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Electro Static: part 32

Creative Created on 7-29-08 Views(41) Story Rating PG13

  "Hey Bird Brain!  Down here!" Kayla shouted as she hurled a fireball at the transformed version of Experiment # 824.  It did no noticable damage, though the 'bird brain' comment sure seemed to catch it's attention.  "How dare you oppose me?  I rule this planet now!" It exclaimed.  "Over our dead bodies!" Serenity retorted.  "That can be arranged.  Let me show you what happens to impudent fools such as yourselves!" 824 said.  "Bring it, ya rusty ol' tin can!  Or are ya'll nothin' but a big CHICKEN?" Jane asked.  "Chicken? Ha!  YOU'LL be the chickens in just a few seconds!" 824 replied.  "Blah blah blah, that's all I'm hearing.  Enough talk!  If you were REALLY as tough and powerful as you say you are, you'd've all ready destroyed us by now.  But I guess your all bark and no bite!" Taylor and Tyler said that last sentence in unison.  "How DARE you?  Prepare to die!" 824 exclaimed.  It opened it's jaws wide and a blast of red, yellow, and orange blasted out of it's mouth, disintigrating all of them accept Jane, who'd been smart enough to back away by a few feet.  With a wave of her hand, it was as though nothing had happened to the others at all.  "Medicon, eh?  Well I guess I'm taking you out first!" 824 announced.  "Oh waaaah, I'm sooooooooo scared!" Jane continued to taunt.  The monster thrust one of it's truck sized metal fists (or wings, technically) at her.  Serentiy jumped in the way and met the fist/wing with her own, stopping and stunning it temporarily.  Taylor and Tyler took the chance to drill at 824's defenseless arm while Kayla blasted flames into its face. 

  Suddenly, as if like magic, pretty much all the damage that had been done vanished.  "Ah crap.  We'd fergotten that he could heal 'imself, too!" Jane exclaimed.  "Not good." Taylor and Tyler said.  "Now... DIE!!!"  824 shouted.  A missile flew from it's back and rocketed towards the 5 of them.  "Oh shit." Serenity muttered.

  Then, out of nowhere, another missile came and blasted the first one out of the sky!  "Huh?!?" Everyone exclaimed in shock.  "Did you think that my metal parts are JUST life support?" The General asked from several yards away.  His robotic arm looked more like a missile launcher at this point.  "Awesome!" Taylor and Tyler exclaimed.  "Give it up, bird brain!  With the General's missiles and Jane's healing powers, there's NO WAY you can beat us!" Kayla exclaimed.  "Quite possible the longest quote she's ever spoken in her life." Tyler muttered under his breath.  "You think I'm beaten yet?  I'm just warming up." 824 said.  It lifted one hand into the air and generated a large yellow ball in it.  Once it reached a size of about 10 basket balls, 824 threw it at the 5 Genetons and the General.  It exploded right above them, engulfing them all in a bright, orange light.  However, when the light dissipated, nothing seemed to be wrong.

  "Ha!  That didn't even do anything!  Is that the best you've---" The General began to say.  Suddenly, his motion stopped.  The same thing had happened to the other 5.  "Muahahahahaha!  That weapon was a method of paralysis!  Now that YOU'RE frozen..." 824 began, saying that last bit to Jane.  "There will be no more healing for any of you!  Now, you shall die!" it exclaimed.  It then shouted, "AND LET THEIR DEATHS BE A WARNING TO ALL THOSE WHO OPPOSE ME!"  It's call rung throughout the planet, striking fear into the hearts of all those that weren't completely deaf.  824 lifted his fist (wing) high into the air and swung it down to smash it's victims. 

  At about that time, there were 2 bright flashes of light from behind 824.  Just before the wing could crash down on Serenity, Taylor, Tyler, Kayla, Jane, and the General, it stopped.  Will and Erik were their, holding up the wing with one hand each.  Their hair was a radient silver and their eyes a deep shade of red.  They were in Ultra Form.  "WHAT?!?  Where did YOU 2 come from?!?" 824 asked in total shock.  "Miss us?  It looks like you haven't learned your lesson yet!  How many times must we go over this?  You plus us equals your ass getting kicked!" Will exclaimed.  "We could've done without that last bit, thank you very much." Erik said.  "So what?  Let's kick some ass!" Will replied.  "Gladly!" Erik exclaimed.  The 2 of them forced the wing to smack 824's face again and again.  "Why you hitting yourself?  Why you hitting yourself?" They continually asked. 

  After a minute or so of this, 824 spun as fast as he could, sending Will and Erik flying.  They both stopped themselves in mid air and blasted hundreds of bolts of lightning at 824.  The damage done was massive.  "Grrr...  I'm not finished yet!" 824 exclaimed.  Countless missiles rocketed from 824's back, each one locking on to either Will or Erik.  A few hit, each doing slight damage, but the rest were tricked into colliding with each other and blowing up. 

  Will dicided it was time for his favorite attack: The electric sword.  He generated a blade twice his size made entirely out of electricity.  Erik did the same, and the 2 of them charged at 824, ready to hack him up.  The monster generated claws of energy out of it's metallic wings and used them to fend off the barrage of slashes.  "Give it up, you 2!  This time, I'M going to win!  With all the powers of the Genetons, I truly am unstoppable!" 824 exclaimed.  "Really?  For some reason, I'm not believing that." Will replied.  "You're gonna have to prove it to us!" Erik exclaimed.  "Very well!" 824 said.  Suddenly, 2 GIANT CARNIVOROUS SUNFLOWERS popped out of the hull of the ship they were battling on.  "Courtesy of the Botanicoid Genetons!" 824 exclaimed.  "Giant man eating plants?  I've handled worse, and that was out of ultra form!" Will exclaimed. 

  Out of nowhere, ice wrapped around Erik and Will.  "Let's see you handle them NOW!" 824 challenged.  They were now completely encased in blocks of ice 10 feet wide, long, and tall.  The Sunflowers lunged at the 2 of them, ready to chomp down on their frozen dinner.  Fortunately, just before they were eaten, Will and Erik were able to melt the ice and fly away.  However, they didn't notice the wing that was about to crash down on them, and the 2 were smacked straight to the floor.  "Erik... You all right?" Will asked weakly.  There was no responce.  "Erik?!?" Will asked, frantically looking up and all around.  "ERIK!!!"  He shouted.  Still no responce.  Then, there was a scream of agony from 824.  Will spun around to see what was happening and saw lines of electricity surrounding the monster.  It was now holding its head and thrashing around, desperate for the pain to end.  "Erik, you genious!" Will exclaimed. 

  After about 10 minutes, 824 finally managed to force Erik out of its system.  "How'd you do that?!?" Will asked.  "Simple: he's a ROBOT now.  When his metal wing came down on us, I turned into a spark and entered his system.  I corrupted it quite a bit." Erik explained.  "What did you do to him besides zapping him like a crazy wood pecker?" Will asked.  "Wood pecker?" Erik asked.  "Just tell me what you did to him." Will said, ignoring the question.  "You'll see." Erik said, grinning evilly.  "Hehehe.  You fools!  All your efforts have been in vain, for you forget one simple fact:  I can heal!" 824 exclaimed.  "Wait for it..." Erik muttered.  "Wait... what's going on?!?  Why can't I heal?!?" 824 asked in shock and fear.  "I deprogrammed all of his Geneton powers accept one that was too well defended by fire walls and such." Erik announced.  "Nice!  Which one didn't get deprogrammed?" Will asked.  "Unfortunately... Ti---" Erik began to answere.  Suddenly, time froze.

  824 spent the next few hours beating up Will's and Erik's frozen bodies.  Of course, since time was frozen, they weren't yet feeling any of it, but they would soon.  Finally, the time freeze wore off and Will and Erik got smashed like crazy.  It was like 2000 trains all going 5000000 mps (miles per second) and crashing into them at the same time.  Even with the amethysts, they were killed instantly.  824 then unleashed its wrath on the others and killed them as well. 

                                                                To be continued...

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On August 6th 2008 piratesrule78 Said :
piratesrule78 yikes wats gonna happen off to the next chapter
On July 30th 2008 unreal1298 Said :
unreal1298 uh oh... that can't be good