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Laughed Until We Cried (Chapter 12)

Drama Created on 6-11-08 Views(230) Story Rating G

Chapter 12

~ Ashley's POV:

"What do you want from me?" I sneered at Eric as the guy I suppose was Hector, left the room.

"You look beautiful," he said, touching his hand on my face as I jerked away. "You know you don't have to act so rude."

"Rude? I have all rights to act this way. You have no reason kidnapping me. What's this all about Eric? So what if I left you; you were treating me like garbage. You didn't give a damn about me." I growled.

"Ha! Yeah, the only reason why I was acting that way was because you were always hanging out with that Kenny kid." he hollered.

"He happens to be my friend. I spent as much time with him as I did you. If you don't remember, I turned him down and went with you instead the night before I left you." I screamed back.

"Don't mouth me!" he shouted.

"I'm not mouthing you. I'm telling the truth. You didn't care about me from the start now did you? You were always with me when you were with other friends and you were half drunk or whatever it was that you were."

He stared at me. I could tell he was surprised that I said that stood up to him like that.

He sighed. "You know you still have that big mouth of yours I always hated the most about you." He sneered.

"I'm glad," I glared at him.

He rolled his eyes. "You know, I don't know why I even bothered on trying to get you back. At least Kenny won't be here to come after you though." he replied.

I looked at him, akwardly. "What are you talking about?"

His eyes got wide. I could tell just by the look on his face that he did something to him, that probably wouldn't make him save me. I closed my eyes.

"What did you do to him?" I yelled.

No response. I raised my voice louder. "Tell me! What did you do to Kenny?"

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~ Kenny's POV:

As I only a few feet away from my house, I spotted Hector outside my house. I drive by slowly, not wanting to make a scene. I couldn't tell what was going on, but I knew that Ashley was in there.

I stopped and parked my car out back behind my house quietly. I walk over to the back porch and was tackled by someone, most likely Hector.

I threw them across the yard, but didn't stop him. I kicked him in the stomach and elbowed him in the back. Needless to say, he wasn't much of a fighter so he was knocked for a while.

I creep into my house. Everything was dark. I tip-toed more into the house but I heard clicking of gun or whatever as it was pressed to my temple. I put my hands up.

"What do you think you're doing here?" Eric asked.

"Where's Ashley?" I questioned.

I saw her walking slowly out from the dark corridor. I didn't know why she didn't come over to me and help me out, because she was more of a brave one than I ever was.

"She's safe here with me. Now, if you or her get closer to each other," he began. "I'll have to kill you." He finished, cocking the gun.

Well, this looks like it's it then. What to do now?

 

 

~ Sorry for it being so boring, but I think I'm only going to have one more chapter and that's it. Sorry to the people that really enjoyed this story. I just don't have intrest in it anymore. RRC please. Thanks!

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On June 12th 2008 icsgrad07 Said :
icsgrad07 awwww no more?
On June 12th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem Woah! I was not expecting Kenny to run into that trouble! KMP! :)
On June 11th 2008 Sammybabe92 Said :
Sammybabe92 oooo...kmp
On June 11th 2008 BabyPenguins Said :
BabyPenguins its good though...
On June 11th 2008 Omniton Said :
Omniton *screams like a little girl* DON'T KILL KENNY!!! Awesome story. Luvs it! Kmp! GOD BLESS YOU!
On June 11th 2008 TheScarletVeil Said :
TheScarletVeil keep me posted please.
On June 11th 2008 piratesrule78 Said :
piratesrule78 awwwww but its really good love it kmpp
On June 11th 2008 chorusgal Said :
chorusgal ooo I like it kmp please
On June 11th 2008 PorshaS Said :
PorshaS kmp
On June 11th 2008 PorshaS Said :
PorshaS good
On June 11th 2008 justthegirlxox Said :
justthegirlxox great update. and it's cool that your not into this story anymore. it happens to everyone, but kmp for the next one? thanks.
On June 11th 2008 raetakeninluv1 Said :
raetakeninluv1 kmp
On June 11th 2008 thuhchris Said :
thuhchris Keep me posted
On June 11th 2008 bittyb1 Said :
bittyb1 yeah, there are certain parts where I lost interest. but stick with it. it's still good!
On June 11th 2008 moosegurl01 Said :
moosegurl01 kmpp
On June 11th 2008 DefineEmo Said :
DefineEmo I think I see where you might've lost interest. But thank you for writing this. It was great. Please kmp for the last chapter.
On June 11th 2008 misha9944 Said :
misha9944 niiice.
On June 11th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Ohhhh kmppp plzzzz
On June 11th 2008 RJbork09 Said :
RJbork09 kmpp
On June 11th 2008 thatchickunew Said :
thatchickunew kmp
On June 11th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess i wonder what eriks going to do with ashley and i dont think he can get rid of kenny that easily please keep me posted
On June 11th 2008 twilight8218 Said :
twilight8218 I liked it and that's okay I understand the whole losing interest thing that has happened to me many times in the past. keep me posted!