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Fall Into Me [5]

Romance Created on 3-25-08 Views(376) Story Rating G

Danny didn't say anything or come after me. Brad walked up to me.

"Everyone's ready to go. I'll grab our bag and put it in the car." he said, smiling and went right in our room. I nodded and looked back at Danny.

"Alright, you can tell me. What do you want now?" I questioned.

"Ok, well I really don't think you should be with Brad." he replies.

"What? Yesterday, you were all gung-hoe about me being with him. What changed your mind all of a sudden?" I asked.

He paused, as Brad walked out of the room with our bag and Hayle, Jeremy, and Alexa, (the other friends that were along), came out from their rooms with a few bags. The looked over at us, but didn't say anything. I could tell they had the wrong feeling in their mind. Once they walked away, Danny started to talk.

"It's because I care about you." he says. "And I don't want Brad to hurt you."

"But that doesn't explain why you said all those nice things about him last night and now you are against him." he replied, trying to prove a point. I can tell now Danny was really getting frustrated.

"Do you really want me to tell you?" he shouts.

"Yes already," I agreed.

"It's because I love you. I don't want you to be with anyone else but me." he said, lowering his tone, as he places his hand on my shoulder. I looked at him, confused. I really couldn't believe he just said that. Then again, I could.

Danny rested his forehead against mine, gazing at me with his solid brown eyes. He pushed his lips against mine, roughly, but so passionate. I didn't flinch or push him away. I wrapped my arms around his neck, as he had his on my waist. About a minute after, he pulled me away and looked deeply in my eyes. I just wanted to melt right then and there. It seemed like a fantasy.

"What the...?" someone shouts from down the hall.

My heart sank down into the pit of my stomach. I know that voice and I know that I'm toast. I turned my head in the direction from where I heard the voice.

"Brad..." I whispered, as I could feel the tears begining to build up in my eyes, as he walk up to Danny and I.

"No you don't need to explain. I saw it all." he replied, trying to sound as calm as possible without letting out his rage of anger.

"Brad it isn't want you think. It was all a mistake." I said.

Brad looked down at the ground. I could tell he was broken and I was the cause of it all.

"You know. You're right. This was all just a mistake. It was a mistake to trust you. But you know what? I let you choose and I can tell that I'm good enough for you."

I was stunned. I was shocked, though I could now feel the tears flow from my eyes down my cheek.

"Brad you know that you don't mean that, right?" I said in disbelief.

Brad looked at the ground and back at me. Tears were in his eyes too, which was the first I've ever seen in a long time. I didn't know Danny was doing, since he was behind me, but now everything I did, I regret and I can't change that.

"I don't know if I should mean it or not anymore." he looked back at the ground so I wouldn't see half crying. "I just don't think we should be together anymore." After he said that, he turned around and started pacing down the hall.

"Where are you going?" I hollered down the hall.

Brad turned around and looked at me, halfway down the corridor.

"Out with everyone else. We're still going, but all I know is that it's just going to be a big mistake just like everything else." he said, turning back around and heading out through.

I stood there in the middle of nowhere so it felt. I felt Danny's hand on my shoulder. I looked down at it and pushed him away. I ran into my room, slamming the door behind me, so Danny wouldn't come rushing in. I fell to the ground curled up in a little ball and cried my eyes out.

"Why in God's name does this have to happen to me?" I whispered. "Now I really have to make a big decison between Brad or Danny."

 

 

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On June 7th 2008 yeaitzJess Said :
yeaitzJess im leaning towards brad for now
On April 11th 2008 audica Said :
audica i agree with the comment below mine.
On April 2nd 2008 mitchy8125 Said :
mitchy8125 DANNY! [ Sorry Brad ]
On March 26th 2008 xPunkxVanityx Said :
xPunkxVanityx I'll have to say Danny. love it!
On March 26th 2008 muse4apoem Said :
muse4apoem Awesome! I don't know if I commented earlier! lol I'll vote again anyway!
On March 25th 2008 kesaia1029 Said :
kesaia1029 omg I like this!!!!you HAVE to keep me posted on this PLEASE!!!!!!!
On March 25th 2008 crazypoet10701 Said :
crazypoet10701 kmp!!!
On March 25th 2008 icsgrad07 Said :
icsgrad07 yes yes quadruple kmps!
On March 25th 2008 justthegirlxox Said :
justthegirlxox i kinda think brad made the decision for her.. but he needs to hear her out. kmp please!!
On March 25th 2008 toxxicskank Said :
toxxicskank ok love the story, I hope she just go cought up in the moment!
On March 25th 2008 Khmerfriendz Said :
Khmerfriendz woahh.. now whyd she do that for? please keep me posted! :]
On March 25th 2008 J3w3llC82890 Said :
J3w3llC82890 hmm..i still like brad best. kmpp!
*J*
On March 25th 2008 babygurl161991 Said :
babygurl161991 ha ive been in that situation, it sucks. kmp
On March 25th 2008 PorshaS Said :
PorshaS this is bull shit y did she kiss him back if she love brad be with him i dont feel sorry 4 her she is a dumb hoe..lol i like brad and thats who i feel sorry 4 but kmp!!!!
On March 25th 2008 kwestgate2 Said :
kwestgate2 wow i shulda known...tht sux whn u do tht...kmp pls