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Tryin' to Stop Your Leavin' {26}

Romance Created on 6-12-08 Views(252) Story Rating G

Chapter 26

 

“Mom, I don’t think I can do this!” I yell.

 

“Take it easy. You’ll be just fine.” She replies to me.

 

Ryan was on my right side and my mother was on the other. I was in so much pain I feel like I could just give up right now.

 

I remember that if I didn’t make it, I gave a nurse a note so no one would be so hurt. I had names figured out for the baby; Rose for a girl and Caleb for a boy.

 

I was so miserable and full of pain, I just can’t take it anymore. I want Caleb by my side. He’s the only one that can really help me through this. I gave up.

 

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Karrie didn’t make it through the pregnancy, but her baby did. It was a girl. The only thing left of Karrie, was a note.

 

Ryan and Brittany were out in the waiting room, with Karrie’s mom, when the doctor came out and told everyone the news.

 

 

Dear Family,

 

I know if I don’t make it, I’ll be with Caleb again; the one I’ve always loved and cared to be with forever. I don’t have a will, and I don’t care who gets my things, but I really want everything to go to Ryan and Brittany. Both of you mean to the world to me and I’m glad I put you two in charge of the baby. If it’s a girl, I chose the name Rose Marie. If it’s a boy, I thought of the name Caleb Alexander. Please, don’t be sad for long. I know for sure I’m in a much better place than this drama hole. Live happily, I’ll be looking down to all of you.

 

Yours truly,

 

Karrie

 

 

Ryan fell to the ground and broke down in tears. He couldn’t stand knowing that his twin sister is gone just like his best friend, but he knew that they were both in a better place and there couldn’t be anywhere better.

 

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Ryan and Brittany did take custody over Karrie’s baby, who they did name Rose, but they had to change their last names for safety reason. So the baby girl’s full name is Rose Marie Aldean now.

 

They moved up to New York City and stay up there till Rose turned 17. Ryan’s mother moves out to Nebraska so she wouldn’t be in any danger by Ryan’s father, (By the he was put in jail for what he did to Caleb, Along with Cindy and Dylan.)

 

Rose isn’t all that happy about it.Ryan and Brittany also had a child of their own; a baby boy and they named him after Caleb, just like what Karrie wanted if she had a boy.

So far, everything seems to be ok, but there are a few surprises once they move to Nebraska for family issues. Plus, Rose doesn’t know that Ryan and Brittany aren’t her biological parents. Will she find out from them soon before someone else ruins the secret?

 

 

 

*To be continued with the Sequel*

If you read the sequel to this story called: “I Wonder,” you will find out what happens there and what effects are caused on Rose’s life. Can she swap her old life with a new one?

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

(Authors Note: Sorry it was a little fast, but yes this is the last chapter. Sad way to end it, but I will have the sequel out later on. Please message me know if you want to be kept posted on that.)

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On June 24th 2008 brndnfrnndz Said :
brndnfrnndz great story. loved every chapter from every story. keep it up. I think u can b a writer when you grow up. U should def try to make a carreer out of it. good luck
On June 18th 2008 FruitcakeCaz Said :
FruitcakeCaz wow- cool stuff
On June 13th 2008 sportshottie4e Said :
sportshottie4e kmp
On June 13th 2008 kristine1246 Said :
kristine1246 kmpp
On June 13th 2008 PopChile Said :
PopChile I loved it!!!
On June 13th 2008 raetakeninluv1 Said :
raetakeninluv1 kmp
On June 12th 2008 Patriciaxox Said :
Patriciaxox Keep me posted on the sqeual. I liked this story.
On June 12th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Omg I can't believe it she died but obviously she truly love her child so she gave up for her twin bro and brit. Omg, it almost make me cry.. Kmp on next new story
On June 12th 2008 italiangurl101 Said :
italiangurl101 plzzzzzzz kmp i love it
On June 12th 2008 musiclover2050 Said :
musiclover2050 kmpp
On June 12th 2008 disneyfan12 Said :
disneyfan12 Omg... I can't believe karrie died! KMP♥
On June 12th 2008 disneyfan12 Said :
disneyfan12 Omg... I can't believe karrie died! KMP♥
On June 12th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess awwwww well at least karrie got to choose the names and che is now with caleb and i hope that the parents can tell her but obviuosly prob. not and i hope that rose and every one in the end is happy and safe :D
On June 12th 2008 piratesrule78 Said :
piratesrule78 lol the baby's name is Rose. That's my name. I feel special lol. Loved the story can't wat for the sequel.
On June 12th 2008 PorshaS Said :
PorshaS good kmp
On June 12th 2008 toxxicskank Said :
toxxicskank ugh my plane was delayed so i decided to read this. I loved it. Kmp on the sequal
On June 12th 2008 TheScarletVeil Said :
TheScarletVeil keep me posted on the sequal please.