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Electro Static: part 25

Science Created on 6-4-08 Views(75) Story Rating G

  The next day, the gang and I met with my grandpa where he handed us 7 tickets for an air plane.  "You kids better hurry.  The plain leaves in about an hour!"  Grandpa exclaimed as I took the tickets.  "Alright then.  So, what class are we flying?" Serenity asked.  I checked the ticket.  "First class!"  I exclaimed.  "Grandpa, how'd you afford 7 FIRST CLASS tickets?!?"  I asked giddily.  "I have my ways."  He replied.  "This is so cool!"  Taylor and Tyler exclaimed.  "Oh, yay!  I've never flown first class before!"  Serenity exclaimed.  "Woopee."  Kayla said, a bit less than enthusiastically.  "Thanks, Grandpa!"  I exclaimed.  All of us (accept Kayla of course) must've looked like 5 year olds in a candy store; the world's BIGGEST candy store to be exact.  Jane wrapped her arms around me and asked, "Oh Will, ain't this gonna be wonerful?" "It sure is!"  I replied, nuzzling her nose with mine. 

  After saying our good byes to Grandpa, I used omniscient summoning to get us to the air port.  We went through all the security and technical crap, and then sat down to wait for our chance to get on the plane.  1st class got called up first, meaning us.  We got onto the plane and chose our seats; particularly large seats in fact.  There was plenty of room to lay down in these seats, and then some.  Jane and I got into the first seat we saw, Serenity, Taylor, and Tyler got a seat behind us.  Erik sat in the seat behind them, and Kayla sat in the seat next to him.  A waitress came around and gave each of us a menu.  "Hmmm... OH!  They have catfish!"  I exclaimed.  I LOVE catfish.  I read the description of the fish, which went something like this:

  Catfish caught within the last 24 hours, breaded with a thin layer of corn meal and various spices.  3 fillets, served with 2 sides of your choice:  fries, rice, vegetables, baked potato, mashed potatoes, Texas toast, or Cole slaw. 

  "Caught within the last 24 hours?!?  SWEET!!!"  I exclaimed.  "So, what are you gonna have?"  I asked.  "I'm havin the baby back ribs!"  She answered.  "Can you eat all that?"  I asked, as I checked the menu.  It came with 5 large ribs and French fries.  "Dern Skippy!"  She exclaimed.  "Okay."  I said.  A few minutes later, the plane started moving.  "Here we go!"  Jane exclaimed.  Her voice was a bit shaky and worried.  I took her hand in mine, because I knew she was afraid of things like this. 

  Once we got off the run way and finished climbing into the air, the waitress came and asked us for our orders.  "I'll have the cat fish, please."  I answered.  "What sides do you want?"  The woman asked.  "French fries and Texas Toast, please."  I replied.  "And what would you like to drink?"  She asked.  "Hot chocolate, please."  I answered.  For some reason, I've always had a problem with being cold, even in the dead of summer.  I've learned to ignore it, but still, a nice hot chocolate would help.  "Whipped cream?"  She asked.  "Yes, and marshmallows and chocolate sprinkles, please."  I replied.  "All right.  And you little missy?"  The waitress asked.  Jane rolled her eyes about being called 'little missy' and said, "I'll have the baby back ribs, please."  "And what would you like to drink?"  She asked.  "Root beer."  Jane answered.  "All right then.  I'll be taking your menus, now."  The woman said.  We both handed her our menus and she walked down the aisle to serve the other first class passengers.  After she'd taken everyone's orders and menus, she went into what I presumed was the kitchen. 

  "Hey, they've got movies, CD players, and video games!"  Erik exclaimed all of a sudden.  "Where?"  Kayla asked.  "It's all underneath the seat!"  Erik exclaimed.  Jane and I searched under our seats, and sure enough there was a portable DVD player, head phones, an MP3, and a few CD-ROMs.  "So, Will, what movie ya'll wanna watch?"  Jane asked.  "Not thanks.  Movies/video games give me a head ache when I'm in a moving vehicle."  I replied.  "Oh, okay..."  She said, sounding hurt.  "Oh, alright, just for you.  So, what movies do they have?"  I asked.  She searched through the DVD player's list of movies.  "Oh!  They 'ave Live Free or Die Hard!"  She exclaimed giddily.  I gave her a kind of weird look.  "What?"  She asked.  "Nothing, nothing.  You just don't strike me as a Die Hard fan.  Put it on!"  I exclaimed.  Maybe the hot chocolate will help my head ache.  I thought to myself.

  Once we got to the part where John McClane pulled his daughter and her 'boyfriend' out of the car, the smell of catfish tickled my nose.  Along with it came the smell of a piping hot cup of hot chocolate.  My mouth started to drool just thinking about the meal.  The waitress placed our plates on our table (We actually had a table!), along with, to our surprise, a bowl of grapes.  She winked at both of us and continued to serve the other passengers.  "What is it with people and giving us grapes?"  I asked silently.  "Who cares?"  Jane asked.  "So, ya'll gonna say grace or do I have ta?"  She asked.  My mouth dropped.  "I've NEVER met another person who actually did that besides me!"   I exclaimed. 

  I took her hand and the 2 of us shut our eyes.  The prayer I said went something like this:

  Jehovah God, almighty, loving father, thank you for giving us this meal on this wonderful day.  Thank you for allowing me to meet such wonderful friends over the last few days, and thank you for all the adventures we've been through together.  Thank you for allowing Jane and I to meet and fall in love.  Thank you for all the love and understanding you have for all men and women, and thank you for giving us the opportunity to be forgiven for our sins.  It is through your son, Christ Jesus that we pray.  Amen.

  "Wow."  Jane said after I was done.  "What?"  I asked.  "I didn't expect it ta be so long!"  She exclaimed.  I shrugged and said, "Hey, we have a lot to be thankful for."  "Ya'll got a point, there."  She said, and we began to feast on our food.  I ate some of my meal, fed a few grapes to Jane, drank some hot chocolate, and repeated the process.  She gave me grapes throughout the meal.  We both were enjoying the food.  The Cat Fish tasted so fresh, and it was soooooo juicy!  The breading was perfect; it wasn't so thick that you couldn't taste the cat fish.  The fries had paprika, salt, and pepper on them, yum!  The hot chocolate warmed my entire body, and it also tasted fantastic!  The toast had just the right amount of butter.  The grapes were firm, juicy, and rather plump.  Needless to say, the entire meal was absolutely incredibly.  Rich people are so lucky!  I could tell by the look on Jane's face that she was enjoying her food, too.  O:  There are times when I envy you.  ; Why?  ; At the current moment, I can't eat and there fore cannot taste anything!  ; Lol.  The food tastes so great!  I went on to explain to him the wonderful sensations and flavors of the food and hot chocolate.  O:  Okay, okay, I get it!  Please stop, you're driving me absolutely mad!  ; Lol.  ; What does that even mean?  ; Laugh Out Loud.  ; You’re a very cruel and demented little boy.  ; Why, thank you!  "So, sugar plumb, how do you like your food?"  I asked.  "I ain't had nothin this good since, well, ever!  How's yours?"  She asked.  "Best.  Catfish. EVER!!!"  I exclaimed.  "If ya give me a bite o that, I'll let ya try mah ribs!"  Jane offered.  "Deal."  I said.  I used a knife and fork to cut a piece of my catfish off as she cut off a bit of rib meat.  We fed each other the food.  "This is great!... but not as good as my catfish."  I said.  "Agreed...."  She said, her voice trailing off.  She sounded as though she were regretting not getting the cat fish.  "Here."  I said as I handed her one of the 3 fillets.  "I have a lot of fries, so I probably won't need it."  I explained.  "Thanks, Hun!"  She exclaimed, then kissed me on the cheek.   "Anything for you."  I said.  "Yer so sweet."  She said, and munched down on the cat fish. 

  By the end of the meal, we were both incredibly full.  My hot chocolate was gone.  Jane laid down, and I laid down above and behind her.  I kissed her on the cheek, and we proceeded to watch the movie.  My head was killing me. 

  We had just gotten to the part where Bruce Willis took out the helicopter with a car when suddenly, it felt as though something had rammed the plane!  "What was that?!?"  Everyone asked in their own way.  Jane was now clinging on to me and shivering in fear. 

  Again, something rammed us, accept this time it was from our side of the plane.  Again, there was uproar among the passengers of the plane.  I looked out the window, but saw nothing.

  Just then, a giant, FLYING Ferret zoomed out of the clouds and rammed my window!  This time, it clung to the plane and started banging its head on the window.  Jane screamed.  "824!"  I exclaimed in disbelief.  "WHAT?!?"  The other 5 shouted as they scrambled out of their seats and over to Jane and I.  It grinned evilly, and then it continued to bash the window.  People started screaming; apparently they saw the giant ferret that was trying to break in.  "How's it possible?  I killed that thing!"  Tyler exclaimed.  "Apparently not!"  I replied.  "W-w-w-w-will, m-m-make it go away!"  Jane stammered. 

  Just then, the glass shattered and the Ferret scrambled onto the plane.  I leaped at it, but suddenly, everything stopped, accept for the Ferret.  I was frozen in mid-leap, and everyone else was in a similar condition.  We were all paused.  The Ferret scrambled to the Pilot's room.  Uh oh.  Once it crawled into the pilot's room, everything started again.  O:  Will!  Get Taylor and Tyler to make a hole large enough for you in the wall of the plane.  Jump out and bring Erik with you!  As you fall, generate 2 balls of electricity and smash them into your thighs!  ;  ARE YOU NUTS?!?  ; Trust me!  ; Okay...  I hope you know what you're doing!  ; Don’t worry.

  "Taylor, Tyler, make that hole bigger!"  I commanded.  "How much bigger?"  They asked.  "Big enough for 2 people."  I answered.  "WHAT?!?"  The entire gang asked in shock.  "What ya'll thinkin, Will?!?"  Jane asked.  "I'm just doing what Ozad says."  I said.  "But... but..."  Jane said,  "I have to do this!"  I exclaimed.  "Okay."  She said.  She pressed her lips against mine, and then said, "Go save the day."  "Okay.  I love you."  I said.  "I love ya, too."  She replied.  "C'mon, Erik.  You're coming with me."  I said.  "Oh no.  I am NOT going to jump out of an air plane!"  Erik protested.  "Okay.  I guess we do this the hard way."  I said.  I grabbed his hair.  "Ah!  Okay, okay!"  He caved.  Taylor and Tyler made a huge hole in the air plane wall, and I dragged Erik out with me. 

(3rd Person!)

  Suddenly, the Air plane started falling out of the sky.  Every second, it fell faster and faster.  Now, everyone on the plane was screaming as if it was the end of the world; for them, it most likely was.  In a minute, impact was only a few seconds away. 

  Just then, the plane began to slow down, until it came to a complete and total stop.  "What happened?"  Kayla asked.  Behind the plane, Erik and Will had dragged the plane to a stop.  They were both glowing a faint golden light; the irises of their eyes glowed red; they were in Super Form.  "You are one CRAZY son of a bitch!"  Erik shouted.  "Watch your language, young man!"  Will scolded him.  Erik mumbled something incoherent about Will's mother.

                   To be continued...    

 

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On June 5th 2008 kissofasia Said :
kissofasia liked it a lot.........you are a good writer...
On June 4th 2008 unreal1298 Said :
unreal1298 woah! what happened!? btw, you are KILLING me with those food descriptions! now i'm hungry for catfish!
On June 4th 2008 piratesrule78 Said :
piratesrule78 OMG *GASPS*
On June 4th 2008 xHickChick789x Said :
xHickChick789x OMG! kmpp