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Sercet 7
Horror
 Created on 3-20-08
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 Story Rating G
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[Hey guys, one of my best friend helped me to fix my gramma. so i hope those gramma r good. but if you think it horride then please dont complain about it. it is my best friend's best try and my best, too. thanks. enjoy it!]
Sarah and Laura hears the footsteps in Sarah's parents' room. They can hear people who are talk, "Where they going! They must be hide in anywhere house!"
"I know. Jeez, it is hard to find them. They must have good place to hide!" Sarah realize that voice, but she don't remember what his name. "Hey, you look under bed to see if they hide under there. And ill look for in the big cloest, okay?" Other man nodded, walkin toward the bed as he bends down, looks at under bed. He stands up, "nope, they r not under bed, sir!" One man sighs as he walks toward to big closet, and Laura become afraid as she grabs Sarah's hands. What are we DOINGG!!! Laura freaks out as her head turn toward to Sarah. Sarah shakes her head as her right hand put her mouth to say....hush. Laura nods as her eyes close to try to be calm down. One man reach the big closet.
Suddenly, someone shouted, "RYANNN!!! ROBSIN!!! COPS ARE COMING! WE HAVE TO GET OUT OF HOUSE, NOWW!!" Sarah realizes Ryan's voice, she knew him since they were kids. But he lose her when Brian came to their school as a new student. Sarah started fall in love with Brian and totally forget about Ryan. Ryan was became angry at Brain, he got fight with Brain. So he kick out of school 3 years ago.
"aw great! Come on, Robsin," they leave Sarah's parents' room as Sarah and Laura relax but Laura is still afraid, her body can't stop shaking. They heard that all of people are leaving as there has sirens.
"Don't worry, we are already safe, Laura. But, please stay here when I check around of house to make sure that boys are gone!" Sarah said, Laura nodding her head. She reach the big closet to open slow. Her head pop out of big closet to look around of her parents' room, see if there clear. She heard someone speak in hallway as she freeze in of middle room. It must be polices, she thought worried. The door is opening, she still not move, she feel like her body are numbs. One man enter her parents' room, she gasp as she walk backward. It not POLICE!
[oh, wwhat you think who it is? must be 10 votes! PLEASE VOTE and COMMENTS! :)]
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On April 4th 2008 jesskicker101 Said: |
| THIS SO GOOD I LOVE IT |
| On March 26th 2008 omfgjenfaith Said: |
| its getting so interesting, KMP |
| On March 25th 2008 fawzia11 Said: |
| kmp!
She shoulda stayed in the closet!!
Yikes!! |
| On March 22nd 2008 avder Said: |
| KMP!!! |
| On March 22nd 2008 J3w3llC82890 Said: |
| kmpp.
*J* |
| On March 21st 2008 Equasha Said: |
| they shud hav stayed in da closet! plz keep me posted |
| On March 21st 2008 chorusgal Said: |
| omg kmp please |
| On March 21st 2008 mathstar Said: |
| keep up. i want to know who is it. |
| On March 21st 2008 xashleyrosex Said: |
| kmp! |
| On March 21st 2008 dangg101 Said: |
| Damn!How dare you leave a cliff hanger!!I want to know who it is!! kmp please.LoVe It! 8D |
| On March 21st 2008 sadowski89 Said: |
| god damn i wanna know who it was!! kmp |
| On March 21st 2008 Realmuckoy Said: |
| Nice. Keep it up. and Keep Keeping me posted |
| On March 21st 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said: |
| Love it! =D kmp
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