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Laughed Until We Cried (Chapter 11)
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Chapter 11
~ Kenny's POV:
I don't know why I wasn't going with them. I'd be out of my mind not going. Ashley means everything to me. I couldn't just see her get hurt. I didn't know where Elyse got to, but I knew she would probably find some way to stop me from going and finding Ashley, because I needed rest. To me, rest is for wimps. I could take care of myself.
I stumbled to my car and got inside it, starting it up. I felt a stabbing pain shoot threw my entire body, especially my head. Everything was practically a blur. I shook my head and everything became visible and clear again.
I pull out of the parking lot, as a few cops did the same. When they were out of site, I sped out of there like a speeding bullet. As I was driving I heard my cell phone ringing. Since it was hooked up to my car phone, I just pressed the speaker and I said hello.
"Kenny, Ashley's gone! We don't know where she's at." Jake shouted over the phone.
"See I told you they were after her." I said, smirking to myself.
"Ok, fine I was wrong, as always. Tia's going nuts over here and- Whoa wait! Are you driving? It sure sounds like it." he asked.
Damn it! I mumbled.
"Don't worry about that." I replied.
"Can you pick us up in the next few minutes?" he questioned.
"No, I can take care of this myself." I told him.
"And when you get back, will you tell me everything that's going on?" Jake said.
"Promise," I responded.
"Be careful bro!"
"I will, I will."
I disconnected the speaker and hung up the phone. I knew that was kind of rude, but I was going over 80 mph and there was no time for stopping. I knew exactly where they were at and it was the only place I could think of. I was off to my house.
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~ Ashley's POV:
I felt drowzy. I had no idea what was going on and what had just happened to me, because I felt like I had just been hit with a baseball bat. I heard a door fly open, but I couldn't see anything. I had a blindfold over my eyes. The scent of the place was very familar, but I couldn't place.
As a matter of fact, it smelled too familar. I know that scent anywhere. Kenny. The soft, sweet aroma I smell everyday at school, lingered around the room. The only thing I didn't get was, why was I here, blindfolded and taken in the middle of the night?
I felt a cold hand on my arm, moving up to my shoulder. I tried shaking it away, but my hands were tied behind my back. I was sitting on a chair for sure.
"How've ya been?" a low voice asked me.
"Who are you?" I demanded answer. "Tell me."
I heard other footsteps surronding me, but I knew it was only two people.
"Hector, leave us alone for awhile. I think Ashley and I have some unfinished buisness to take care of." said another voice.
I know that voice anywhere. The simply evil ex of mine. His hot breath against my ear made tingling sensation go up my spine. I knew I was in for a big surprise. I know for sure no one knows I'm here, and that I'll probably be tortured by the end of the night.
~ Sorry if this is too long, or too short for any of you. I'm really not feeling this story very much anymore. I'll only have a few more chapters yet. The ratings have went down quite a bit anyway. Enjoy anyways! Thanks 4 all your support. 12 will be out tomorrow.
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| On June 12th 2008 icsgrad07 Said : | |
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nicely done |
| On June 11th 2008 piratesrule78 Said : | |
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Eric is going to torture her probably. this is really good though kmpp |
| On June 11th 2008 Sammybabe92 Said : | |
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good job kmp |
| On June 11th 2008 muse4apoem Said : | |
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Ahhhh! I hope nothing bad happens to her! You still need to keep going with this! |
| On June 10th 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Oh my goodnesss kmppp |
| On June 10th 2008 DefineEmo Said : | |
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Hmm, I understand how you don't feel it. ( all though I do hope it's just writer's block ) Well, great job anyway. Kmp :) |
| On June 10th 2008 yeaitzJess Said : | |
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look twenty votes lol please write the next one and honestly i kinda like this one better now that caleb has died |
| On June 10th 2008 yeaitzJess Said : | |
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NO I LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE KEEP WRITING MORE I CANT WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT and please keep me posted |
| On June 10th 2008 yeaitzJess Said : | |
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NO I WANT TO READ MOREEE I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THIS STORY PLEASE KEEP WRITING MOREEEEEEEE |
| On June 10th 2008 chorusgal Said : | |
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kmp please and I like this story its very interesting |
| On June 10th 2008 musiclover2050 Said : | |
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kmpp |
| On June 10th 2008 moosegurl01 Said : | |
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kmpp |
| On June 10th 2008 rockergirl929 Said : | |
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kmp plz. |
| On June 10th 2008 sportshottie4e Said : | |
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kmp |
| On June 10th 2008 PorshaS Said : | |
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kmp |
| On June 10th 2008 XUnicorns4769X Said : | |
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kmp |
| On June 10th 2008 k3lli3mich3ll3 Said : | |
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kmp. :) |
| On June 10th 2008 raetakeninluv1 Said : | |
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kmp |
| On June 10th 2008 Omniton Said : | |
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Kenny's gotta hurry up! HURRY!!! Kmp! |
| On June 10th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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ok to say it all out the past with Ashley wasn't too pretty. She ran off with Eric, because she thought he was more important to her than Kenny at that point. That night, Eric had been abusing her and hitting her like crazy. At first she didn't mind much, but then she got pissed and just got up and left. Eric knows that Kenny wants Ashley as much as he does. So, Eric distracted Kenny by knocking him out to go get Ashley for himself, so Kenny wouldn't come to the rescue. Does that make sense? |
| On June 10th 2008 ilybaby06 Said : | |
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I like it and I get what you say about ratings. I'm not posting my next part until 20 ratings and I have only 13 grrr! lol. Anyhow. Please kmp like usual I love it!!!! Whats the past with Ashley's ex anyway? |
| On June 10th 2008 bittyb1 Said : | |
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it's still good! KMP! |
| On June 10th 2008 misha9944 Said : | |
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what's her past with this guy? you never explained it. |
| On June 10th 2008 BabyPenguins Said : | |
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I really like you're story its really good... |
| On June 10th 2008 justthegirlxox Said : | |
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kmp please. |


