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Electro Static: part 35
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Electro Static: part 32
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Electro Static: part 31
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The Traveler (re-written!)
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Electro Static: part 30
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Electro Static: part 29
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Electro Static: part 28
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Electro Static: part 27
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Electro Static RECAP
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Electro Static: part 26
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Electro Static: part 25
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Electro Static: part 20

Electro Static [4]

Science Created on 4-24-08 Views(57) Story Rating G

  There were 3 paths for us to take:  Forward, right, and left.  "So, which way do we go?"  Erik asked.  Left, Will. Left!  Ozad urged me.  "This way."  I said, running down the left corridor.  Turn here.  Right turn here.  Left again!  Up the stairs!  Faster!  Faster!  Right!  Left!  Ozad directed us as we ran through the long maze.  Faster!  They're coming!  "I can't go any faster!"  I exclaimed.  Yes you can!  "My legs are killing me as it is!"  I complained.  Strengthen the electrical impulses going to your legs!  That should give you an extra burst of speed!  Ozad said.  "Okay, here goes nothing!"  I replied.  I directed any electricity in my body that wasn't used for the most vital things straight to my legs. 

  Suddenly, I was going 20mph!  Or at least, it sure felt like it.  "Will, wait up!"  I heard Erik shout to me.  I screeched to a stop, and ran back in the opposite direction.  "Sorry about that!"  I apologized.  I then grabbed his arm, and ran off.  Right!  Up the elevator...  CAN'T THIS THING GO ANY FASTER?!?  I suppose we'll have to be patient.  Ozad said as we ascended.  Music was playing, but I couldn't recognize what it was.  Suddenly, Erik started singing the words to it!  "Bang bang maxwell silver hammer came down upon her head!  Bang bang maxwell silver hamer made sure that she was dead!"  I stared at him.  "Uh..."  Was all I was able to say.  "What?"  He asked.  "It's so sad that you would sing along to elevater music."  I replied.  "I like this song!" He defended.  "Well I don't, so don't get it stuck in my head!"  I exclaimed.

  3 minutes later, I caught myself singing, "Bang bang maxwell silver hammer came down upon her head!"  "Gosh dangit, Erik!  Why did you have to sing that song?!?"  I asked.  "Sorry."  The words kept repeating in my head over and over again!  "Ozad, talk to me!  Anything to distract me from this song!"  I complained.  I actually find pleasure in the song.  Keep thinking it!  "Ah crap."  I said, putting my face in my right hand.  Bang bang maxwell silver hammer wouldn't stop!

  FINALLY, we got to the top of the elevater, and were greeted by a bunch of officers with guns.  "Now what do we do, Ozad?"  I asked.  Bang bang maxwell silver hammer came down upon...  "OZAD!  FOCUS!!!"  I shouted.  Oh, sorry.  "Come with us back to your cell."  One of the cops said.  Tell Erik to get us out of here!  Ozad exclaimed.  I suddenly realized that the elevater was one big conductor.  "Erik, get us out of here.  The elevater and cable are conductors!"  I whispered to Erik.  Erik grabbed my arm and touched the  wall of the elevater.

  We were on the floor right beneath the one we'd been on.  "C'mon, let's go!"  I exclaimed.  I grabbed hold of his arm and ran as fast as I could.  Turn right!  Now left!  There!  Stairs!  Hurry!  bang bang maxwe--- "SHUT UP ABOUT THE SILVER HAMMER!!!"  I shouted.  I hope you realize that you gave away our position just now.  "Aw sonofakecheeker."  I said.  "son of a what?"  Erik asked.  "kecheekers."  I replied.  "Okay... you're weird."  Erik said.  "At least I don't sing along to elevater music."  I retorted.  "Yeah well... screw you."  "OWNED!"  I exclaimed.  Humans have become so strange over the last 6000 years

  About half way up the stares, I could see a few cops waiting for us at the top.  With my free hand, I generated 4 balls of electricity and threw them as hard as I could.  Each one hit its mark, and the cops fell over unconscious.  "Pathetic."  I said, as I ran over their bodies.  "Which way, Ozad?"  I asked.  Just keep moving forward.  I kept running, while Ozad was singing Bang bang maxwell silver hammer.  "Why couldn't you be in Erik's head?"  I asked.  I could if you like.  "Yes, please!"  I replied.  "Uh, Will?  What are you doing?"  Erik asked.  Suddenly, Ozad's voice ciesed.  "What the?  Ozad?"  Erik asked all of a sudden.  "Okay, you can stop singing now."  Erik said.  "Feel free to stop at any time."  He said.  "Okay, seriously, stop."  "Ozad, I'm serious!  Shut up!"  Erik exclaimed.  "Could you go back to Will by any chance?"  Erik asked.  He then glared at me and said, "I hate you so much right now."

  Finally, we made it to the last flight of stares.  There was only one problem:  The metal doors were shut, blocking our way.  "Now what do we do?"  I asked.  "Ozad says to touch the door and zap it until it does something."  Erik replied after a minute.  "Seriousely?"  I asked.  Normally, Ozad was a bit more specific.  "Not exactly.  I was just confuzled by what he said."  Erik replied.  "Okay, Ozad, come back."  I said.  Yes?  "How do we get through?"  I asked.  Place both hands on the door.  Then, send electricity through it and focus on the door opening.  "You were confused by THAT?!?"  I asked Erik in shock and disgust.  "I'm not a nerd like you."  Erik replied.  "You don't need to be a nerd to understand THAT."  I defended. 

  I did as Ozad said, and soon we heard the turning of gears and the door opened, along with every other metal door up the flight of stairs.  "Sweet."  Erik said.  Run, Will.  Run!  I grabbed Erik's arm, and ran up the stairs, into the lobby, and out the door.  "Shoot, how do we get across the fence?"  I asked.  We were blocked by a barbed wire fence, and I could hear the foot steps of running police officers making their way up the stairs.  "Let me handle that."  Erik said.  He touched the fence, and turned himself and I into electricity, and we popped out on the other side.  "Let's go!"  I exclaimed, and started running.  "Dude?  20 mph isn't fast enough to get us out of the desert."  Erik said, and I came to a stop.  "So, what do we do?"  I asked.  Turn your head to the left.  I did, and a smile creeped on my face.  I police officer had forgotten to roll up the window to his car.  "Don't you think that's a bit too convenient?" Erik asked.  You can thank me for that.  "How did you have anything to do with this?"  I asked.  My mind control abilities have recharged a bit since my last battle.  

  I hopped into the driver's seat, and Erik went around and got in the passenger's side.  I used my electric abilities to hot wire the vehicle, and in a minute we were going 200 through the desert.  That speed was also thanks to my gift.  The other cops would NEVER catch us.  Bang bang max---  "Hey!  Why don't you occupy Erik for a while?"  I asked.  "No!"  Erik shouted.  The singing stopped.  "You suck."  Erik said, pouting. 

  "Wait, we're only 13!  We can't drive!"  Erik exclaimed.  "Your dad never let you try?  Pathetic."  I said. 

  In a minute, we were back in the city, and I slowed down to 35.  "Ozad says we should try to find a deserted place to live from now on.  He says it isn't safe in the city."  Erik said.  "Okay, let me just return home and say bye and pack my stuff."  I replied.  NO!  "What?  I'm just going to go home."  I said.  "Maybe we should ditch the car somewhere.  We don't want to get pulled over.  We're only 13!"  Erik suggested.  "Okay."  I said.  I parked in front of game stop, and Erik and I jumped out.  I grabbed his arm and ran as fast as I could home.  

  Home is the LAST place you want to go right now!  "Shut up, Ozad.  I'm not going to leave them without saying good bye."  Will, you should really listen to me on this one!  Do NOT return home!  "Quiet, Ozad.  I don't know about you, but I don't plan on just abandoning the people I care about."  I replied.  We got to my neighborhood.  We REALLY should just find a deserted place to settle!  Trust me on this!  "Shut up!  For the last time, I am NOT going to abandon them!"  I shouted.  Fine.  I didn't want to be the one to break this to you.  In fact, I was hoping it WOULDN'T be broken to you.  But, you leave me no choice.  "What are you talking about?"  I asked.  Your family is dead.  I screeched to a sudden stop.  "What we stop for?"  Erik asked.  "You're lying!" I exclaimed.  I can not tell a lie.  I am not like my brother, Dazo.  "No!  You're wrong!"  I replied, and ran faster than I thought possible. 

  You know, maybe it would have been wise to listen to Ozad the first time.  It would have saved me A LOT of grief.  The door had been kicked down, and my family had been slaughtered in ways that I'm not going to describe;  It would make me sick, and would most likely make you sick, too.  I'll just say that it was terrible.  I never thought that it was possible for people to die in such terrible ways.  I fell to the floor and cried.  I warned you.  "Who did this?"  I asked through my tears.  The GHA.  They wanted to make sure that no one would come looking for you.  It's time like this that I regret making friends with the neighbors.  Erik's family is gone, too

(3rd person!)

  Will's eyes glew black.  Erik didn't notice, seeing as Will was on the ground at the moment.  "Will, are you okay?"  Erik asked, his voice full of compassion and concern.  "Hehehehe... I've never felt better in all my life!"  Will exclaimed.  His voice was different; It sounded like it had been combined with the voice of a snake.  "What the?"  Erik said, backing away.  Will rose to his feet, and now Erik could clearly see his black eyes.  "HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!"  He lauched meniacally.  "What's going on?!?"  Erik asked in terror.  Everything in the room started shaking, and some things fell to the floor.  Pictures fell, and shattered.  Darkness pulsed from Will, and when it ciesed, Will's body had turned entirely black.  "HAHAHAHAHAHAHA!  MUAHAHAHA!!!"  "WHAT'S HAPPENING?!?"  Erik shouted.  "What a little fool Will is!  He should have listened to Ozad when he had the chance!  Now it's too late!  OMNISCIENT SUMMONING!!!"  The new, evil Will shouted.  He vanished.

  "What just happened?!?"  Erik asked.  It's Shadow!  He's free once again!  "Who's shadow?"  Erik asked.  The very definition of EVIL.  

                                           To be continued...     

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On April 27th 2008 piratesrule78 Said :
piratesrule78 omg omg omg loved it
On April 25th 2008 unreal1298 Said :
unreal1298 bang bang maxwel silver hamm - GOSH DANGIT!!! NOT ME TOO!!! sux shadow's back.. now there's no one to stop him.
On April 24th 2008 williamscott7 Said :
williamscott7 If you people can't tell by now that all 4 of my series are interconnected, I pitty you.