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Romance Created on 4-1-08 Views(322) Story Rating G

"Are you ready yet?" Brad asks.

"Just give me a sec," I replied.

"Well hurry up. Everybody is probably wait for us down there." he chuckles.

"Just chill I'm coming out."

I walk out of the bathroom, black and white pok-a-dot bikini with cut of jeans. I could Brad was just staring at me the entire time, but I didn't mind much. We ran out of the room and went and down the corridor, holding hands. That's how I knew we were growing closer than I had thought. We paced down the stairs and went in the doors to the indoor pool. Nobody was there yet and when I mean nobody, I mean not a single soul around.

"It's dead down here." I said.

"I'd say," Brad agreed.

He look over at me, still holding my hand. I looked into his eyes. They were just amazing as he stood there. I didn't know what to do.

"Miranda," he said, taking my hand and sat down at the edge of the pool with our feet down in the water.

"Yeah?" I reply.

"I've been thinking of this for a while now, and I wanted to let you know I'll give you another chance. That's as long as you still believe that we were meant to be." he smiled.

I look at him and then I smiled.

"I'll have to think about it, but I'm so glad you let us have another chance."

He didn't say anything, but I leaned against his bare chest, giving him a warm loving hug. He wrapped his arms around me and I cried softly, just in happiness.

I was still in his arms for a few minutes, until I saw all our friends coming in the door. But there was one thing that was wrong with this whole thing. Danny, he looked furious with me in his arm, though I really didn't care. As long as he does hurt Brad.

"What the hell are you two doing together again?" Danny cursed.

"We never offically broke up Danny and what does it matter to you?" I asked, wiping a few of the tears from my eyes, but a few left stains on my face. Both Brad and I turned facing him, along with everyone else.

"I told you he was no good." he replied.

Brad got up and was face to face with Danny.

"For now on, just stay away from us. Neither one of us wanna see you anymore." Brad said, which was so true.

"Oh is that so," Danny replies and Brad nods.

When Brad wasn't looking, Danny tackled him down to the ground, which made me jump and and stand up. Brad's other friend that was with, Jeremy tried to stop them, but it was no use. After a few minute of tackle, Danny shoved Brad and lost his balance which made him fall into the deep end of the water.

"Brad!" I shouted.

I was terrified and scared, because Brad didn't come back up.

 

 

(Ok, I have one more chapter unless I change my mind, then I'll write my new story. I might write a sequel but I'll tell you when I write the last chapter. Read/Rate/Comment. Thank you so much!)

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On April 2nd 2008 piratesrule78 Said :
piratesrule78 omg i can't believe danny did that i hope brad is ok sorry it took me long to read this i haven't been on in a while. kmp
On April 2nd 2008 mitchy8125 Said :
mitchy8125 STUPID DANNY
On April 2nd 2008 xashleyrosex Said :
xashleyrosex kmp
On April 2nd 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said :
xXPunkGirl09Xx Uh oh omgg kmpppp
On April 2nd 2008 musiclover2050 Said :
musiclover2050 kmpp
On April 2nd 2008 Jermie6363 Said :
Jermie6363 kmp
On April 1st 2008 me1is1brittany Said :
me1is1brittany Uh-Oh.Looks like someone can't swim.Kmp.
On April 1st 2008 CSLimeWriter Said :
CSLimeWriter Must- keep-me-posted!!
On April 1st 2008 nickynicole901 Said :
nickynicole901 OMG...OMG...please kmp....please....omg i hope brads ok...keep it up its good
On April 1st 2008 PopChile Said :
PopChile OMG PLEASE DON'T LET HIM DIE!!! PLEASE!!!! ANYWAY i LOVE PKMP!!!
On April 1st 2008 justthegirlxox Said :
justthegirlxox definitely kmp.
On April 1st 2008 feather1904 Said :
feather1904 kmp plz
On April 1st 2008 kesaia1029 Said :
kesaia1029 O no ness D=!!KMP!!-No dieing Brad!!..yet anyways =/-
On April 1st 2008 brokenwings122 Said :
brokenwings122 I'm so sad to hear that its comming to an end. There's not enough time for him to be okay, so he must die...maybe she does too...oh anyways, kmp.
On April 1st 2008 jordann5 Said :
jordann5 omg no!!!! kmp!
On April 1st 2008 monkey892 Said :
monkey892 Oh No!
On April 1st 2008 twilight8218 Said :
twilight8218 oh my! please kmp
On April 1st 2008 PorshaS Said :
PorshaS omg kmp!!!!
On April 1st 2008 xPunkxVanityx Said :
xPunkxVanityx 0.0 I love this story, please keep me posted. I love suspense.
On April 1st 2008 jirrith2007 Said :
jirrith2007 Oh my gosh!! keep it up! :D
On April 1st 2008 livingxliife91 Said :
my picture
kmp
On April 1st 2008 lonely244444 Said :
lonely244444 utoh KMP please!
On April 1st 2008 bittyb1 Said :
bittyb1 thats sucks! danny is being a jerk!
On April 1st 2008 tigerbaby7644 Said :
tigerbaby7644 hmmmmmmm kmp..please please please
On April 1st 2008 cassiecat1221 Said :
cassiecat1221 oh man that sucks i hate danny! kmp