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I walked into the dinning room with Dylan on my hip and Lucy dragging me by the hand. "wow everything looks so good." Donald came up beside me.
"well its all to feed these animals." he said joking. "but i do want to go to school to become a chef."
"well good for you. if you need any help with anything just let me know."
"ok. so guys sit down! be good!"
"hey Donald can we eat now?!?" Max yelled across the table.
"yeah i guess."
just then somebody walked through the door. "kids im home! hey Donald, whos this?"
"hi mom. this is Hayley, she and her dad got into a fight, so i told her she couls stay here until things die down."
"ok as long as nothing happenes between you two. ok?"
"ok."
"thank you for letting me stay."
"your welcome dear." she patted my cheeck.
"ok so i guess i'll show around." he grapped my arm and pulled me torwards the stairs. we walked up the stairs for two flights and stopped at a door. we stared at it for a while.
"so what are we supposed to do? just stand here and stare?"
"no its just last time i brought a girl home, this is as far as she made it before she ran out the door."
i put my hand on his shoulder. "don't worry i'll never run out that door. i don't want to go back there." he leaned and pecked me softly on the lips. he opened the door and led me in.
*Authors Note* sry its short. tell me what you think.
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| On February 3rd 2008 Carey2010 Said : | |
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aww... Can you please keep me posted!? I really like your writing!! Thank you! |
| On February 3rd 2008 xxdarkprincess Said : | |
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i like it kmp please |
| On February 2nd 2008 J3w3llC82890 Said : | |
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...stare....*cough cough* donald....
kmp!!
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| On January 30th 2008 Lemonkiss7 Said : | |
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fun i like it hehe kmp |
| On January 28th 2008 EvilRaven9892 Said : | |
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i loves it and its really good kmp plz |
| On January 26th 2008 foxridergirl09 Said : | |
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its soooo good :D good job pkmp |


