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Authors Comments: OK, there is a new character in this part and probably the only time you'll here about her. If you don't know who she is, refer back to the first story "Trying' to Stop Your Leaving'." She wasn't mentioned a whole lot in the story though. RRC please; Thanks!
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Chapter 21

I don't know how far I drove until I reach a coffee shop outside of Lincoln. I must have went a few miles more than I had expected. It was early in the morning and I was tired as hell. I need some thing to wake me up.

I guess I can hang around here for now. I said to myself, as I start getting out of my car.

I lock the car doors and walk inside. I stand up at the cashier and order a hot chocolate cause I'm not a big fan of coffee.

"$4.42 please," said the woman behind the counter, who looks majorly disagreeable. Someone didn't have their coffee this morning.

As I'm standing there, waiting for my hot chocolate, I feel like someone is staring me down. I'm not sure if that is a good thing or not though. For all I know it could be Caleb. I grab my hot scalding hot chocolate at sat down a booth, by myself. A lady about my parents age, looking down at her newspaper and back up at me. It was very intriguing.

"I don't mean to sound rude in any way, but do I know you? You keep looking over at me like we've known each other forever." I ask her.

She notices I'm very angered. "I'm sorry it's just that I believe I know your parents, Ryan and Brittany." she says.

"How do you know them?" I question, motioning her that she can sit in the seat in front of me; and she did.

"I was good friends with your mother." she began. "But you know they aren't your biological parents, don't you?"

I look at her and laugh. "What are you talking about? Are we mentioning the same parents because my parents would lie right to my face."

"I'm serious. My names Melody Grey. If you told your parents about me, they would know who you mean. Your real parents are Karrie and Caleb Evans. Your father died saving your real mother from getting hit by a car and your mother passed away having you. Your parents were the couple that everyone wanted to be. They were meant to be together. There love life was like some romance novel. Rose, they are your biological parents. Ryan and Brittany are your Aunt and Uncle."

I could believe what this woman was talking about. Was she really talking about the same people as I was? Is that ghost, Caleb, my father?

"But if this is true, how come my parents never told me?" I wonder.

"Protection, they are only protecting you for your own good. There are a ton of bad people out there that were after your family in the past before you were born. I sense that they'll be coming back soon. It has to do a lot of why you moved here from New York City." Melody explains.

I didn't say anything as I let her continue.

"I'm already saying enough as it is. Ryan and Brittany are the ones that should be telling you, not me. I blab my mouth off a little more than I should. I best be on my way."

"Wait," I shout, as she looks back at me. "Will I ever see you again?"

Melody smiles. "I hope so; you seem like such a sweet girl. Ryan and Brittany sure taught you well." And like that she walks out of the coffee shop, minding her own business.

How? How could I be, adopted? I don't think protection like what Melody said has anything to do with this. Why? Why wouldn't they have told me this sooner? It breaks my heart inside. Maybe what Caleb was saying before is true, that we are related. He's my father.

I've gotta head back home and get to the bottom of this, even though I'm so beat. I have got to find out why they aren't telling me any of this.

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On August 10th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Wow, I love it! :) :) can't wait!! :)
On August 9th 2008 CRISSY10012 Said :
CRISSY10012 wow that is so cool i should have expected it better
On August 7th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
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Rate it up and I'll post the next part sometime today.

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PorshaS good I loved it kmp
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VickyLubDanii hey ! LOVE IT IM A !# Fan
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BleuPoison21 I love your story and i cant believe someone would do that and she has my user name in her about me part and i dont know y
On August 6th 2008 DefineEmo Said :
DefineEmo Omg...this is getting good. o.o Looking forward to the next chapter and OMG- wtf? That's so friggin messed up.
On August 6th 2008 jirrith2007 Said :
jirrith2007 She finally knows the truth!! and I can't believe Kendra0066 would DO that? WHAT THE HELL KIND OF FUCKED UP PERSON WOULD STEAL ANOTHER PERSON'S STORY? I'm sorry for the language, but you are such a great writer and don't deserve someone to do that. it's flattering that they like your work, but to have them steal it? She needs her a$$ to be kicked!!!! She just needs to get a life!
On August 6th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x

A STUPID USER STOLE MY “I Wonder” STORY! Kendra0066 is the one who had posted it. She says she wants to kill me because I didn’t accept her friends request. wtf?


On August 6th 2008 blondechickx3 Said :
blondechickx3 i would be soo mad if that happened to me.omg.its great though.
On August 6th 2008 lonely244444 Said :
lonely244444 if i was her i would be confused out of my mind!
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justthegirlxox ohh dang! that sucks! i love the update, though.
On August 6th 2008 Patriciaxox Said :
Patriciaxox Aggh that sucks. Having her find out that way i mean. Keep me posted!
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XoLOLAXo yay! i can't wait to see what happens!
On August 6th 2008 toni2006 Said :
toni2006 i love it can't wait for the next one Kmpp
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nickynicole901 i do rly want u 2 write more..omg..plez kmp!!!
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piratesrule78 srry i haven't read in awhile i have been on vacation but just to tell u i commented and rated the other ones so ya kmpp
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yeaitzJess FINALLY!!!!!!!!!!!!! cant wait to read the next one!
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muse4apoem I really like it! :)
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On August 6th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
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Please Rate up chapter 20 and 21 if you want me to post more. Thank you!