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Electro Static: part 19

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  "Didn't I tell you guys?  We're going into space!"  I exclaimed.  I could have sworn I told them why we were going to Florida SOMEWHERE along the trip.  Serenity, Taylor, and Tyler just stared at me with their jaws nearly on the floor.  "I remember him telling you guys, too."  Kayla said.  "Was it any time between 9 and 10 pm?"  Taylor asked.  "How should I know?"  I asked.  O:  You told them at 9:23 pm"Yeah, it was between 9 and 10."  I said.  "No wonder.  The 3 of us were in the trunk to take care of some 'business'."  Tyler said.  I don't even WANNA know what those 3 were doing in the trunk for an hour.  "Sickos."  I mumbled under my breath.  "So, what kind a business all ya'll takin' care of?"  Jane asked.  "Trust me, you DON'T wanna know."  Erik, Kayla and I told her practically in unison.  "OK."  She said.  How could she not get the picture?  "So wait, why are we going into Space?"  Serenity asked.  "2 reasons:  1.) There's a powerful stone waiting for us, I'll explain that on the trip, and 2.) We're much safer from the GHA if we're in space."  I explained.  The 3 of them just stood their quietly for a while.  We decided to go outside and chill until they'd come to a discision.

  Outside of the place we were being kept in was a moderate sized park.  "Any ya'll wanna push me on the swings?"  Jane asked, already on her way over to the swing set.  I followed her while Erik and Kayla just sorta wandered off to random parts of the park.  Jane jumped on one of the swings and said, "Hey, Will!  How about a push?"  I got behind her and nudged her slightly.  "Come on!  Push me HIGHER!"  She exclaimed as she fell back into me.  I pushed her harder and jumped out of the way.  She began moving back and forth in an arc, but the arc was getting smaller and smaller.  "As you're moving forward, flatten your body as much as you can!  Once you start moving backwards, fold at the waist!  You'll get a lot higher that way."  I instructed her.  I jumped onto the next swing and demonstrated.  She mimiced my motions, and soon we were both swinging really high and in unison.  "Thanks, Will!"  She exclaimed, smiling at me.  "Don't mention it!"  I smiled back.  We kinda just stared at each other for a while as we swung back and forth, back and forth. 

  Suddenly, I heard a faint voice shout out, "Will!"  I snapped back to reality and turned my head.  Erik and Kayla were both running for the swings with wory in their faces.  "What's up?"  I asked.  "We got trouble!  Come see!"  Kayla exclaimed.  I jumped off the swing at its highest point and landed in a spider man position.  I got up and told Jane, "Jump!"  "I can't!  I'm afraid of hights!"  She exclaimed.  "Well, we don't have time for you to just sit there and wait for gravity to bring you down all the way!  Jump!"  I exclaimed.  I could hear screams and explosions now coming from the city.  "I can't!"  Jane replied.  "C'mon!  I'll catch you!"  I told her, holding out my arms.  "Promise?"  She asked.  "I promise!  Now jump!"  I assured her.  "Okay!  Here I go!"  She said, and then she jumped off the seat.

  I could already tell she was gonna fly right over me, so I leaped into the air and snagged her.  (Don't forget, my electric powers can allow me to run really fast and jump uber high!)  We landed in a pile in the grass.  She was on top of me for the most part.  "You okay?"  I asked.  "Yeah, how 'bout ya'll?"  Jane asked.  "I'd be better if someone wasn't on top of me."  I replied.  "Oh, sorry!"  She exclaimed as she rolled off.  We laughed about the whole incident for a few seconds until Kayla and Erik yelled at us to quit fooling around.  Serenity, Taylor, and Tyler came running out to see what was going on. 

  "Come on!  Let's go!"  I exclaimed and started running towards the city on the horizon.  "Hey, wait up!  You know you're faster than any of us!"  Kayla exclaimed.  I ran back and said, "Sorry."  I took Jane's hand in my right hand and Kayla's arm in my left.  "Erik, you can get there in spark form, right?"  I asked.  "You bet!"  He exclaimed, turning into a little spark.  "Don't worry about us, Will.  We're drilloids, remember?  We're fast tunnellers."  Tyler and Taylor said in unison.  They grabbed Serenity by the arms and dug into the ground.  I ran towards the city as fast as I could, and Erik zipped along next to me. 

  "So, Will, how ya'll movin so fast?"  Jane asked.  "I'm an electrode, right?"  I asked.  "Oh, I get it!  Ya'll focus the electric stuff into yer legs so ya'll can move 'em faster!"  She exclaimed.  "Clever... I couldn't even figure it out until someone told me a few weeks ago."  I said.  "Thanks, I get that a lot."  Jane replied. 

  The 7 of us arrived in the city after about 3 minutes.  Everything seemed pretty beat up, and people were fleeing for their lives.  We were barely able to make it through the mass of people.  We finally found the cause of all the destruction:  Dazo. 

  "I thought that would get your attention."  He said, smiling evilly at the 7 of us.  Kayla lit her arms on fire, and I generated 2 electric balls in my hands.  Taylor and Tyler got into fighting positions, and Jane and Serenity just backed away slowly.  Erik came out of spark form.  "What are you doing?  You're more useful to us in spark form!"  I exclaimed.  "Check out what Ozad taught me the other day."  Erik said.  Suddenly, lines of electricity were all over his arms.  "Sweeeet."  I said.  "I think I've allowed you 2 to become a bit too powerful.  I'm here to put you back in your place!"  Dazo exclaimed.  "You've got that backwards, Dazo."  I retorted.  Taylor and Tyler turned their fists into drills and charged at Dazo.  They punched simultaneously, which did absolutely...

  ... nothing.  "What?!?  These things cut through diamond!"  Tyler exclaimed.  Dazo grinned evilly, and then uppercutted them both high into the air.  REALLY high into the air.  High enough that the landing would kill them both.  Then, something, some strange force, caused me to do a bunch of things I thought only Sonic The Hedgehog could do.

  I jumped to the side of me and pushed upwards off of a tall building.  I landed at the top of a tall flag pole, jumped off of that, and snagged Taylor's hand in my right hand.  Once I hit the next tall building, I pushed upward off of it and grabbed Tyler's hand with my left.  I started to come down, so I quickly grabbed onto the flag to slow my fall. 

  "Dude!  How'd you do that?!?"  Erik asked in shock.  Even Dazo looked a bit impressed.  "I'm not sure, I just sort of, well, did it!  I don't even think I was thinking when it happened.  My legs just started moving!"  I exclaimed.  "Bravo, very impressive!  Now, are you 7 ready to die?"  Dazo asked.  "Ready when you are!"  I retorted.  O:  No, Will!  He's too strong!  You saw what he was capable of.  That's only a fraction of a percentage of what he can do!  ;  Don't forget one thing:  We have 2 omni Topazes!  ;  But it takes time to activate them!  You become very vulnerable when you are tapping into their power.  ;  Any way around that?  ;  Actually, yes.  Generate 2 balls of electricity, and crush them in your hands.  This will create a shield of electricity around you for a good 20 seconds, which should be long enough to activate the Topazes.  However, I doubt you can do it alone.  Try getting Erik to do it with you! 

  "Erik!  I need your help."  I said.  "What?"  He asked.  "When I say go, shut your eyes, focus on the Topazes, and visualize something that PISSES YOU OFF."  I asnwered.  "Got it!"  He replied.  I generated the shield, and placed the Topazes on either side of us.  "Now!"  I commanded.  We both shut our eyes, focused, and visualized an angering image. 

(3rd Person!)

  The Topazes slowly lifted into the air and started spinning around Erik and Will.  With each rotation, the stones went faster and faster.  "Oh no you don't!"  Dazo exclaimed, generating 2 black balls of energy in his hands.  He threw them both, but they were completely discinitgrated by the shield.  Dazo ran up to the shield and tried punshing threw it.  He got zapped and soared back a few feet.  At this point, a blinding light was being emmited from the Topazes, which soon engulfed Will, Erik, and everything else for that matter.  "WHOA!  What's with that bright light?!?"  Tyler and Taylor said in unison as they shielded their eyes. 

  The light faded, and Will and Erik were revealed.  A golden light emitted from them, and the irises (is that the plural form of iris?)  of their eyes were red.  Their hair was a golden silver color.  "Shall we get going?"  Will asked.  "Oh yeah!"  Erik replied.  The electric shield was gone.  Will vanished, and appeared 100 yards behind Dazo.  He charged at Dazo at an incredible velocity and shouted, "LOOK OVER HERE!"  Just before impact.  Dazo spun around and got punched in the face, sending him flying towards Erik.  Erik upper cutted him high into the air.  Will flew right above him and kicked him back down to the ground.  Erik generated electricity around his fists and punched Dazo upward.  Will floated a bit to the side and generated a huge electric paddle.  Just as Dazo soard past Will, he smacked Dazo with the paddle as if he were a base ball.  Dazo went flying several hundred yards away.

  He stopped himself in mid-air and said, "Oh, you 2 asked for it!  Time to step up this fight!"  The scars, bruises, and other injuries he had suffered vanished.  A black ball about the size of an oven generated in front of Dazo's face.  "DIE!!!"  He shouted.  Little black slivers of energy rocketed from the ball, raining down on Will, Erik, and the others.  Will quickly generated a shield around Kayla, Serenity, Jane, and the Twins before any of the shards could hit them.  Will and Erik were hit several times, but thanks to their super forms, each one only did slight damage.  However, when you're getting hit by hundreds of slightly damaging shards, the over all effect could be devestating.  By the end of the storm, they were both on their hands and knees, and were bleeding in several places.  Dazo flew behind Erik, punched him hard, and sent him crashing into Will.  They collided into a tall building, creating a lot of smoke and debris in the air.

  "WILL!!! ERIK!!!"  Kayla and Serenity shouted in unison.  "I'll handle this!"  Jane exclaimed, aiming both of her arms where Erik and Will had crashed.  Suddenly, 2 streaks of golden light shot from the smoke and collided into Dazo.  The 2 streaks split apart, the right one making a clockwise circle and the other making a counter-clockwise circle.  They stopped just before they collided, and they turned out to be Will and Erik. 

  "Thanks, Jane!"  Will exclaimed, turning to face her.  "Ya'll don't need to mention it."  She replied.  "Grrrrr... This isn't the end!"  Dazo shouted, and then vanished.  Will and Erik converted back into their normal forms, and Will picked up the topazes and stuffed them into his pockets. 

 (Will's point of view!)

  The shield around the others faded into nothingness.  "That was incredibly, dudes!"  Taylor and Tyler shouted.  "Yeah!  You were like, pow!  and then Erik was like, bang!  It was AWESOME!!!"  Kayla exclaimed.  "You totally owned that dude!"  Tyler said.  "Well, we couldn't have done it without Jane."  I replied.  I looked at Jane and said, "Thanks again.  You did great!"  She looked down, blushed, and giggled. 

  Suddenly, she started to look worried.  "Any ya'll got a watch or somethin'?"  She asked.  "No, but my cell phone tells time.  Let's see... 4:03 pm."  Kayla answered.  "Oh no oh no oh no... I have to get back to mah parent's time share!  Any ya'll know a faster way to get back over yonder than runnin'?"  Jane asked.  "Of course."  I replied.  I gripped my necklace and shouted, "OMNISCIENT SUMMONING!!!"  We all appeared back in the park around the house we'd been in.  There was a car in the drive way that hadn't been there before.  "Oh no oh no oh no...  You guys stay out here, okay?"  Jane told us, and slowly approached the door.  She opened it, walked inside, and quickly shut the door behind her.  After a minute, the 6 of us heard shouting, but the walls were thick and muffled out what the shouter was saying.  It sounded like a drunk middle aged man. 

  When she came out of the house, she looked pretty beaten up.

                         To be continued...     

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On May 26th 2008 unreal1298 Said :
unreal1298 uh oh.. I HATE bad cliffhangers! Nice story!
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