Email
Password

Created By

Rate this Story

+34

Embed


My Stories
+ 29
I Wonder *13*
+ 37
I Wonder *12*
+ 45
I Wonder *11*
+ 54
I Wonder *10*
+ 43
I Wonder *9*
+ 41
I Wonder *8*
+ 42
I Wonder *7*
+ 40
I Wonder *6*
+ 38
I Wonder *5*
+ 37
I Wonder *4*
+ 35
I Wonder *3*
+ 48
I Wonder *2*
+ 40
I Wonder
+ 30
Laughed Until We Cried (Chapter 13)
+ 24
Tryin' to Stop Your Leavin' {26}
+ 31
Laughed Until We Cried (Chapter 12)
+ 33
Tryin' to Stop Your Leavin' {25}
+ 34
Laughed Until We Cried (Chapter 11)
+ 31
Tryin' to Stop Your Leavin' {24}
+ 27
Laughed Until We Cried (Chapter 10)

Fall Into Me [10]

Romance Created on 4-2-08 Views(312) Story Rating G

I was really scared and I didn't do anything, but start screaming in my head. I was so lost. I didn't know what to think. 

"Brad!" I shouted.

I began looking around like a children who has lost their mother in a grocery store. I was a mess. Nobody else seemed to want to jump in and go after him, so I guess it was up to me. I took off my cut-off jeans and walked over to the diving board, which stood over ten feet tall. I didn't want to just jump in. I climbed up the ladder and started walking across the board, as I meet up with the edge of it. I always had a scared side of me for heights. I just closed my eyes and jumped in.

I fell into the water, as my feet actually touched the bottom of the pool. It was like twelve feet deep at that. I opened my eyes and all I could see was a blure. I turned around swimming around like a dolphin. The pressure was getting to me and made me feel light-headed. When I turned around to one side, I saw a blurry figure, which I suppose was Brad, but I couldn't really tell. I swam over to it. He had his hand out to me. I got closer to him and grabbed his hand and brought him up to the surface. He was unconsious and he looked like he was dead. Jeremy helped me get Brad out of the water. I hopped out and we both carried him on to the ground.

Jeremy said that Alexa and Hayle went out to get help, as Danny just stood there, grinning. I was so mad at him right now; I could say a bunch of bad things right in his face, but I didn't.

Brad wasn't breathing at all and I wanted to do anything, just as long as he'd live. CPR... duh! And that's what I did. I tried many times and like that, he started coughing and choking up a lot of water. I was amazed.

"Oh my god! Brad, I was scared to death." I cried.

He didn't say anything at first, because he was just gasping for air, but then he chuckled a little.

"Miranda you don't have to worry." He coughed. "I would never leave you without saying good-bye first,. I love you too much."

That's what I was waiting to hear for so long now. I smiled and he got closer to me.

"Well, aren't you going to give me a hug for being happy." He asked.

"Screw the hug. Come here gorgeous!" I laughed.

I leaned against him and gave him one of the longest most passionate kisses I've ever given him. It felt like an electric shock had just been made all over again. I could tell that he was enjoying this as much as I was. This all seemed to happen so soon. It felt like I was still panicking that Brad was going to die, but that's over now. I'm kissing the man who's always been in my dreams.

We pulled away from each other, dazing into each others eyes, as Alexa and Hayle came in with the hotel security. The both stood there saying their "aww's." We both laughed.

I heard the security asked them where the trouble was. I saw Alexa and Hayle pointing at Danny. It was kinda hard not to laugh at his face as the security took him away.

I closed my eyes and smiled.

"I love you," Brad whispered.

"I love you too." I said, smiling.

I fell into his arms and I started kissing him again, better than ever. I had a feeling that our relationship had just began.

I found all I've waited for and I could not ask for more.

 

 

(Sorry it was short and kinda fast, but Yeah! That's the end and it sucks, but you know what? I will have a sequel, called "I Could Not Ask For More" That's as long as you guys agree with it. It'll be a while though. Most likely after my new story, "Take Me There" I'll try to have that out tomorrow. Please let me know if you'd like to be kept posted on that too. Thank you all for the support! Stay tuned!)

Comments

Please Login to post comments
On June 22nd 2008 rebelshawtieyo Said :
rebelshawtieyo aww thats a sweet ending (it made me cry a little) KMPP on your other stuff =)
On June 21st 2008 tinaangel17 Said :
tinaangel17 Omg I just read the whole story of "Fall Into Me" It was sooooo good! You're such a good writer!
On June 8th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess i just read ur other comment and.... PLEASE POST THE SEQUAL i can see so much exciting things that could happen
On June 7th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess i thought this was going to be short but i ended up loving the way you ended it
On May 21st 2008 misssweetiepie Said :
misssweetiepie I LOVE THIS STORY...I LOVE THE ENDING THE MOST...I THOUGHT HE WAS GONNA DIE..
On April 14th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x I hate to burst everyone's bubble but until I know for sure if Testriffic is shutting down, I'm not going to post the sequel until I know for sure. I'll post a new story instead.
On April 13th 2008 jessi9509runit Said :
jessi9509runit oh man i loved this story so much.. now im going to read the next one
On April 11th 2008 audica Said :
audica dang! i love the "i found all i've waited for, and i could not ask for more" part. i love that song.
On April 9th 2008 CRISSY10012 Said :
CRISSY10012 awwww love it kmp on all your stories please
On April 4th 2008 kwestgate2 Said :
kwestgate2 awww thts adorable i thought u were gonna make him die i was rlly close to tears..kmp pls on all stories nd poems u write but thnx
On April 4th 2008 ilybaby06 Said :
ilybaby06 Awww that was cute story. Short but really cute! =] KMP on all your stories please?? Your a great writer =]
On April 4th 2008 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said :
xXEmoxGirlx3Xx aww it so cute! KMP!
On April 4th 2008 loubear227 Said :
loubear227 awww!this is an awesome story.kmp on the sequel.cant wait
On April 3rd 2008 J3w3llC82890 Said :
J3w3llC82890 SO CUTE! PLEASE KMP ON EVERYTHiNG.
*J*
On April 3rd 2008 CSLimeWriter Said :
CSLimeWriter That's really cool! Do you think you'll get your story up before Testriffic shuts down?