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Tryin' to Stop Your Leavin' {24}
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Chapter 24
As we are running, I feel like I’m going to just keel over. Pain shot in my side. We were running for almost three minutes now and who ever this person was had suddenly disappeared. I slowed down.
“Caleb wait!” I shout to him.
“What are you doing?” he replies.
“They stopped.” I told him.
He walks back over to me.
“Why don’t we start heading back, alright?” he suggested.
“Fine by me,” I said, as we came to a road.
We look both directions to make sure no one was coming. I went across first and I saw headlights to a car, but I figure it was farther away, but it wasn’t. The car was speeding like a bullet on the highway. I wanted to go across but something just made me stand there. The headlights were just mesmerizing.
“Karrie look out!” Caleb shouts at me.
I didn’t move but he pushes me out of the road, but I realized after the fact that he didn’t follow. I turn back, calling out his name, but it was too late. A loud thud was made where Caleb’s body met the car. He rolls over top of the car and his body lands on the road, as he lies on his stomach.
“NO!” I cry.
I get up off the ground and rush to his side. I drag his body away from the road, as he turns over to his back. I saw blood ooze from his forehead. Caleb was half unconscious, but he was starting to come back.
“Caleb, I can’t lose you. Can you hear me?” I asked.
His eyes open slowly, as he put his had on mine. He smiled, which made me smile back, as tears flowed out from my eyes.
“I couldn’t have let you get hurt. That car wasn’t going to slow down. It was so close to getting you,” he said, as his voice was very groggy and weak.
“I wouldn’t have cared, as long as you were fine.” I told him.
“But you’re having a baby on the way. I couldn’t stand watching you slowly drift away, with a baby to come. Karrie, I love you so much, I just want you to know that.” He said, as if it was the end.
“Caleb don’t you dare say that! This isn’t good-bye. I’m going to call 911-” he cut me off.
“No you aren’t, because by the time they get here, I’ll be gone.”
“Don’t say that! Caleb I need you. I can’t lose you. You’ll be the father of this baby and I don’t want her/him to grow up without a dad.”
As silence approaches, I call 911 and tell them to bring help right away. As I hung up though, I feel more tears stream down the side on my face.
“Don’t cry Karrie. Just think of all the good times we’ve had together. I had my first kiss with you. You were the first girl I made love to, plus you’re having a baby. I couldn’t be more happier, but I think my times come.” He whispers, as he strokes his hand on my cheek.
“Caleb you can’t do this. You just can’t!” I demand.
“I love you,” he stated. “And you are the only one I loved. No one has ever been so loving and caring to me then you.”
I wiped a few tears away from my eyes. “Stop that!” I grin. “Can I have at least one last kiss before go?” I cry, not wanting to say those words.
And like that, out lips meet slowly, letting a spark like feeling go through me. It was one of the most romantic ones I’ve had from him yet. As more tear came from each of our eyes, I watch as Caleb pulled away slowly. I look deeply in his eyes.
“I love you,” I reply.
“I love you too baby. Don’t forget it! I love our unborn baby too,” he cried.
This was probably one of the first times I’ve seen him cry. I watch slowly, as he drifts away in the wind. This isn’t what I had expected so sudden. How am I going to live without him?
“Goodbye… my love,” I whisper, as I cry more and more. I lay my head on his cold chest. In the distance, I heard sirens coming near and I just lied there, next to Caleb, wishing I would die with him.
(Authors Note: I'm sorry you guys never expected this to happen, but not all stories have a happy ending to it. No this isn't the last chapter. I should have at least one or two chapters left. Honestly, I cried when I was writing this. I was left so emotional. *cries* Hope you enjoyed!)
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| On June 30th 2008 toni2006 Said : | |
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omg no i'm crying right now cause this was so sad but good at the same time but why did caleb have to die |
| On June 13th 2008 nickynicole901 Said : | |
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omg noo..im crying my eyes out |
| On June 11th 2008 feather1904 Said : | |
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omg im crying!! y did he have 2 go? |
| On June 11th 2008 feather1904 Said : | |
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omg im crying!! y did he have 2 go? |
| On June 11th 2008 piratesrule78 Said : | |
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NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO HE CAN'T BE DEAD HE JUST CAN'T! THATS SO SAD :( KMPP |
| On June 9th 2008 xHickChick789x Said : | |
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yeah, sorry it was fast, but I really can't wait to post the sequel soon. I'll have 2 more chapters to this, one tomorrow and one Wendsday for sure. And I'll have the first chapter to the sequel Wendsday, hopefully. Thanks 4 all your support guys!! :) |
| On June 9th 2008 tiarenee08 Said : | |
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kmp |
| On June 9th 2008 PopChile Said : | |
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OMFG!!! KMP!!!!!!!! |
| On June 9th 2008 PopChile Said : | |
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OMFG!!! KMP!!!!!!!! |
| On June 9th 2008 italiangurl101 Said : | |
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omg i love it kmp plzzz |
| On June 9th 2008 Patriciaxox Said : | |
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Every writer has these moments when they have everything worked up in their head and they are so excite to have everyone read it that when it was posted it came out really fast. But I loved your ending. Not all stories have happy endings, as you said. My eyes seriously started forming tears. it never came down but it made me emotional (: |
| On June 9th 2008 FruitcakeCaz Said : | |
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OH MY GOSH plz tell me they can still save him! kmpp |
| On June 9th 2008 PorshaS Said : | |
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awww |
| On June 9th 2008 audica Said : | |
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aww!!! i'm crying now! but keep me posted! |
| On June 9th 2008 upyours911 Said : | |
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thank* sry |
| On June 9th 2008 upyours911 Said : | |
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I can not belive that happend! I'm sad now thatnk you very much, anyway, plz kmp! |
| On June 9th 2008 RJbork09 Said : | |
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That's sad. It made me cry. KMPP. |
| On June 9th 2008 musiclover2050 Said : | |
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kmpp |
| On June 8th 2008 thatchickunew Said : | |
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aww so sad =[ kmp! |
| On June 8th 2008 justthegirlxox Said : | |
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well, that is true. but.. caleb was the best! *sigh* please kmp? thanks. |
| On June 8th 2008 jirrith2007 Said : | |
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WHAT! o...m...g... im in shock...uummmmmmm... WHY?!?!?!?!? ok... im officially sad, i didnt expect that at all. nice one. keep it up! |
| On June 8th 2008 moosegurl01 Said : | |
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kmpp |
| On June 8th 2008 loubear227 Said : | |
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kmp |
| On June 8th 2008 disneyfan12 Said : | |
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Oh my gosh! He Can't die! KMP♥ |
| On June 8th 2008 sportshottie4e Said : | |
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awwww man it shoulda ben a happy ending wat with the hard begining :( but kmp |


