Email:
Password:

Created By

Rate this Story

+36

Embed


My Stories
+ 21
Teardrops on My Guitar ::15::
+ 22
I Wonder *33*
+ 17
I Wonder *32*
+ 25
I Wonder *31*
+ 18
Lessons Learned 003
+ 28
Teardrops on My Guitar ::14::
+ 18
Lessons Learned 002
+ 22
I Wonder *30*
+ 19
Lessons Learned 001
+ 16
Lessons Learned
+ 27
Teardrops on My Guitar ::13::
+ 28
I Wonder *29*
+ 31
Teardrops on My Guitar ::12::
+ 12
Don't Happen Twice (Part 6)
+ 31
Teardrops on My Guitar ::11::
+ 28
Teardrops on My Guitar ::10::
+ 17
Don't Happen Twice (Part 5)
+ 30
I Wonder *28*
+ 14
Don't Happen Twice (Part 4)
+ 32
Teardrops on My Guitar ::9::

Teardrops on My Guitar ::4::

Authors Comments: If you have noticed, I have now copyrighted my stories, so no one can take them now. Read, Rate, & Comment, Thank you!
Drama Created on 8-8-08 Views(396) Story Rating PG13

Chapter 4

 

The whole journey on the way to picking up Tanner was silent. I figured it would be though. Jesse pulls up to the front space in the parking lot in front of the hotel. Tanner wasn’t out yet. He always takes forever to get ready.

 

“So where is he at then?” Travis asked.

 

“Oh you know how long he takes.” Jesse replied. “We probably won’t get on the road for another hour.”

 

“Guys he’s coming. I saw him in the lobby. Please, just act like you are happy to see him, ok?” I tell them.

 

“Yeah sure I will. Oh Tanner! So nice to see you; here let me squeeze those chubby cheeks of yours.” Jesse said sarcastically, acting like he was some Grandma. Tanner wasn’t there yet to here what he was saying.

 

I get put the window down in the car and look up at Tanner, smiling at me handsomely. Even though Tanner can be immature, he always finds a way to brighten up my day.

Travis was leaning up against the car Tanner sat his to duffel bags on the ground, hinting that Travis should put his bags in the trunk. Travis rolls his eyes and uncrosses his arms, then picking up the bags and throwing them in the trunk. I could hear Jesse let out a small chuckle in the driver’s seat.

 

“Hey,” Tanner said, softly.

 

“Hey,” I answered back with a smile.

 

Tanner lightly gave me a peck on the lips that made me flutter. This defiantly wasn’t the Tanner I was talking to only twenty minutes before.

 

“We better get going if we want to get on the road by nine.” Jesse retorted.

 

“Yeah we probably should.” I responded.

 

Tanner opens the car door the same time as Travis. He sat in the seat behind me as Travis sat behind Jesse. Jesse began backing out of the parking lot and headed for the exit and turns left away from the hotel.


For about five miles up the road it was silent and if you know me, I hate silence.

 

“Hey Tanner I have a dumb question to ask you,” Jesse said.

 

“Ok,” Tanner reacted.

 

Oh great. I thought. What’s smart ass Jesse going to come up with now?

 

“How come you were here in this hotel anyway? Don’t you live a few minutes away?” he asked.

 

You know, that was one question that I never would have thought of. The question kept rolling threw my mind until he replied with, “My parents kicked me out and I didn’t have anywhere else to go, so I was staying here a couple of days.”

 

“Oh,” Jesse replied, with his left hand on the wheel and the other resting on the armrest.

 

I could just tell by the look on Jesse’s face that he thought he was lying. And the thing is why Tanner wouldn’t have told me this before is beyond me. I haven’t seen him in over a week til now. Is that why he never called to tell me anything?

 

Unexpectedly, I hear my phone beeping as if I had got a text message from someone and the only people that text me is Jesse and Travis. It’s seldom that Tanner might, but usually we like talking back and fourth to each other.

 

I take my phone out of my right back pocket and look at it. Travis? Why would he send me a text if we are in the car at the same time? I looked back at Travis who winked at me. I take it as he had something rude to say about Tanner that he didn’t want to say to me with him being there.

 

Travis: He’s annoying.

 

I laugh a little and Jesse looked over at me, wondering why I just laughed. I showed him my message on the phone from Travis.

 

“Me?” Jesse questioned.

 

“No not you,” I tell him.

 

A brief pause swept by. “Oh you mean,” I nodded, he was referring to Tanner. “Ok I know what you mean now.” We both chuckled, so did Travis, but he didn’t want to show it too much sitting next to Tanner.

 

“What’s so funny?” Tanner wondered.

 

“Oh I just got a text from one of the big shots for our bad. He’s just getting us pumped up for the concert in Vegas.” I explained.

 

Yeah, but he didn’t know it was my band mates. Oh Tanner, why do you have to be such a blonde? I mean he had to have seen Travis texting on his phone if he was right beside him, right? We kept laughing for who knows how long, except for Tanner.

 

© 2008 by xHickChick789x [KNG]

 

 

Comments

Please Login to post comments
On October 16th 2008 Griffin2400 Said :
my picture
its really good, but how did you copywrite ur story?
On September 18th 2008 lovedaisy Said :
lovedaisy u should have dumped tanner ages ago, it seems like u felt sorry for him, personally ma vote would go to jesse, i think u like him nd he seems nice. omg i sound like a mom. anyway this is really funny
On August 18th 2008 Zimba1001 Said :
Zimba1001 good
On August 16th 2008 counterpart Said :
counterpart hahaha tanner.... lol!
On August 13th 2008 SaveTheSaved3 Said :
SaveTheSaved3 Its getting better. I like that.
On August 11th 2008 imtheonlyme4 Said :
imtheonlyme4 i love this story!!!!!
On August 10th 2008 bluecat62892 Said :
bluecat62892 love the storie
On August 10th 2008 spazfosho Said :
spazfosho Haha, kinda mean, but definately funny. :] I'm gonna subscribe.
On August 10th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x

On August 10th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx I like it when u copyright. Now I can do the same thing from u. Hmm

funny guys in story! :) blonde moments *smh* yep lol
On August 10th 2008 deshanna13 Said :
deshanna13 that is tight how you copyrighted it i like it tho kmpp!
On August 9th 2008 stephjane Said :
stephjane lol.. thats funny. well kmpp!! ilove it.
On August 9th 2008 rebelshawtieyo Said :
rebelshawtieyo OMG I LOOOOOOOOVE it the texting part was just too funny and cute lol poor tanner, but I am a little curious about the hotel hmmmm kmpp =)
On August 9th 2008 justthegirlxox Said :
justthegirlxox oh that boys a cheater, and she knows it. ;] ha, i love your story though. the copyrighting is neat! haha, maybe the chick will get a clue and drop it, yeah? lol, rating! :DD
On August 9th 2008 Aegle Said :
Aegle lovvee eit.
On August 9th 2008 sportshottie4e Said :
sportshottie4e cheater!!!love it
On August 9th 2008 MissCheerCap Said :
MissCheerCap He's cheating. I feel it. Haha I hope She spends some time with Jesse or Travis. I like them both!
On August 9th 2008 taraluvsjosh19 Said :
taraluvsjosh19 yep he is cheating
On August 9th 2008 angelofpurity5 Said :
angelofpurity5 wow thats awesome but im gonna have to agree with everyone else when i say that he's cheating on her plus i think its a great idea about getting your work copyrighted
On August 9th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem I think Travis is cheating on her to. If he is kicked out that would be awful!
On August 8th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess i also think that Tanner is cheating on her, they ALL should think that. and for dating wise, because i sont think Tanner will be along much longer, i dont know yet, i mean both travis and jesse are funny, but i dont really know anything else about them. but i like the fact that jesse's name is close to mine! lol. and her sister has the same name. =D
On August 8th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess nice idea to try and claim your stuff i didnt think i had time to read another story since im reading like 20 others but this one had me CRACKING UP!!!!!! lol please keep me posted on this one as well. thank u and i hope that ur issue resolves. =)
On August 8th 2008 XxBubblyBabexX Said :
XxBubblyBabexX do i have to subscribe or will you kmp?
On August 8th 2008 LoveandHate04 Said :
LoveandHate04 this is greaaatttt!
On August 8th 2008 blondechickx3 Said :
blondechickx3 its great.