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Secret 5
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 Created on 3-11-08
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That it is Laura! "LAURA!! I was plan to calls you but you already here," she became calm.
"Oh really? Mm...," Laura thought.
Sarah snap her, "why you are here?"
"Oh right, I heard that brian was not home. I being worry about it. I thought that he have told you." Laura worrying.
"Oh, yeah. I heard, too. Hey, come in." She politely to Laura.
"Thanks" she walk in her house. Sarah closed the door. "I have no idea where brian going."
"Me too. I think he mad at us?" she getting relaxing.
"Maybe? However, do you think we should looking for him?" Laura ask her.
Sarah thought, "Should we? Mmm...."Okay. Whe-" there knocking on the door. Laura and Sarah grasp. "Who it is, Laura?" she whispering to Laura.
"I-I-I-I don't kn-n-n-ow," Laura stamming. There knocking, again. They grasp. "I can't stand of that!!" Laura said scary.
"Me too." There pounce on the door. "Ugh!" she said. "WHATS HELL YOU WANT!" she shouted.
"JUST OPEN THE DAMN DOOR, NOW!" someone shouted at her.
"Do you think that I should open it?" Sarah ask Laura.
"I guess yeah. Hey, don't worry, I am behind you. Okay?"
"Yeah. No problem." Sarah sighing as she walk toward the door but someone pound it, again. Laura following her. Sarah's hands are shaking, she reaching the door and open the door. They are freeze to stand there.
[[i am about to stop write this story because no one rate or comment my "sercet 4" story. and i feel like i am stupid to write about it. so i am gonna stop it. if you dont want me to stop it then PLEASE rate//comment it so it would let me know that you r interest about it! so thanks. plus, i write new story....it would be coming, SOON!]]
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Please Login to post comments| On March 13th 2008 xxXrareloveXx Said : | |
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tell me!! its awesome but check your gramar! |
| On March 13th 2008 mathstar Said : | |
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i totally agree with them. i think u should continue but it is ur decision. i am interesting and want know who r there at door |
| On March 12th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Aww some ppl want u to continue writing more haha! I guess I agree with them too but that's ur decision. |
| On March 12th 2008 chorusgal Said : | |
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please don't stop I loe this story kmp please |
| On March 12th 2008 Equasha Said : | |
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yeah plz keep writing but check ur grammar...plz keep me posted |
| On March 12th 2008 sadowski89 Said : | |
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plz dont stop i luv it!!!! im dying to know whos at the door!!!! |
| On March 11th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said : | |
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aww... plz plz plz continue!! I'm dying to read more!!!! KMP when you do write more :) |
