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Electro Static: part 14

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  "What do we do?!?"  Lauren asked as the giant stone stegasauras approached us.  O:  Try the thing you did back at the Geneton Base!  ;  You're sure?  ;  I don't see any other option.  I generated 2 balls of electricity in my hands and smashed them together above my head.  I focused on enlarging it, and as it expanded, it pushed my hands outward.  Once I thought it was large enough to damage the monster, I chucked the ball as hard as I could.  The giant ball of electricity hit the monster right in the forehead...

  And did nothing at all.  "Dummy!  It's a rock!  Electricity won't have any effect!"  Erik reminded me.  "Oh, riiiight.  Well in that case, RUN!"  I shouted.  I grabbed both their arms and ran like the dickens out of there.  "Will!  Flagstaff's that way!"  Lauren shouted as she pointed north.  "I know!  You think I'd lead that thing straight to civilization?  You're crazy!"  I exclaimed.  The beast was now running top-speed towards us. "You just realized?"  Erik asked.  "Yeah I cwazy."  Lauren said.  "What about the Topaz?  Can't we use that?"  Erik asked.  "No, Ozad said that it still needs to charge!"  I exclaimed. 

Meanwhile...

  "What's their status?"  The general asked one of his soldiers.  "Experiment 324 is currently in pursuit of the 2 Genetons and their companion."  The soldier answered.  "Good.  It's immune to electric attacks, correct?"  The general asked.  "That is correct, sir."  The soldier answered.  "Hehehe.  Nothing can save them now."  The general said.

Back to Will and co.!

  W:  Ozad!  Now would be a good time for a bit of help!  ;  There is one way to defeat it...  ;  HOW?!?  ;  Unfortunately, it involves something that only I WAS  capable of.  ;  Real helpful, Ozad.  ;  Sarcasm?  ;  Yup.  Suddenly, powerful dust storms came at us in all directions.  On reflex, I covered my face with my arms.  However, this turned out to be a mistake, seeing as I had to let go of Lauren and Erik to do that.  And, seeing as we had forward momentum, they most likely went flying!  "GUYS!"  I shouted.  "WILL!!! HELP!!!"  Lauren shouted.  "HEEEELP!!!"  Erik shouted. 

  Suddenly, something really hard crashed into my back!  "AAAAH!"  I shouted in pain, and fell to the ground.  Then, something really heavy landed on my leg, trapping me.  CRUNCH!   Pain shot up my leg and through my entire body.  I felt as though every bone in my foot and leg had been crushed into powder.  The pain was terrible, and I couldn't help but scream at the top of my lungs.  "WILL!!! HE---"  Lauren shouted, but her voice came to a sudden stop, along with a loud crash.  "LAUREN!"  I shouted.  No responce.  "ERIK!"  I shouted.  "OVER HE---"  His voice was also silenced by a crash.  There weren't any screams of agony and pain, just silence.  (Besides the crashing foot steps of the monster that was headed our way.)  The sadness that filled my body was aweful... as was the rage, and hate, and anger that was filling me rather quickly

(3rd person.)

  Will's eyes glowed pure black.  O:  Will!  Control yourself!  "Why?  Thissss thing hassss killed Lauren and Erik.  Why ssssshouldn't I unleasssssh my full potential?"  Will asked, but it was Shadow's voice doing the talking.  O:  Shadow!  Stop this madness!  "Who'sssss Ssssshadow?  I'm Will, remember?"  Will/Shadow asked.  O:  Will!  I know you're in there somewhere!  Fight him!  Don't let him control you!  "Foolisssssh Ozad.  Will is under my control."  Will/Shadow said.  He gripped the necklace in his hand.  O:  Will!  Don't you dare do what I think your about to do!  Will/Shadow ripped the necklace off of his neck.  O:  NO!  "YESSSSS!!!"  Will/Shadow shouted.  Every feature of Will's body became completely black;  Shadow was free.

  Shadow smashed the rock that had fallen on his leg, and then rose into the air.  "HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!  MUAHAHAHAHAHA!!!"  Shadow cackled.  He lifted both his arms into the air, and the sand in the air cleared.  "Now... DIE!!!"  Shadow shouted as he aimed one arm at the monster.  Black sparks of electricity flowed through his arm, and a black ball of energy formed in his hand.  The ball grew to be about the size of a car tire.  A beam of black energy shot from the ball, and made a hole straight through the monster.  GYAAAAAAOOOOOOO!!!  It shouted in pain.  Though there was a hole in it, it was still alive and ready to fight.  It charged at Shadow at top speed.  "Foolissssssh animal!"  Shadow exclaimed.  He lowered so he was level with the creature's head.  The creature continued to keep running.

  It came to an instant stop an inch away from Shadow's hand.  It's head was crushed by the sudden stop.  Dazo floated down next to Shadow and said, "Impressive."  "Thank you, masssssster Dazo."  Shadow replied.  "Master?  HA!"  Ozad exclaimed as he flickered into existence before the 2.  "What are you doing here, Ozad?"  Dazo asked, hatred filling his voice.  "Shadow, tell him what you told me about what you think of him."  Ozad said to Shadow.  "What's he talking about?"  Dazo asked.  "I believe you called him an incompetant fool who doesn't know what he could have been, correct?"  Ozad asked.  "Is that so?"  Dazo asked Shadow.  "Of coursssse not.  You cannot trussssst him, masssssster.  Remember all the turmoil he put you through.  How you alwayssssss lived in his ssssshadow, and how he cccccieled you in the dimmensssssssion worssssse than the pitsssss of hell!  He issssss the enemy."  Shadow answered.  "Enough talk.  Shadow, return to where you came!"  Ozad commanded.  The necklace flew over to Shadow and rapped itself around his neck. 

  Shadow just grinned.  He put his hand around the necklace and said, "Thissssss pathetic rock can't contain me any longer!"  He crushed the gem on the necklace in his hand, and then let the crushed pieces fall to the ground.  Ozad became wide eyed and asked, "HOW?!?"  "MUAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!  Don't you get it?  I've been growing more powerful every sssssecond, ever ssssinccccce I took over the firsssssst Ozzzzzzadian in the Alpha Quadrant!"  "You're more of a fool than I thought, Ozad.  I can't believe you didn't see this coming!"  Dazo taunted.  "Of courssssss, I will never become assssss powerful as massssster Dazo."  Shadow continued.  "Kiss up."  Ozad muttered.

  Dazo looked down at Erik's and Lauren's bodies and said, "Such a shame.  They were so young too!  Oh well, circle of life as you would say, Ozad."  Ozad clenched his fists hard together.  For the first time in his existence, he was feeling true rage towards his brother.  "Shadow, dispose of those bodies."  Dazo commanded.  "Asssss you wisssssh, masssssster."  Shadow said, and flew down to Erik and Lauren.  Ozad started after him, but then Dazo stopped him in his tracks.  "How are you doing this, Dazo?"  Ozad asked.  "You're weak, Ozad.  You've always been weak."  Dazo answered.  "I overcame you AND your slaves, Trayzon, Covax, and Vinthrol by myself."  Ozad reminded him.  "A simple fluke.  It could have happened to anybody."  Dazo replied.

  Shadow landed a few feet away from Erik and Lauren.  He generated 2 balls of black energy in his hands.  However, before he could fire them, he stopped.  "Whatsssss... happening... to... me?  I... can't... move!"  W:  No!  I won't let you harm them  Will exclaimed from somewhere in Shadow's mind.  "You... fool... they... are... already... dead!"  ?:  Not if I can do anything about it!  A new voice exclaimed.  "Flasssssh!"  Shadow exclaimed.  F:  I'm taking over for now!  "No...  NO!"  Shadow shouted. 

  Suddenly, his black eyes began glowing white!  "NOOOO!!!"  Shadow shouted.  The blackness faded away, and was replaced by pure white.  "Take that, Shadow!"  The white being exclaimed.  He flew over to Dazo and demanded him to release Ozad.  "What have you done to Shadow?"  Dazo asked.  "My bro is too busy FLOATING IN OBLIVION!  Would you like to join him?"  The white being asked.  "Grrr... very well.  You win for now."  Dazo said, and then vanished.  "Thank you, Flash."  Ozad said, "Don't mention it, Ozad!  I owe ya one, remember?"  Flash asked.  "For what?"  Ozad asked.  "For making me!  Duh!"  Flash exclaimed.  "Ah yes, now I remember."  Ozad said.

  Flash flew down to Erik and Lauren and lifted his arms in the air.  The rocks that had crushed most of their bodies flew high into the air.  Flash aimed both his arms at them, and beams of white light shot at them from his hands.  The wounds they had healed, and then the 2 of them rose to their feet.  "I'm alive?  I'M ALIVE!"  Erik shouted.  "YAAAY!!!"  Lauren shouted, and started jumping up and down and clapping.  "WOO!"  Erik shouted. 

  Flash then flew to the spot where the pieces of the necklace had fallen.  He pointed towards the pile of rubble, and it started floating into the air.  The bits and pieces reunited, and a string appeared to make a necklace.  The necklace wrapped itself around Flash's neck.  "Well, smell ya later, Ozad!"  Flash exclaimed.  "Until next time."  Ozad replied.  Flash's white body began to fade into colors, until he was gone and Will was standing there.  "I'd look behind you if I were you."  Ozad told him.  Will obeyed, and saw Erik and Lauren looking at him.  "ERIK!  LAUREN!"  Will shouted, and ran over to them.  The 3 of them wrapped their arms around each other.  "I thought you guys were dead!"  Will exclaimed behind tears of joy.  "So did we!"  lauren and erik replied.

  After they pulled away from each other, Ozad flew down next to Will.  "So, is this Ozad?" Erik asked.  Ozad nodded.  "I LIKE YOUR HAIR!!! IT'S CRAZY!!!"  Lauren shouted.  "So, this is Ozad, eh?  He's just like you described him, Will!"  Erik exclaimed.  "I described him?"  Will asked.  "Before you lost your memories."  Erik said.  "So you weren't going totally insane when you said a voice inside your head was telling you what to do?"  Lauren asked.  "Yup."  Will and Erik said.  "Well, I must go.  It was a pleasure to meet you."  Ozad said, looking at Lauren.  "EEE!"  Lauren exclaimed, waving goodbye.  Ozad then slowly faded away. 

(Will's point of view.)

  O:  Ah, if feels so much better to be in your head!  It's difficult making myself visible in the real world.  ;  I'd imagine it would be!  Wait... where's the rock monster?  ;  Shadow killed it.  ;  Shadow?  ;  The very definition of evil.  ;  He can't be too bad if he saved our asses.  ;  He tried to kill me, Lauren, and Erik, AND he works with Dazo.  ;  Dazo?  ;  Oh right, you don't remember him either.  Dazo is incredibly evil.  ;  It sounds like your name backwards.  ;  He's my brother.  ;  Oh.  This was even more confusing than before!  Ozad has an evil brother?  A person is the definition of evil?  It was so confuzling.  "Ugh... my brain hurts."  I muttered.  "IT'S GONNA BLOW!!!"  Lauren shouted.  Erik and I just laughed.  "That was so random!"  Erik exclaimed.  "I know!" Lauren exclaimed, smiling. 

  "Well guys, since the monster's gone, let's get to Flagstaff!"  I exclaimed.  "Alright!"  Erik said enthusiastically.  "YAAAY!"  Lauren shouted.  I grabbed their arms and ran towards the city of Flagstaff.

Meanwhile at the GHA HQ...

  A soldier ran into the General's room with a worried look on his face.  "What is the status of Will and his friends?"  The general asked.  "They're heading for Flagstaff, sir."  the soldier answered.  The general jumped from his seat and shouted, "WHAT ABOUT EXPERIMENT 324?!?"  "I'm sorry, sir, but experiment 324 has been destroyed by Will."  The soldier answered.  "How?  That thing was immune to electric abilities!"  The general exclaimed.  "We don't know, sir."  The soldier said.  "You people make me sick!  That's it!  I'm going to Flagstaff myself to kill them!  Prepare the telepod!"  The general commanded.  "Yes, sir!"  The soldier shouted, and ran out of the room.  "You WILL die, Will.  You and your friends."  The general said.

                                                        To be continued... 

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On May 7th 2008 unreal1298 Said :
unreal1298 okay. Ozad's evil brother dazo was against shadow, but teamed up with him, but was killed, but dazo is still against ozad and william and co., who are against the GHA, who are against Dazo, who is against Ozad as well as william co and the GHA? It's a triangle of againstness!!!! CONFUZLING!!!!!!
On May 6th 2008 piratesrule78 Said :
piratesrule78 I GET IT ITS NOT CONFUSING LUVING THE STORY PLZ KMP
On May 5th 2008 williamscott7 Said :
williamscott7 Sorry if some parts of it are a bit confusing! I'm a bit confused myself! If you don't get something, copy the part you don't get and paste it onto a message to me, along with your question. I'll try to answer your questions as soon as possible!