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Lovers Lane ~1~ |
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Chained Vibrations: ~Chapter 1~ : |
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Lovers Lane ~1~
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Chapter ~1~ :
"Push her , push her Tivally" Brittany said even though Annabelle had only been here a small while she senced there was something wrong aside from the signs of the fights , tripping , snickers and etc of everyone around her yea this would have been pretty good . She stummbled down hitting the pavement with a heavy thud , she layed there motionless but breathing.
" Tivally " Brittany said with asound of consern which to Annabelle sounded like a pig gagging on a peice of corn " Tivally what did you do to her ? ".
Out of the crowd came pushing "Excuse me , give way please" someone who seem to care , Annabelle prays its not one of those evil little twits that have come to ramage around in her life like Brittany and Tivally.
"Hey are you ok , who did this ?" he kneelt to Belle and parted her dark hair away then slowly whispered in her ear " Can you hear me ?" , she tried to move but somethings got ahold of her , it was one of those black outs she had where she's consious but has no control over her body but still not a seizer.
"Brittany" he said looking up at her " It was you wasnt it " , " Me !!?? " she yelled furiously " Oh no it aint me this time it was Tivally" she ratted pointing Tivally's way , " Me your the one who told me to do it " she announced " I told you to do nothing stop lieing " she shot back angryly at Tivally for giving her away as she tried to cover up .
"Look it doesnt matter who did it now we have to take her to the nurse , Brittany I thought you were low but I didnt know you would go so far and not just because she's new here" he glared at her his brunette-blonde hair in his way he just flashed it away "Dont worry everything will be ok" he said smiling at her as he picked her up and headed off to the nurses office.
"She'll be ok now" the nurse said to him "It was good of you to bring her in" she said kindly as she stepped outside.
"You know you scared me there" he said half smiling , "Sorry I didnt know what was about to happen" she said nervously , he glanced at her "You ok now ?" , "Yea I'm fine thanks for even noticing" trying to be convincing " Ok and if theres anything else I can do to help dont hesitate , see you" he said and almost out the door he said " By the way I'm Damian"
Does She Have A Good Thing Going ?
By: Vivia G. Thompson
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| On March 13th 2008 xxXrareloveXx Said : | |
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I LIKE IT . KMP! |
| On February 12th 2008 vanique Said : | |
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Yea lol I know I was confused when I was writin too but I'll do betta next time |
| On February 11th 2008 eldestgoddess Said : | |
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I agree with SilentNoise it is a bit confusing. You need more structure. Also, use a program that has grammar and Spellcheck it saves you less work. All in all it as a good plot to it. So kmp. |
| On February 10th 2008 XSilentNoiseX Said : | |
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a lil confusing, but good. kmp |


