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Secret 1 [REwrite] |
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Who I am...Who Are You? |
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I Never Meet Him in My Life 1 |
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Secret 9 |
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Do You Love Me? Ch. 2` |
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Secret 8 |
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Do You Love Me? [Chapter one] |
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I was a Sixth Grade dance! |
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Do You Love Me? Ch. 2`
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[[sorry to took long time to not post this. I have been busy with story, Secret. Now, i finally posted this. And sorry.]]
Jessica take a big sigh, she turn around slowly, her head is down. She stare at boy's shoes, it is black with white DC. Jessica gasp, It-it-it-it is TYLER!! "Tyler?" she looks up, catches Tyler's eyes, his face gets confused.
"Jessica...."Tyler turns to Drake and me. Tyler begins to speak to us, "Can I talk to Jessica for few minutes, please?" Jessica is behind him, she tries getting our attention, and she bounces as her arm front and backward in air. I think she is trying to fly like bird. Drake catches Jessica what she do, he crack up, I put my hand cover my left ear, pressure it, Drake hurt my left ear, but my right ear, I can't hear.
~Flashback~
"Mom, can you tell me about I was baby," I asked my mom, I was 5 years old as I climbed my mom's legs. My mom pulled me up, putted me on her legs.
"Okay, when you were baby, 3 months old. You were very sick, you cried a lot. Your doctor have no idea, he thought it was just sick that it bother you. About 2 weeks, you still cried, never stop. Your doctor finally decided to took test for your sick. He found out of your symptoms of sick. It make your right ear, inside of your drum, it lost." I made an expression puzzle face.
"What's my drum, mommy?" I asked her, she chuckled.
"Drum, it makes a sound which it you can hear it."
"Oh. Really? Can you test me?" I raised my arms up.
"Sure." Her head moved toward my right ear, start to whispered to me. "Hello" I can't hear it.
"Mmm? I can't hear you. Speak loud, please?" She nodded, whispered loud to my right ear, again, "hellllooooo?" I still can't hear it. I make a puzzle expression face, my head turn to her face.
"Mommy, I still cant't hear you."
"I know. Want to continue story?" she asked me, I nodded. "Your doctor was working on new medicine to heal your sick. He still tests your sick and left ear to make sure that your drum won't lose. About 2 or 3 weeks, he noticed that your drum was almost lost, he started to work on new medicine hard as he can finished it. By 3 days, he finally finished it, he gave you a medicine. You finally stop cried after he gave you a medicine." she smiled, I looked at her.
"Really? No wonder that my little brother tried to talk to me by my right ear but I didn't hear him." her head was shake as she laughed.
I yell at Drake, "STOP LAUGH SO LOUD!!! you hurt my left ear! GR..." I hits his left shoulder. I can hear him yell. I turn to Tyler, saw his expression face, it is confused. "Um...sorry. Yes, you may." I turn to Drake, he is rubbing his left shoulder, "oh, stop to be BABY! Let's go!" I push him to walk.
"Shut up, Molly!" Drake hiss at me, we walk away from Tyler and Jessica. I look over my shoulder to see what Tyler and Jessica doing.
Tyler turn around, look at Jessica, "Jessica...I need to talk-" he interrupted by Jessica start to talk.
"Talk to me?" Jessica put her hand on her hip. "I was so worry about you since tow days ago!! Ever you didn't call me!" I saw her eyes fill with tear. Suddenly, someone stop walk, I accident to crash someone's body, my arm flew into air and hits the books that someone hold it. The books fell out of someone's arm.
"I am sorry, Jessica." Tyler's eyes stare at Jessica's but she look away from his eyes. "I won't do it, again. Baby, I promise." Tyler begs Jessica.
"You promise me?" Should I give him an other chance? Jessica thought.
I look at someone who I accident crash into someone. Oh my god...I thought.
Cliffhanger! :) I need your help! You can tell me any good idea that i should add some story in there! :) plus, I will working on story, "Secret 9" and new story but i dont know whats title is. i still think about it! COMMENT/RATE please!! RATE must be 10 to above! :) Thanks for read! ~Nic
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| On June 14th 2008 ACTRESS08 Said : | |
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AND ALSO YOU REALLY NEED TO WORK ON YOUR TENSES BECAUSE SOMETIMES I COULDN'T FOLLOW ALONG AND IT REALLY MADE ME LOST. |
| On June 14th 2008 ACTRESS08 Said : | |
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WHY D0 EVERYONE INSIST ON PRESSURING PEOPLE TO RATE THEIR STORIES. YOU GUYS ALWAYS SAY, MUST BE TEN RATES, OR MUST BE 15. IF YOU ARE A MEMBER OF TESTRIFFIC THEN THE WHOLE PURPOSE IS TO WRITE BECAUSE YOU LOVE TO, YOU'RE NOT SUPPOSE TO WRITE JUST TO SEE HOW MANY RATES YOUR STORY WILL GET.
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| On April 30th 2008 muffinbobeat48 Said : | |
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Um...couldn't follow at all. |
| On April 24th 2008 Teliana Said : | |
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kmp |
| On April 21st 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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plz kmp!! |
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| On April 17th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Kmp.. |
| On April 17th 2008 Equasha Said : | |
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plz keep me posted |
| On April 17th 2008 jesskicker101 Said : | |
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omg keep goin i love ur storys |
| On April 17th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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Awesome! |
| On April 17th 2008 chorusgal Said : | |
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kmp please |
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| On April 17th 2008 gusty13 Said : | |
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very good kmp |
| On April 15th 2008 AnimaniacAsh Said : | |
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you could make Molly bump into someone who has got fame, and they start going out and Jessica gets jelis of Molly which would stur it up considering it looks like Jessica and tyler already have problems! (just an idea)
-Ash (: |
| On April 15th 2008 mathstar Said : | |
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Very good story. I was forget what ch 1 talk abt bec u haven't post 2 long timeee and now finally. So I have reread 1 then 2 and I uddy. Very good story
And I have difficult time read with flashblack but I reread and now I uddy |


