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I Wonder *22*Authors Comments: Ok, I'll post more soon, but please rate the last few chapters up. It's just so weird that all of a sudden the ratings went down. Please!! I have a slight writer's block with this story so that's why it's shorter. Too bad someone was dumb enough to steal it.
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Chapter 22
I rush out from behind the booth I was sitting in and hurry out the door with the full cup of hot chocolate in my hand. It's probably lukewarm by now, but at least it was scalding. I jump into my car, slamming my door behind me. I grab my phone and start dialing Jason's number as I put my seatbelt on.
"Hello?" he answered.
"Jason, where are you?" I ask.
"Rose?" he mumbles.
"Yes, just tell me where you are at?" I say.
"I'm at the country store right now, running errands for my mom. Where are you?" he questions.
"This early in the morning?"
"She always does that. Now, can you please tell me where you are at?" Jason demanded, getting impatient.
"Jason that's not important. I just want you to know I'm alright and you don't have to worry." I tell him, starting up the ignition.
"Well, I won't worry so much unless you tell me where you are-"
Click. I hung up on him before he could say anymore. I didn't mean to sound so rude to him on the phone, but I was furious right now, knowing that my so called 'parents,' lied to me all this time.
I pull out of the parking lot, while sipping a bit of the hot chocolate. Yuck! I make a sour face. Cold chocolate. I never like it like that. Warm is bad enough, but that's just nasty. Now that I just wasted all but five dollars on a hot chocolate that I barely even touched.
I sped down the road at like 65 mph in a 45 zone. I was flying like a bat out of hell. Suddenly I hear my cell phone ring. I wasn't in any hurry to answer it. It's probably Jason wondering why I just hung up on him.
I look down at my bright, shiny, blue phone in the cup holder. In big bold letters read, DAD. Yeah, some dad he is too.
I just left it ring the whole time. I don't want to talk to him over the phone. I want to see him, face to face and chew him out. My 'mother' always had a confused and suspicious side, but I'm mad at both of them, more to my dad than anyone. Or should I say Uncle Ryan.
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| On August 10th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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I love it already! I want more lol! :) it is good. |
| On August 9th 2008 CRISSY10012 Said : | |
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wow cant wait till the next one |
| On August 9th 2008 jordann5 Said : | |
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this is def very goodd
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| On August 8th 2008 taraluvsjosh19 Said : | |
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yay its getting good |
| On August 8th 2008 PorshaS Said : | |
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kmp its getting good |
| On August 8th 2008 VickyLubDanii Said : | |
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nasty cold hpot choclate I agree
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| On August 7th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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It's great! I get writers block all the time! The best thing to do is not rush into it. Then it wont turn out as good! |
| On August 7th 2008 jirrith2007 Said : | |
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I really love your story so much! She finally knows and things are gonna get even better! Dont worry about writers block, well all get it! :D and if the dumb ass was smart, she would have said that you copied the other story to this, being as this is the SEQUEL to another story. lol. Bad move on her part. I |
| On August 7th 2008 Patriciaxox Said : | |
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Lol ur a big hit hon!! Congrats (: i rated and subscribed too. |
| On August 7th 2008 albanianvukaj Said : | |
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well, i agree with everyone below me! i love this story. and that girl kendra is just pathetic |
| On August 7th 2008 nickynicole901 Said : | |
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omg..wow i cant wait till chapter 23..OMG PLEASE KEEP ME POSTED!!! |
| On August 7th 2008 DefineEmo Said : | |
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Wow, this is great. Can't wait until the next chapter. |
| On August 7th 2008 blondechickx3 Said : | |
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wow.i cant wait for the next one! |
| On August 7th 2008 lonely244444 Said : | |
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Don't go killin people! |
| On August 7th 2008 justthegirlxox Said : | |
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loved the update! and about that chick, the one with the low self-esteem, i wouldn't worry about her too much. it's such a shame, your story is so good, and people can't come up with their own, so they just copy yours. you should actually be proud people would stoop to the level of copying your story, since they couldn't make one better. but! love love love the update! |
| On August 7th 2008 toni2006 Said : | |
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i loved it its really good |
| On August 7th 2008 XoLOLAXo Said : | |
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wow....im so in LOOOVE with this story! kmpp!!! |
| On August 7th 2008 yeaitzJess Said : | |
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yes, but uncle ryan WAS cool back in his day, lol. he only cared, but they did lie to her for an unreasonable amount of time. And then she'll need Jasons comfort more than ever now. PLEASE KEEP ME POSTED!!!!!!!!! |
| On August 7th 2008 11Dreamgirl11 Said : | |
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Woa she is / But its Getting Great |
| On August 7th 2008 mysterywhateve Said : | |
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Wow she is ticked! |
| On August 7th 2008 FruitcakeCaz Said : | |
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damn... but she cant exactly have a go at them- they did raise her afterall |
| On August 7th 2008 MissCheerCap Said : | |
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Nice. |


