, doesn't hit a note with me then again i don't particulary find these genres of stories interesting, they bore me very quick because they are all the same and get really repetative. Theres no much inventive ideas. Well written though.
On August 22nd 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx It is not true story but it is a fiction story yep.
On August 17th 2008 Shannonism374l Said :
Shannonism374l woww sad..is that true story?
On August 11th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
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On June 10th 2008 CSLimeWriter Said :
CSLimeWriter Hey; it sounds interesting. But you just need to work on keeping the tenses the same. BTW Testriffic isn't shutting down til NEXT year on May 19 :)
On June 8th 2008 shitzmay Said :
shitzmay i like it, kmpp
On April 21st 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx promise of love (chapter 1) is posted! Enjoy!
On April 20th 2008 Slackee Said :
Slackee WOW! kmp!
On April 20th 2008 justthegirlxox Said :
justthegirlxox i can't find your mibba account. mines jamiexxlou. idk, try n find me. lol. kmpp.
On April 20th 2008 mathstar Said :
mathstar Kmp seriouslyyy. U should become author
On April 20th 2008 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said :
xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Mmm..KMP!