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I was a Sixth Grade dance!

Who I am...Who Are You?

Tragedy Created on 5-9-08 Views(81) Story Rating G

Ring...Ring...

I looked at the wall where time was alarm or something but it was not there, I kept looking around of this room. The room was dark and very small. My eyes were close, I couldn't stay awake, the big wound on my body, it where was on my left, lower, side of stomach. I felt like I was very dying. I opened my eyes and looked for the door...or...the clock?

Ring..RIng..

I closed my eyes and tried to make an imaginary that I tried to remember who I was. I couldn't because in my imaginary, my mind, there were not clear, it said, "A in Lazt...rx..." and I saw two strange girls that they were in my imaginary. I was wondering if that firl, who was skinny, short, beautiful, and girly, was me? Or...other girl, who was in average, tall, pretty, and goth...or...emo, was me?

Ring...RIng...

I couldn't figure out who I was. My body was becoming a numb ever I couldn't felt and move them.

Squeak...Squeak...

 I heard something, I opened my eyes and looked around at the wall...or this room? But I couldn't see it because this room was dark.

 Squeak...Ring...Ring...Squeak...

 I ever wanted to move but I was fully numb in all of my body.

 Squeak...Squeak...

Something was touching my head, it was...wait a minute, what it was?

 

Squeak...SQUEAK...

 The sound was getting loud, something was pushing my head, and I heard a crack of bones. Wait, whose was those bones? Wait...that's mine? I felt a pain in my neck...and something was continue to pushing my head as my neck was more of pain, I could accepted that pain. I closed my eyes and tried to be relax.

 Squeak...SQUE-Footsteps in the anywhere...

I opened my eyes, tried to look around of this room but I couldn't because something kept pushing my head, I kept listening the footsteps and squeaking in somewhere. I closed my eyes, again.

Footsteps...Squeak...Footsteps...

 Suddenly, something was stopped to push my head, I opened my eyes and I tried to speak but I couldn't...

 Footsteps...Footsteps...

Suddenly...the sound of footsteps just stopped...

Jiggle...Jiggle...

 I listened to the door that someone was about to opened the door...but it kept making a sound of jiggle. Maybe someone tried to open it but it was locked? I don't know what someone do...

 Jiggle...Jiggle...

I closed my eyes, and tried to be relax while I listened to someone who tried to open the door.

Jiggle...Jiggle...

Crack...Crack...

The door of wood was cracing while someone tried to open it...or...what do someone with the door? Mmm...

 POUND...CRACK...

I opened my eyes, I looked at somewhere but I tried to move my head, I couldn't...Sigh...I tried to listen the sound that someone was pounding the door. I wished that my body was not numb.

CRACK...CRACK...

The sound was growing loud, I closed my eyes and listened to the sound.

Creak...Creak...

Mmm...Where's the sound of crack? Why the sound of creak...it was door? Why? I tried to listen something but it was dead silent...This room was still dark...I felt cold...The cold air touched my skins, I started to shiver. Why was this room become cold, not warm? I felt like there was 20 degree in this room.

Creak...Creak...

 I opened my eyes, tried to listen the sound but there was dead silent, again. Suddenly, my body was numb but it started to melt numb. I didn't understand why the numb was melting.

Footsteps...Footsteps...

 That...sound was back, hey...where did that person go? I had serious help, I was very dying....Wait a minute, my fingters were moving. I wanted to scream but my voice was not aloud enough and very clear.

 Footsteps...Footsteps...

I tried to get sit up but my body was still numb, I knew that could continue to melt it, then i could moved them.

 

{{do you like it? it look like not my write of story but honset, yes i wrote it...but i have no idea why i wrote this but it look really interest. please tell me whats you think about this story. please no hate comments. please rate//comments this. PLEASE...thanks.}}

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On May 9th 2008 rosebrugh Said :
rosebrugh a little long and i didn't read it all but i am guessing that it was good