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Strange Nightmare 3

Horror Created on 4-3-08 Views(127) Story Rating G

Jennifer gasps when Carter holds the gun, still pointing it to her. Why did he killed Hunter? Jennifer thought and she was confused. "Sweetheart, why did I kill Hunter?" Carter says in sweet voice as Jennifer gasp. She nods, oh my god! He can read my mind..but how? She thought. Carter smiles evil, "because...he won't share with me to kill you. I was pissed off about it. Luckily, I did grab my gun before I get here." His smile fades, "I have praticed to read your mind," jennifer shocks when he say that, "because...I want to know what you think about." He put his gun down as his head turns down. Jennifer becomes less nervous when he put his gun down.

"Oh...look, I don't want to die or let you to kill me." Her eyes fill with tear. He look at her, umm...should I kill her? Carter thought. YES! You have to, or you will die if you didn't! Evil Carter says in his mind. Kill me? How? Carter thought as he walks forth to back, Jennifer watch him, it he is okay? Jennifer thought.


"SHUT UP!" Carter shouts at her, "DON'T USING THAT DAMN MIND,
PLEASE!" Jennifer gasps then nodding. Well, you know that I am
still inside your body, so I can move your hand up
, Carter
gasps when his hand raises up, see! I will put that gun on ur
head and shoot it.
Evil Carter tells in his mind "NOOOO!!!"
Carter cried out as his knees land on floor, Jennifer is confused
when he says that. Ever she want to think about it but she don't
want to make him to be piss off. "FINE! I WILL KILL HER, OKAY! BE
HAPPY!" Carter talks to himself. Jennifer's eyes wide big.


"WHAT! You are talking to yourself! Are you crazy?" Carter looks
at Jennifer's face that she is crying. "Are you kidding? It is
wrong to kill your own best friend. It's totally WRONG!!" she
shouts at him as she is sobbing hard. Please, don't let me
kill her!
Carter cried out thought. Too late, you promised
me...
evil carter's mind said. Carter shocks as his gun move
toward to Jennifer. "NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO..." Jennifer scream.


Carter suggest with his right arm and put gun to move away from
Jennifer, CARTER! CARTER! WHAT THE HELL ARE YOU DOING?
Evil Carter shouts at Carter in his mind. Try to save my best
friend, you dumbass!
Carter thought, as he smiles. Jennifer
caught it.


Oh my god! Is he going kill me? Jennifer thinks as she
suggests the rope to try to untied!

Damn you! I AM GOING KILL YOU! Evil Carter scream in
Carter's mind as his gun move to his head. Jennifer gasps when
she give up trying to untied. "Carter? Are you goin-" Carter cuts
her.

"No...I have two personalities. Evil Carter is in my mind. He can
control me. EVERYTHING!" he looks down, "Now, I made him pissed
off at me...."


"Why?" jennifer watchs him, he is serious?


"Because......I told him that I don't want to kill my own best
friend...." jennifer starts to cry. "And...he wants to kill me."
She gasps.

"Oh no, no, no, no..." GOOD BYEE, CARTERR!!!! Evil Carter
laughs evil in his mind.

"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" Carter screams as the gun shots his
head.  Jennifer screams as she cover her eyes. Carter falls
backward, hit the floor as the gun drops on floor. Jennifer opens
her eyes slowly. She sees dead Carter is laying on floor, she
cried.

"oh my....I lost my BEST friend!!!" Jennifer cried out. She is
stuck in chair.


Suddenly, she saw dead Carter is moving as she is become afraid.
Dead Carter starts to stand up.

 

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On April 15th 2008 counterpart Said :
counterpart i love it. i still suggest you have someone proof read it before you put it on here but otherwise good!
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On April 4th 2008 chorusgal Said :
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On April 4th 2008 mathstar Said :
mathstar Wowwww. Horrorrrr. Kmpppp. I totalllly love it
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On April 3rd 2008 Realmuckoy Said :
Realmuckoy Wooo!!!! This Is great. I absolutely adore your mind! XD