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Strange Nightmare
Horror
 Created on 3-12-08
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"No no no! Please don't," Jennifer sobbing as she run throught the forest, to away from the boy who is her ex-boyfriend, Hunter. Their relationship was not work because Hunter thought that Jennifer was cheat on him by her best friend, Carter, then and she found out that Hunter was doing on drugs. He was a killer, he almost to killed Jennifer but, lucky that Carter stopped him to stabbed her back.
"You can run but you can't hide from me!!" Hunter shouted as he chase her through in the forest. Jennifer hear him, she is become afraid of him. She contuine to run until he stop to chase her, but he won't.
"please DON'T!" she scream. He won't stop chase me! she thought. She try to look back but she crash the tree. "ow..." she said in pain, her body fell backward. She scream as her eyes eyes shut so tight. She hear the feetsteps as the voice with evil sound, "Heheheheh." Oh no! He get closer me! I am gonna DIED! she worried. Her right eye open and saw Hunter is stand right there next her. She shock that he saw him to raise his right hand with a knife up. Oh no...he gonna stab me, again. she thought as she try to get stand up but Hunter push her to stay there, she whinning. His right hand went fast to stab her gut as she scream.
[ohh interest? no say anything really bad about it. it is my second story! it is good? please rate//comments. thanks!]]
Comments
Please Login to post comments| On March 25th 2008 fawzia11 Said : | |
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kmp |
| On March 20th 2008 brokenvampire1 Said : | |
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awsome.next chapter plz ;] |
| On March 17th 2008 keegan17 Said : | |
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i like this, i like how the climax is exactly at the end, it makes you try to think of what happened next |
| On March 16th 2008 Equasha Said : | |
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really gud! just check ur grammar...plz keep me posted |
| On March 16th 2008 bowzlady1 Said : | |
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kmp! i wanna know what happens next |
| On March 15th 2008 counterpart Said : | |
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ok.. you have some grammer issues. have someone like a sibling proof read it, then post it again. it would be a lot less confusing |
| On March 14th 2008 muffinbobeat48 Said : | |
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Please tell me this isn't how you talk. I seriously want to be nice because you have good ideas, but I can't figure out how you can write with this grammar. |
| On March 13th 2008 chorusgal Said : | |
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oo this is good kmp please. |
| On March 13th 2008 mathstar Said : | |
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omggg soooo goooooodddd storry.. keeeepppp uppppp... i am interesting in "horror" i think she is dreaming...
but keep it up plss... tell me when 2nd come |
| On March 12th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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It is good. I know what next but ekk I don't know more happen. Lol kmp! |
| On March 12th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said : | |
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OMG! This is scary, but good. KMP :) |
| On March 12th 2008 sadowski89 Said : | |
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is she dreaming?? kmp. |
