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Bad News! |
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Secret 1 [REwrite] |
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Who I am...Who Are You? |
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I Never Meet Him in My Life 1 |
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Secret 9 |
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Do You Love Me? Ch. 2` |
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Secret 8 |
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Strange Nightmare 3 |
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Strange Nightmare 2 |
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Do You Love Me? [Chapter one] |
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Sercet 7 |
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Secret 6 |
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Strange Nightmare |
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Secret 5 |
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sercet 4 |
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Sercet 3 |
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Secret 2 |
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I was a Sixth Grade dance! |
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Who I am...Who Are You?
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Ring...Ring...
I looked at the wall where time was alarm or something but it was not there, I kept looking around of this room. The room was dark and very small. My eyes were close, I couldn't stay awake, the big wound on my body, it where was on my left, lower, side of stomach. I felt like I was very dying. I opened my eyes and looked for the door...or...the clock?
Ring..RIng..
I closed my eyes and tried to make an imaginary that I tried to remember who I was. I couldn't because in my imaginary, my mind, there were not clear, it said, "A in Lazt...rx..." and I saw two strange girls that they were in my imaginary. I was wondering if that firl, who was skinny, short, beautiful, and girly, was me? Or...other girl, who was in average, tall, pretty, and goth...or...emo, was me?
Ring...RIng...
I couldn't figure out who I was. My body was becoming a numb ever I couldn't felt and move them.
Squeak...Squeak...
I heard something, I opened my eyes and looked around at the wall...or this room? But I couldn't see it because this room was dark.
Squeak...Ring...Ring...Squeak...
I ever wanted to move but I was fully numb in all of my body.
Squeak...Squeak...
Something was touching my head, it was...wait a minute, what it was?
Squeak...SQUEAK...
The sound was getting loud, something was pushing my head, and I heard a crack of bones. Wait, whose was those bones? Wait...that's mine? I felt a pain in my neck...and something was continue to pushing my head as my neck was more of pain, I could accepted that pain. I closed my eyes and tried to be relax.
Squeak...SQUE-Footsteps in the anywhere...
I opened my eyes, tried to look around of this room but I couldn't because something kept pushing my head, I kept listening the footsteps and squeaking in somewhere. I closed my eyes, again.
Footsteps...Squeak...Footsteps...
Suddenly, something was stopped to push my head, I opened my eyes and I tried to speak but I couldn't...
Footsteps...Footsteps...
Suddenly...the sound of footsteps just stopped...
Jiggle...Jiggle...
I listened to the door that someone was about to opened the door...but it kept making a sound of jiggle. Maybe someone tried to open it but it was locked? I don't know what someone do...
Jiggle...Jiggle...
I closed my eyes, and tried to be relax while I listened to someone who tried to open the door.
Jiggle...Jiggle...
Crack...Crack...
The door of wood was cracing while someone tried to open it...or...what do someone with the door? Mmm...
POUND...CRACK...
I opened my eyes, I looked at somewhere but I tried to move my head, I couldn't...Sigh...I tried to listen the sound that someone was pounding the door. I wished that my body was not numb.
CRACK...CRACK...
The sound was growing loud, I closed my eyes and listened to the sound.
Creak...Creak...
Mmm...Where's the sound of crack? Why the sound of creak...it was door? Why? I tried to listen something but it was dead silent...This room was still dark...I felt cold...The cold air touched my skins, I started to shiver. Why was this room become cold, not warm? I felt like there was 20 degree in this room.
Creak...Creak...
I opened my eyes, tried to listen the sound but there was dead silent, again. Suddenly, my body was numb but it started to melt numb. I didn't understand why the numb was melting.
Footsteps...Footsteps...
That...sound was back, hey...where did that person go? I had serious help, I was very dying....Wait a minute, my fingters were moving. I wanted to scream but my voice was not aloud enough and very clear.
Footsteps...Footsteps...
I tried to get sit up but my body was still numb, I knew that could continue to melt it, then i could moved them.
{{do you like it? it look like not my write of story but honset, yes i wrote it...but i have no idea why i wrote this but it look really interest. please tell me whats you think about this story. please no hate comments. please rate//comments this. PLEASE...thanks.}}
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| On May 12th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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kmp plz! |
| On May 11th 2008 mathstar Said : | |
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Kmpppppppppppppppp I lovee it. It my fav story. It make me interesting. Kmpp plsss |
| On May 11th 2008 feather1904 Said : | |
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kmp plz |
| On May 10th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Kmp |
| On May 10th 2008 AnimaniacAsh Said : | |
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it was a great one!, keep writting it defintly! |
| On May 9th 2008 rosebrugh Said : | |
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a little long and i didn't read it all but i am guessing that it was good |


