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Asteria.

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Created on 9-19-08

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My heart had stopped. My breathing had been cut short &&i felt all color drian from my face. The pain was unbearable although it lasted barely more than a second. I felt a shudder escape me as i felt blood softly trickle down my neck. My body went limp as he lifted his fangs from my porcelein skin. He looked up at me with a spell of despair in his eyes. He looked almost sorry but at the same time helpless. His eyes were ice cold &&his voice was quiet but he spoke so sweet. "im so sorry" he said before he vanished. I put my hand inside my sleeve &&held it against my neck. "ahhh." i moaned as i sat up against the willow tree. The bite was begining to sting more &&more. He had left me in the middle of woods, almost in the middle of nowhere. It was about 11:30 &&The snow was begining to fall on this quiet little town. Where i was the snow was falling all the same. it was getting colder &&i knew that i had to find my way home soon or i would surely die. I pulled my hood up &&fixed my black &&white stripped scarf that, in a few mintutes or so, would be covered in blood. I wanted to get home &&sit by a fire. But i also felt week sitting there. I couldnt get up. I just leaned against the willow &&hugged my jacket closer to me. I felt myself begin to drift off. But i didnt think i was drifting off to sleep. I tried to fight it, i knew what was happening to me. My eyes were closing but i fought with them to stay open. I shook myself. I wasnt going to lose this fight. An hour went by. It was twelve in the morning. I was still fighting it. I was begining to feel weaker &&i knew that it was time to give up. I felt my heart beat begin to slow down. My breaths were getting shorter. Color wasnt going to come back to my body... That night in the woods, i died &&was re-born again. My name is Cameron Asteria. &&I am a vampire.

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On November 20th 2008 Shelby331 Said :

	AHHH! I love it...it makes me happy. :)

On September 24th 2008 1toughcookie Said :

	oh, wow i love it!!! i am a sucker for vampire storys :) love the description too, and the whole reborn thing, its wicked.

On September 19th 2008 momoleighann Said :

	i like this story you should definitley keep on writing this one!!

On September 19th 2008 ods411 Said :

	kmp!!!!!

On September 19th 2008 CRISSY10012 Said :

	me likey lots

On September 19th 2008 erickagere Said :

	I like it and I deffinately think you should continue. Plz check out my story if you have time and if you like plz subscribe.

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