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Secret 6

Drama Created on 3-15-08 Views(206) Story Rating G

"hey Sarah." the boy said.

"um..." Sarah don't know who he is, "do I know you?"

"Well, no. i am Laura's friend," Laura gasp as she stay low and hide behind of Sarah, "I saw her to run into your house. She is here?"

"Oh. Can you tell me what's your name?" Sarah curiously ask him.

"Oh. I not meant it to be rude you by without know what's my name. Here is, I am Jessie." Jessie look around of her house. Ugh, I can't that Jessie still following me! I need to tell Sarah to let me hide from him! Laura thought.

"Jessie? mm...well, I am so sorry that she was not here."

"What? Are you kidding?" Jessie said shock.

"No, I am not kidding. She leave here, like 15 minutes ago." Thanks god that Sarah save my life by crazy boy! Laura happy thought.

"BUT, I didn't see her to get out of ur front door."

"She went out of MY BACK DOOR! Duh So. sorry. Bye."

"FINE! When you see her then pleasw tell her that I need to talk to her!" Jessie said angry. He leave her house. Sarah close the door.

 "Thanks you so much." Laura said.

"No problem. I kinda can read your mind. So-" Laura stop her sentence.

"YOU CAN READ MY MIND?? That's cool!" Laura smile.

"Hahaha I know. So, what's up with Jessie and you?" Sarah curiously ask her.

"Well...He was my ex-boyfriend, He never leave me alone. I really tired of him. Yeah"

"Wow. i see. I think he better to MOVE ON so you would be free!" they laughs.

"I know. hahaha. whatev-" there pound on the door.

 "WHATS HELL YOU WANT TO!" both of them shouted at the door who people pound. Few minutes later, there no answer to them. There still pound as they are worrying. "WHY YOU DON'T ANSWER OUR DAMN QUESTION?" Laura shouted, again.

There stop pound on the door as they became stop worry. Suddenly, someone break the window as they scream as they run upstair.

 "OH MY GOSH! SOMEONE TRY TO BREAK-INTO MY HOUSE!" Sarah screaming. "Wait...if someone already in my house then we have to be QUIET!"

 "No. I think it better to call police which it is more safe!" They heard that someone already into Sarah's house. They gasp as they walk toward Sarah's room. SHIT! Where we should hide. mmm...in my closet? No. Shit! I have no hide! Wiat let me ask Laura. Sarah thought.

"I have no idea where we hide. Do you have idea where we should hide?" Sarah ask Laura.

"Um, where is your parents' room?"

"Follow me." Laura is following Sarah to toword her parents' room then into her parents' room. Laura closed the door and then, she look around Sarah's parents' room. Ah! THATS BIG CLOSET! Laura thought.

 

"Big closet? Are you sure?" Sarah ask her. She forget that Sarah can read her mind.

"Yes" Sarah start to walk to big closet as Laura follow her. Then she open the big closet, they get into the big closet. Laura closed the big closet. They try to hide of lots clothes, it work. They heard a footsteps in hall. Sarah, did you heard it? They getting closer us! Laura thought as she try to talk Sarah on mind.

"yes." Sarah said quiet. They gasp as someone open the door in Sarah's parents' room.

 

[[it bad? or good? i guess. so i think ill contiune write of secret 7, on tuesday or wednesday because i am writing on new story, Strange Nightmare! so COMMENT//RATE, PLEASE!]]

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On April 12th 2008 AnimaniacAsh Said :
AnimaniacAsh That was a RAD storie!, kinda wierd that whole mind reading thing but what the heck it's a storie anything can happen, in short it was great I'm not really into soaps but arfter reading bout' one or two of them and I was hooked, GREAT JOB! -Ash
On March 17th 2008 keegan17 Said :
keegan17 I like this one too. ♥
Closet one of my favorite words
On March 17th 2008 mathstar Said :
mathstar good. keep up. i agree. it kind hard to uddy but keep it up
On March 16th 2008 xashleyrosex Said :
xashleyrosex kmp
On March 16th 2008 Babydotz Said :
Babydotz Lol it was HARD to read... Sorry to be harsh but I got distracted. I think with a better scheme of grammar and all it would be much better. It has very good thought content tho...
On March 15th 2008 shadyishott Said :
shadyishott KMPP
On March 15th 2008 dangg101 Said :
dangg101 Oh Wow kmpp
On March 15th 2008 fawzia11 Said :
fawzia11 kmp
On March 15th 2008 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said :
xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Guys, I am sorry if I confused you. I know that I was kinda hurry up to type it and sometimes I didn't detail(sp?) it. I promise you guys that ill take my time to type it! So sorry about it.
On March 15th 2008 TemperanceBby Said :
TemperanceBby It has a good story line to it. but definately check your grammer, and your spelling, it was a little hard to understand. This line here: Then she open the big closet, they get into the big closet. Laura closed the big closet. We understand it is a big closet so you don't have to keep calling it the big closet over and over, it just sounds strange. But I think you're a great writer, and I hope you continue, please keep me posted!
On March 15th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx It is little funny, but very good story! It sort of scare me lol
On March 15th 2008 sadowski89 Said :
sadowski89 ooooo kmp!!!
On March 15th 2008 Equasha Said :
Equasha your story i great but cud u check ur grammar,its kind of hard 2 understand....plz keep me posted
On March 15th 2008 chorusgal Said :
chorusgal ooo kmp please this is good.
On March 15th 2008 Realmuckoy Said :
Realmuckoy I've read all of your "Secret" stories, and I like all of them. Keep writing and you could have some huge oppurtunities!!! XD XD XD