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Tryin' to Stop Your Leavin'

Romance Created on 5-8-08 Views(443) Story Rating G

Chapter 1

 

It was late. About 8:30 at night. I was sitting on my front porch swing, chugging down a can of Coke Cola. There were millions of stars overhead. It was a beautiful night. Down here in Alabama, I see it a lot. Basically, we’re in the middle of nowhere. There’s like three or four houses down the road a little less than a mile, but that’s it until you get up into town. As I already told you, I live in the country; rough dirt roads, no one around, everyone mainly drives trucks.

 

“Karrie, you best get in here or mama’s gonna be wonderin’ you got to,” said my twin brother, Ryan, who happens to be four minutes older than me.

 

“Alright, I’ll be in soon. Just tell her I’m out here, ok?” I replied, grinning and wished he wouldn’t have came out here.

 

Lately, I haven’t been in the happy mood, ever since I was home schooled, which was 8th grade. My entire past was just like a blurry memory before, but after two years, it’s all starting to come back to me. I don’t really have any friends, after I left public school; only a few.

My life has been flipped all around since I was in Jr. High and I can tell you why.

 

 

 

 

**Flashback

 

Back in 6th grade, I had one of the strictest teachers in all of Dothan. It’s the truth too. When I walked through the classroom door, he introduced himself.

 

“Hello, my name’s Mr. Lentz,” he announced, with a big grin across his face.

 

I smiled. “I’m Karrie, Karrie Evans.”

 

“Oh, you’re our new student, follow me.” He said, guiding me to his desk, which had a bulletin board behind it with a ton of pictures of him and his family. All the students in the classroom were really noisy. Occasionally, some of them were glancing over at me, because no one saw me before. I wasn’t really the new kid, but I wasn’t in school for the first week of school because my family and I were on vacation down in California.

 

“Ok, Evans, Evans, Evans,” he repeated, looking at a piece of paper, that I assumed was the seating chart. “Alright Karrie you sit next to Caleb Hershey, the end seat in the last row. Caleb,” he shouted over at him.

 

A boy with piercing blue eyes and dark brown hair, which almost looked black, was looking up at Mr. Lentz and me. From where I was standing, he was decent looking.

 

“Thank you Mr. Lentz,” I replied.

 

I walk over to my seat and sit next to Caleb. Once in a while he’d look over at me, but he didn’t say a word to me, which I thought was pretty rude. We had only two or three classes together, but I can’t really remember.

 

A few weeks later are when I was really starting to make new friends, even with Caleb. He’s actually a pretty nice guy. We grew closer as friends, but we were nothing more until a foggy February morning in homeroom.

 

That day, I walked into the room and find a note on my desk. I sat down looking around at who might have placed it here. It had a heart with my name on the front. I decided to just open the note, so it read:

 

 

 

Dear Karrie,

 

I know we’ve been friends for a little while now and I was wondering if you wanted to be my girlfriend. You’re a really sweet girl and we’ve got a lot in common. If this is too soon or you want to think it through, I understand. Talk to me down at the gym or if you want, talk to me now.
Caleb
I was shocked and a little surprised. A few of my friends would say that he has a crush on me, but I’d just tell them we’re just friends.

 

I look over at him, sitting to the right of me. He was talking to his one friend, Anthony I think it is. I look at the note again and I didn’t realize it till now, but there was a picture of him inside it. I suppose he was giving it to me. I felt like I was about to break down in tears; happy tears though. I’ve never been ask to be any guys girlfriend.

 

I grab the note and walk over to my friends Rachel and Nancy to tell them the news. (I was only friends with them in the beginning of the school year, so they aren’t my best friends.)

“Guys you won’t believe what just happened,” I announced to the both of them.

 

“Why do you look so happy Karrie? What happened today?” Rachel asks, as I hand her the note. Nancy reads it over her shoulder.

They both look at me.

 

“Girl, what are you gonna tell him?” Nancy questioned, wanting to know every detail.

 

“I don’t know, I mean I sort of like him, but_” I was cut off by Cindy, my other friend.

 

“What are you three chatting about? You know if you don’t get to your seat, Mr. Lentz is gonna yell at you,” she smiles.

 

“We’ll talk later ok.”

 

Rachel handed me the note and Cindy and I walk back to our seats. Cody looked over at me. He knew I had already read the note.

 

“So what do you think?” he says.

 

“About what,” I asked, like I didn’t know what he meant.

 

“Don’t play stupid! You know what I mean,” he laughs.

 

“Well, I’ll have to think it over first, as long as it’s ok with you?” I reply.

 

“No, no that’s fine. Take all the time you need.” He smiles. I might sound crazy, but that’s when I thought that I was really starting to like him, but how could I tell him, without showing my feelings all at once?

 

 

 

 

(Authors Note: So, what do you think? Should I continue? I'll try to finish this before/if testriffic shuts down, so read/rate/comment plz. Thanks 4 checking it out.)

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On June 5th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess awwww can you keep me posted for this one too?
On May 30th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
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ok, here is the playlist for this story.


On May 25th 2008 xebellawx Said :
my picture
finish. i hate cliffhangers. FINISH
On May 17th 2008 disneyfan12 Said :
disneyfan12 KMp plz!
On May 16th 2008 muffinbobeat48 Said :
muffinbobeat48 Oooh love the name Caleb.
On May 14th 2008 hirschey11 Said :
hirschey11 LOVE IT KMP!!!!
On May 9th 2008 JWalker2406 Said :
JWalker2406 It's seems like an interesting story. Got a few spelling mistakes but thats okay I've done it alot in my stories haha. I like it. Wonder what could have happened to make her forget her past??? Hmmmm..... :D
On May 9th 2008 kinkybitch101 Said :
kinkybitch101 all that is so cute...she should totally d8 him...im off to read the nest one...kmpp
On May 9th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x yeah i no I said that before, but the comment was deleted sorry. I had Cody on my mind again. lol
On May 9th 2008 audica Said :
audica unm, ok, at first, the guy's name is caleb, andn then at the end, it's cody. but anyways, i really love this!!!!! please kmp!
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