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Do You Love Me? [Chapter one]
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[[Hey, enjoy it! I hope you guys like my new story. ah, don't forget to RATE and comment it! :)]
"Have you see my boyfriend?" Jessica ask me as I open my locket. I look at her, her face look so worry. She wore pink hollister shirt, jean, and white necklace. Her books are in her arm. She do carry her books, all the times.
"No," I look away from her, I start to search for my Calculus book in my locket. I grab it but I freeze, "Hey, did you wait fro him in his locket?" I pull my calculus book out of my locket as I wait for her to answer my question. Jessica look down, I heard her to murmured. I look at her, "sorry, what you say?" as my eyesbrow rolled up.
"Oh sorry," she look up and stare at me. "I say, I did but he never been there," she frowned. I put my book in my bag then I shut my locket. I saw jessica's eyes with fill of water, "How would he get his stuffs from his locket. I meant he need his stuffs for his classes." The water drop down from her eyes.
"Oh, my Jessica! Don't cry," I give her a hugs. "Don't cry for your best friend! You know that your best friend can help you. That's me!" We have been best friend since we were in 1st grade.
"Hey my girls!" Drake yell at them in the hallway as he walk toward to them. He saw Jessica's face with tear, "Oh my god! JESSICA! WHATS HAPPENED!? Did Jerk dump you? Or hurt you? Do you want to me bea-" I cut him as I hit his shoulder. "Ow! That's hurt, Molly!" He hissed at me! I snug at him.
"Hey, don't worry!! We will help you to find him, I promise," I said to Jessica, I turn to Drake, "you better help her!" I put my finger to point to his face.
"Why? Why I should?" he put his hand on his hip.
"Because...we are her best friend, you dumb!!" I slap his head. I give him a evil eyes. He is our best friends, too. When I met Jessica before we met Drake when he moved here from West Virginia He was in 1st grade in half of season.
"Okay okay okay!! I promise!" Drake give me a evil eyes back. Jessica roll her eyes to us.
"Jessica...." the voice speak to her by behind her. She freeze to stand there as Drake and I are shock to stare at him.
[what you think? should i contuine to write this story? Let me know. thanks.
oh, dont forget to RATE it and...COMMENT of your opion(sorry i cant spell it) about my new story. ah dont tell me about my gramma or bad about it. it is my 3 times by write it. enjoy it! RATE it!]
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| On April 6th 2008 Toxxicduck Said : | |
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I like it, keep it going! |
| On April 6th 2008 Teliana Said : | |
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really like it can't wait to know what happens next kmp please |
| On April 5th 2008 flutytute Said : | |
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It's good, kmp! |
| On April 4th 2008 jesskicker101 Said : | |
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you so have to keep this story goin |
| On March 30th 2008 Slackee Said : | |
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kmp! love it! |
| On March 25th 2008 fawzia11 Said : | |
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kmp |
| On March 25th 2008 amptone Said : | |
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Very well done doll. |
| On March 24th 2008 Realmuckoy Said : | |
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Oh This is a good one. XD I like it. Keep it up |
| On March 23rd 2008 twilight8218 Said : | |
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i like it... some spelling mishaps but still good... kmp |
| On March 23rd 2008 xashleyrosex Said : | |
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kmp |
| On March 23rd 2008 upyours911 Said : | |
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I love this story! plz kmp |
| On March 23rd 2008 shitzmay Said : | |
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oooh, i want to see what you can do, kmpp |
| On March 23rd 2008 J3w3llC82890 Said : | |
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INTRESTiNG. KMPP.
*J* |
| On March 23rd 2008 mathstar Said : | |
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Keep it up. I loveeee ittt. I uddy u have spelling. I know u hate it.. That ok I uddy it |
| On March 23rd 2008 GROOVYChantele Said : | |
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cool x |
| On March 23rd 2008 hglnj94 Said : | |
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oooooo i like it!!!!!! kmp? |
| On March 23rd 2008 sadowski89 Said : | |
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oooo i like it so far!!! kmp |
| On March 23rd 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Kmp! Love this story! |
| On March 23rd 2008 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said : | |
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oh my bad. sometimes i was not think about spell. so thanks to tell me to know. next time, ill take careful with my spell. thanks |
| On March 23rd 2008 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said : | |
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oh my bad. sometimes i was not think about spell. so thanks to tell me to know. next time, ill take careful with my spell. thanks |
| On March 23rd 2008 bittyb1 Said : | |
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it was good. You know you said locket instead of locker?
anyway kmp!! |


